建议信.ppt

9.建议信,建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常包括：1.说明写信目的。2.提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。3.表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。,文体概述,常用语块1.给某人提建议_2.如下_3.在做某事时遇到困难_4.利用_5.向某人征求意见_,asksb.foradvice,givesb.someadvice(on),asfollows,havedifficulty/troubleindoingsth.,makeuseof,6.制订计划_7.认为有用_8.参加_9.听从某人的建议_10.把考虑在内_,oaccount/consideration,makeaplan,findhelpful/useful/beneficial,takepartin/participatein,followonesadvice,11.得到改善_12.有所好转_13.依我看来_14.我已收到你的来信，得知你_15.我建议_,Iwouldliketosuggestthat/Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat/Iamwritingtoadviseyouof/IfIwereyou,Iwould/MayIsuggestthat/Iwouldliketoputforwardthesuggestionthat,getimproved,changeforthebetter,inmyopinion/inmyview/frommypointofview,Ihavereceivedyourlettersayingthatyou,套用句式1.你就向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。2.我觉得如果能够将会很有帮助的。,1.YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtoandIwilltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.,2.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif,3.我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。4.我相信你会考虑我的建议的。5.如能看到我会非常开心的。,3.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/useful.,5.Iwouldbemorethanhappytosee,4.Itrustyoulltakemysuggestionintoaccount./Itrustyoulltakegoodconsiderationofmysuggestion.,习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)DearRoy,IamgladtoreceiveyourletteraskformyadvicetohowtolearnChinesewell.Herearefewsuggestions.First,thisisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspaperandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.,asking,on,it,newspapers,Beside,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyoulllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasier.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.HewilltellyoualotaboutChinaorhelpyoulearnChinese.TryandwritetomeinChinesethenexttime.Bestwishes!Yourstruly,LiHua,Besides,easily,They,and,1.askasking现在分词作伴随状语，表示主动关系。2.toonadvice后常搭配介词on。3.在few前加a根据句意，此处为提一些建议，表示肯定意义，用afew。4.thisit考查句型itis+adj.+todosth.意为“做是的”。5.newspapernewspapers因为newspaper为可数名词，而且与前后的books,magazines属于并列关系，故用复数形式。,6.BesideBesides此处表示补充说明关系“此外/而且”，beside意为“在旁边”。7.easiereasily修饰谓语动词用副词形式。8.HeThey根据前一句话中的moreChinesefriends可知用They。9.orand此处两个动作为“顺承”关系，而非“选择”关系。10.去掉nexttime前的the相对于现在的“下一”，next前不用the。,课堂练习假定你是李华，请根据所给材料，给Lora写一封回信。要点如下：1.Lora打算利用暑假打工。2.Lora父母不同意的理由。3.你给Lora的具体建议。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,DearLora,Ihavejustreadyourletterinthemagazine.Iknowthatyouwanttoworkpart-timethissummer.Butyourparentsdontallowyoutodoso.Iunderstandyoursituation.Ithinkyourparentsmayhavetheirreasons.Theymayregardlearningasthemostimportanttaskforyou.Perhapstheydlikeyoutomakeuseofthissummerholidaytostudy.Besides,theymaythinkyouaretooyoungtowork.,Ithinkyouhadbetterhaveatalkwithyourparents.Iftheyagree,youshouldmakeadetailedplanforyourstudyandwork,askyourfriendstoworktogetherwithyou,andtellyourparentsnottoworryaboutyoubecauseyouareoldenoughtomanagethingsproperly.Anyway,Iwouldbemorethanhappytowishyouapleasantsummer.Yourstruly,LiHua,课外作业假定你是李华，最近你们班从英国转来了一名新生Jenny。这是她第一次远离家乡，她很想念父母及家人，有时候思念至深，常常独自一个人深夜哭泣。对此，请你给Jenny写一封建议信，要点如下：1.鼓励Jenny坚定求学信念，志存高远，四海为家。2.就Jenny的目前状况，提两到三个建议。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。,DearJenny,Iamsogladtohaveatalkwithyou.IunderstandyourpresentsituationforIhavehadasimilarexperiencebefore.Peopleoftenmisstheirparentsthefirsttimetheyleavehome.Mostpeopledohavetoleavehomeforhighereducationoremployment.Ithinkyoushouldrealizethatpresentseparationwillhelpwithyouracademicdevelopmentandyourimprovementofpersonalability.,Trytomakefriendsonyourschoolcampus,andshareideaswithyourclassmateswhoarephysicallyclosesttoyounow.Maybeyouwillstillmissyourparents,butyourne