六年级作文之myschool六年级英语作文.docx

myschool六年级英语作文【篇一：小学六年级英语作文汇总】 小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评 my english teacher miss tang is my english teacher. shes very pretty. she is tall and thin. she has two big eyes and a small mouth. her hair is long. she likes cats very much. and she likes singing and dancing, too. her english is very good. we often play games in english classes. she is very kind to us. we all love her. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。 小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词组，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。 my days of the week im a student and i am in grade 5.i get up at six oclock every day. i have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven oclock. i have classes from monday to saturday. i have an english class on friday and i have a pe class on tuesday. i dont have to go to school on weekend, and i like going swimming on that day. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。 i can help do housework i am a girl. my name is li ling. im in class three, grade five. im very helpful at home. i can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. after meals, i can help my mother do the dishes. on sunday, i can wash the clothes. what about you? are you helpful, too? 【要领点评】 本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。 小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。 my village my village is very beautiful. there are many houses in the village. near the village, there is a forest. a small river is in front of the village. the water in it is very clean. we can see some fish in the river. near the river, you can see a mountain. some flowers and grass are on the mountain. i like my village. welcome to my village! 【要领点评】本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。 小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评 my weekend there are two days on the weekend, saturday and sunday. on saturday, i often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and i often help my mother do some cleaning. on sunday, i always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. after dinner, i often watch tv with my parents. at that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. we often have a good time. 【要领点评】 写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，记叙了周六和周日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：周六上午：舞蹈课下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁周日上午：看望祖父母下午：阅读晚上：看电视，与父母交流感受：高兴和愉快。我们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写，先说明什么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事，有什么感受。再按照活动顺序把活动内容写清楚，最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。 时态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写: a.一般过去时（主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过的）;b.一般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度过周末）;c.一般将来时（主要描述你要怎样过周末）。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采用一般现在时来写。 注意：活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识，eg.（例）起床get up，和新知识，eg. climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易错写成nu。还要注意不要出现病句，eg. “i often watch tv with my parents.”不要写成 “i often with my parents watch tv .” 词量上控制在50 80 之间。 my seasons we have four seasons in a year. i can do many interesting things in each season. in spring, the weather is cool and windy, i can fly kites when its windy. and i can go hiking with my family when its sunny and cool. i like hiking. summer is hot in the north of china, but its not long time. i often go swimming. it can make me healthy and strong. i can also wear my beautiful dresses. fall is a season with harvest. and i can eat delicious fruits in this season. i can watch the leaves fall. winter comes, its often snowy in winter in my hometown. when it snows, everything is white. we can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. and winter is my favourite season, because of the spring festival. i love seasons. i love the nature. 【要领点评】 写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。 时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。注意：在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个季节，所以要写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用，如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80个词以内。 my family there are five people in my family. they are my grandma, grandpa, dad, mom and i. look! grandma is watching tv. grandpa is reading a book. dad is writing an e-mail. mom is cooking dinner. i am doing my homework. i love my family! 【要领点评】 写法：这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什么，表达了自己对家人的感情。 时态：由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态，所以建议采用现在进行时态。 句型：主语+be+动词的现在分词。 注意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态，注意在写句子时要保持时态的完整性，即系动词和动词的ing缺一不可。 a field trip it is a nice day. our class will have a field trip today. the classmates are very excited. look! here we are. therere a lot of activities to do. amy is watching insects. peter is collecting leaves. they want to write a report. mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. tim and bob are playing chess. some of the classmates are having a picnic. there is a lot of delicious food to eat. oh, whos that over there? its miss white. what is she doing? she is taking photos. we had a very good time. ill never forget this field trip. 【要领点评】 写法：这篇习作是按照郊游时的画面来描述的，记叙了同学们分别在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。 时态：这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时，所以，这里我们采用现在进行时比较合适。 注意：活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转换、描写感受时用一般现在时。 pep小学英语六年级上册各单元作文范例及点评 li ying s hobby li ying likes english very much. she works hard at it. she reads english every morning. she likes speaking english. she often listens to the radio. she watches tv only on saturday evening.does she like dancing? no, she doesnt. but she likes drawing and singing. her parents love her. and all the teachers and her friends like her, too. she says her hobbies make her happy. 