八年级英语上册Unit1FriendsTask课件牛津版.ppt

Unit1FriendsTask,2019/12/6,Teenagersmagazineisinvitingteenagerstowriteabouttheirbestfriendsforthewritingcompetition.,2019/12/6,Whatwouldyouliketowriteaboutyourfriend?,Futureplans_,Looks_,Personality_,.,Myfriend,Hobbies_,2019/12/6,WhoisDanielsbestfriend?,WhendidDanielfirstmeether?,Whatdoesshelooklike?,Whatwouldsheliketobewhenshegrowsup?,Whatsshelike?,Kate,fiveyearsago,beateacher,friendly,helpful,patient,tallandslim,Readandanswer,KateisDanielsbestfriend.,Kateslooks,Katespersonality,Katesfutureplans,Introduction,Mainbody,Conclusion,Structureofthearticle,2019/12/6,Kateisbothmyneighbourandmybestfriend.Ifirstmetherfiveyearsago.,Paragraph1,1.Introduction,Whichsentencecanweuse?,2019/12/6,Kateistallandslim.Shehaslonghair.Shehasaroundfaceandasmallnose.Ilikeherbrightsmilingeyes.Theymakeherlookreallyprettyandkind.,Paragraph2,Findthedetails(细节)aboutherlooks.,2.Looks,distinguishingfeatures（特征）,figure(体型),Whichsentencetellsthemainidea?,Detailshelpthereader“see”theperson.,2019/12/6,Kateisafriendlygirl.Shealwayshasasmileonherfaceandlookshappy.Shelikestohelppeople.Shehelpsmewithmyhomeworkandsheisverypatient.WhenIfeelboredorunhappy,Ioftengotoher.Shewilltalktomeandtellmeinterestingthings.,Paragraph3,Whatisshelike?,3.Personality,friendly,patient.,help,Shealwayshasasmile,onherfaceandlookshappy.,Shehelpsmewithmyhomework,unhappy,Ioftengotoher.Shewilltalktomeandtellmeinterestingthings.,WhenIfeelboredor,atopicsentence,supportingdetails,+,(helpthereaderunderstandherpersonality),2019/12/6,Katewantstoworkwithchildren.Shewouldliketobeateacherwhenshegrowsup.Ithinkshewillmakeanexcellentteacher.,Paragraph4,Whichsentencecanweuse?,4.Futureplans,2019/12/6,Shareyourwriting,Writestep-by-step,Chooseatopic,Collectdetails(细节),Writeafirstdraft(草稿)：,Abeginning+amiddle+anending,Improveyourwriting(改进),Checkforerrors,Writeafinalcopy,Howtowrite?,2019/12/6,Chooseatopic/Collectdetails(细节),1.Chooseonepersontowriteabout.,2.Makeadetailchartlikethis.,Topic:,Looks,Personality,Otherinformation,tall,thin,asquareface,bigbrighteyes,shortstraighthair,tellfunnyjokes,nevertelllies,wanttobeasocialworker,humorous,honest,Tom,2019/12/6,Facelongroundsquaresmall.Eyesbigsmallroundbrightsmiling.Nosebigsmalllongshortstraight.Hairblackdarkbrownlongshortstraight.Looksbeautifulprettygood-lookinghandsomelovelycuteshorttallfatslimsmartstrong.,Usewordstohelpreaders“see”whoyouaredescribing.,He/Sheis_and_.He/Shehas_.He/Shehas_and_.Ilikehis/her_.Theymakehim/herlookreally_.,2019/12/6,Usesentencestohelpreadersunderstandthepersonalitybetter.,cleversmartpolitefriendlykindpatienthard-workinghelpfulhonest.,Sometimeshepullsafunnyface(做鬼脸)andmakesmelaughuntilmystomachhurts.,Ioftentellheraboutmyschool,myfriendsandmyfamily.Shealwaystellsmeherhonestopinionsaboutthings.Iliketosharemyjoywithher.,Sheiswillingtosharethingswithpeopleandreadytohelppeopleinneedanytime.,generous,humorous,true,Matchthepersonalitywiththesupportingdetails.,2019/12/6,Writeafirstdraft(草稿)：,Abeginning+amiddle+anending,usethedetailstodescribetheperson,shareafinalthought,tellwhothewritingisabout,Tomisbothmyclassmateandmybestfriend.Tomistallandslim.Hehaveasquareface.Hehasbigeyesandshortstraighthair.Heoftenwearsahat.Tomisahonestboy.Heisahumorousboy.Icanalwaystrusthim.Henevertellslie.Hesreadytohelpothersanytime.Hisfatherteacheshimhowtoplaytennis.hetellsmejokes.Hewouldliketobeasocilworkerwhenhegrowsup,Ithinkhewillmakeagoodsocialworker.,Dontworryaboutthemistakes!,2019/12/6,Improveyourwriting,Talkwithapartner,ResponseSheet(反馈表),Writer:_,Listener:_,Title_,1.WhatIlikeaboutyourwriting:,2.QuestionsIhave:,_,_,Onereadsyourwritingoutloud,theotherteammemberslistencarefullyandtellwhattheylikeandaskquestions.,2019/12/6,2.Icanalwaystrusthim.Henevertellsalie.,3.Heisahumorousboy.Hetellsmejokes.,Trytomakethesesentencesbetter.,Icanalwaystrusthimbecausehenevertellsalie.,Hehasagoodsenseofhumourandoftentellsmefunnyjokes.,usesentencesofdifferentlengths(长度),(short),(long),1.Heoftenwearsahat.,Heoftenwearsabluebaseballhat.,(notclear),(clear),Improveyourwriting,Rewriteparts,usespecificwords,2019/12/6,Checkforerrors,Tomistallandslim.Hehaveasquareface.Hehasbigbrighteyesandshortstraighthair.Heoftenwearsabluebaseballhat.Helookshandsome.,Tomisahonestboy.Icanalwaystrusthimbecausehenevertellslie.Hesreadytohelpothersanytime.hehasagoodsenseofhumourandoftentellsmefunnyjokes.,Tomoftenlistenstootherpeoplecarefullyandhelpsthemsolvetheirproblems.Hewouldliketobeasocilworkerwhenhegrowsup,Ithinkhewillmakeagoodsocialworker.,an,a,He,.,social,has,Punctuation(标点)Capitalization(大写)GrammarerrorSpelling,Tomisbothmyclassmateandmybestfriend.,2019/12/6,_,Tomisbothmyclassmateandmybestfriend.,Tomoftenlistenstootherpeoplecarefullyandhelpsthemsolvetheirproblems.Hewouldliketobeasocialworkerwhenhegrowsup,Ithinkhewillmakeagoodsocialworker.,Useyourbesthandwriting,Tomistallandslim.Hehasasquareface.Hehasbigbrighteyesandshortstraighthair.Heoftenwearsabluebaseballhat.Helookshandsome.,Tomisanhonestboy.Icanalwaystrusthimbecausehenevertellsalie.Hesreadytohelpothersanytime.Hehasagoodsenseofhumouran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