【要领点评】 这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。 小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具体地描绘；二是和上面小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，另处在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“does she like dancing? no, she doesnt.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。 dont be against the traffic rules i go to school from monday to friday .i go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .i must cross two busy roads .if the traffic light is red or yellow,i know i cant cross the road ,so i wait. if the light turns green, i know it means “go”, and then i walk across the road .i always ride on the right side of the road .i am never against the traffic rules. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的经历写起，叙述自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的路上是怎么做的，很形象。 小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大，那样很容易使文章显得空洞，而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。 i love my family here is a photo lf my family. these are four people in my family. they are my father, my mother, my brother and i. my father is a doctor. he works in a hospital far away. he goes to work by subway. my mother is a teacher. she works in a school near my home. she goes to work by bike. after work, they like reading books. who is the tall boy? he is my brother. he is five years older than me. he is a singer. hes now in beijing. he goes there by plane. i love my family. 【要领点评】 一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗？ 小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢？ how to get to the science museum we are going to the science museum tomorrow. there is an old thing show in the museum. do you know how we can get to the science museum? the science museum is next to the peoples park. its isnt far from our school. so we can go there on foot .walk straight to the west from our school, next turn left at the post office and walk for about 5 minutes, then turn right at traffic lights. you can find the peoples park on the right . walk straight, and youll see the science museum. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“怎样去科学博物馆”。怎样才算是一篇好作文呢？通过你的叙述，能让别人很容易找到博物馆，这应是最基本的要求。小作者在文中告诉我们什么呢？首先他写了去博物馆的位置，最后浓墨重彩，指明从学校去博物馆的具体路线，这条路线够清晰吧！ 小朋友们在写这类作文的时候，总有些无从下手的感觉，不知从何说起。其实介绍路线，无非就是告诉他人某段路的起点和终点，还有就是如何从起点走到终点。要给他人说清楚，你自己首先得清楚，然后再通过自己的叙述，将路线清清楚楚得呈现出来。一定要注意行文中一些关键的地方，如在哪儿转弯，向哪儿转，经过哪些重要的交通标志或显眼的标志建筑等。这样，你就能说清，别人也能弄明白。 lets have a nice day its sunday tomorrow .im going to the bookstore with my friends tomorrow morning .we are going to look for some good books .we all like reading books .we are going to eat our lunch at the restaurant. i like chicken, beef and vegetables .after lunch, we are going to the summer palace by bus. we are going to play near the kunming lake. maybe we are going to row a boat on the lake .wow, that will be relaxing. we are coming back at 5pm. 【要领点评】 怎样才称得上是“美好的一天”？有两点不能忘记，一是安排得充实，二是安排得有意义。这两点小作者无疑都想到了，上午去书店看书买书，中午在饭店吃饭，下午去颐和园玩耍、划船，丰富多彩！文章以时间为线索，叙述清楚，文笔也很优美。 小朋友们在写这种叙事的文章时，要尽量给读者交代好时间、地点、人物和活动等，使文章有血有肉。要看好是写过去发生的事情，还是现在正在做的事情，或计划、打算要做的事情，以选择适当的句型。如果是写将来的事情，那么就要注意在表述时多用 “be going to+动词原形”这种句型。还有一点也很重要，那就是故事的线索要交代好，让读者在阅读时对整个过程一目了然。 pep小学英语六年级下册各单元作文范例及点评 my friend and i i have a good friend at school. his name is jack. jack is 12 years old now. im 11. hes older than me. hes 150 cm tall. im 148 cm. hes taller and stronger. hes 43 kg and im 41 kg. hes heavier. our favourite colours are white and blue. we like summer best. we both like sports, too. on saturdays, we【篇二：小学六年级英语pep作文】 我的学校(my school) my school is very beautiful. it is in xx. it is nan yang no.15 primary school. i like my school very much. there is a big playground in my school. we have p.e. class on the playground and we often play sports on it , too. our teaching building has five floors. my classroom is on the fifth floor. it is big and clean. the computer rooms are on the third floor. there is a library on the second floor. there are many books in the library. i often read books here. there are some music rooms and art rooms in the teaching building, too. the teachers in my school are very kind . the students are very polite and smart. i am happy in my school. 下周(next week) its going to be spring festival next week. next monday i am going to my cousins house. he lives in a village. i am going by ship. next tuesday i am going to have a picnic. next wednesday i am going to go shopping in x xx and to have k.f.c. next thursday i am going to xxxx to fly kites. in the 我喜爱的老师(my favourite teacher) hello,my name is xxxx. i have many good teachers, but my favourite teacher is miss li. she is a very good teacher. she is very young, but her english is very good. she teaches usenglish every day. her class has so much fun. she sings songs with us, plays games with us. we are so happy . and we learn english well. our english are very very good. so i like her very much. she likes reading books and playing sports. after class, miss li often plays sports with us. we are very happy. we all love her very much. this is my favourite teacher. she is a good teacher .i like my english teacher very much. what about you? do you have a good teacher, too? happy family everyone has a family. i have a family, too. i name it “happy family”, because everyone in my family is happy. come and meet my family, please! my mother is kind. i love her, and she loves me, too. my mother is pretty. she likes beautiful clothes. i call her “dressy mum”. my father is a boss. he is tall and thin. he has a small head. i give him a nickname “small head father”. i am fat and lovely. i have a big head. i give myself a nickname “big head girl”. i study hard. i am a good student. we are happy every day!我的教室(my classroom) my classroom is nice and big .there are forty desks and chairs in the classroom. there are two black boards on the walls. and there are two pictures, too.my classroom has eleven lights and twelve fans. what colour are the fans? they are blue. at the corner, there is a shelf ,many books are on.the shelf. i like the books very much. this is my classroom , it is very nice. i like my classroom very much . do you have a nice classroom, too ? 母亲节是五月的第二个星期日。今年母亲节那天，我为母亲买了一件毛衣和一束鲜花作为礼物，感谢母亲为我付出的辛苦。母亲收到礼物后，非常高兴。 mothers day comes on the second sunday in may each year. on that day this year, i bought a sweater and some flowers for my mother to thank her for her hard work for me. receiving my gift, my mother was very happy.我最喜爱春天(i love spring best) winter has gone, spring comes. i love spring best, because its very beautiful. in spring, the weather is always sunny and rainy, its not cold and not hot, its warmer and warmer. the flowers begin to open and the trees begin to turn green. the birds are singing in the sky, they are happy. the animals will go out to play. many people like to go out and enjoy the sunshine. i like wearing my sweater and jeans, i like to fly kites, plant trees and see the beautiful flowers. spring is colorful, i think its a wonderful season. whats your favourite season ? please tell me. 春游（spring outing ） many students are going spring outing. some students are boating. and some students are having a picnic. the others are playing games. there is a girl sitting on a chair reading a book. the sky is blue. the trees are green. the flowers are red. its a very beautiful park. they have a good time! 家庭是什么 what is family ? “ l” means “ love” and “ y ” means “you”. so “ family ” is the short form of “ father and mother , i love you.” dont you think so ? father and mother love us , and we love father and mother . thats a happy family. my lovely father我可爱的爸爸 i have a busy father . he works in a big office . he has a big company. he is busy every day . he has many thing to do . he has no time to go home for lunch . he gets home at 7:00 p.m . at home he does the housework. he cooks nice dishes for mother and me . on weekends , he often goes to the park with me .sometimes he goes to swim with me ,too. i like to stay with my father . he is a good father , he is also a happy business man . my room i have my own room. it is big and nice. there is a bed, a desk and a shelf. the doll is on the bed. the lamp is on the desk. the books are on the shelf. the everybody has his own family. what is family? i dont trash bin is behind the door. the clothes are in the think everyone really knows. there are six letters in the closet. there is a air-conditioner over the closet. look! word “ family ”. i think“ f ” means “father”, “a” there are many pictures on the wall. i love my room means “and”, “ m ” means “mother” , “ i ” means“ i”, very much. my weekend i have happy weekend. so i love weekends. my birthday yesterday was march 20th. it was my birthday. i had a party. i ate too much. mike brought a carton of ice cream. jenny brought some candy. mary brought a lot of cookies. my mom made a cake. my dad bought a toy car for me. i was very happy. at the party we sang and danced. we had a good time. my favorite animal my favorite animal is rabbit. its name is sweet. sweet has long ears. its very small. its white. it has a short tail. it has red eyes. it likes eating carrots. it likes jumping. it goes jumping three times a day. i like it very much. its lovely. its my best friend. i like the rabbit. my hobby 南阳市奥瑞教育小学英语作文范文 my hobby is collecting stamps（集邮）. there are many stamps in my room. i like stamps very much. there are many things on the stamps. they are colorful and beautiful. after school i usually go to the post office and there are many people there. i learn a lot from collecting stamps. i like collecting stamps very much. a happy day in spring its spring. its sunny and cloudy today. there are many big trees in the park. mr. blacks family have a picnic in a park. they bring many food there. they bring fruit, drink and bread. mr. black and mrs. black talk with each other. they talk very happily. ann reads a magazine. tom likes flying a kite. the kite flies very well. they are hungry now. they want to eat their food. they are very happy. 自我介绍 good afternoon, teachers! today, im very happy to introduce myself here. my name is=. my english name is =. im 14. i come from class= grade = of = primary school. im an active girl. i like playing basketball(=). because i think its very interesting. id like to eat potatoes(=). theyre tasty. my favourite colour is green. and i like math(=) best. its fun. on weekend, i like reading books in my room. i hope i can learn english well, because i think it very important. i have a happy family. there are _ members in my familyfather, mother and me. my father is a_ but my mother is working in _. i love both of them. my dream is to be a vet ,because i want to help the poor animals in the future. thank you for listening! my family 我的家庭 hello,everyone! my name is steven . im 10 years old, today my topic is my family . i have a happy family . there are three members:my father , my mother and me . my parents love mevery much . my mother is chinese teacher . she is very tall and thin . her face looks small and her eres are very beautiful . my mother is very warm and friendly to others , but she is very strict with me . my father is a professional accountant . he works hard every day . he likes playing football. 我爱英语 i love english. english language is now used everywhere in the world. it has become the most common language on internet and for international trade. learning english makes me confident and brings me great pleasure. when i was seven, my mother sent me to an english school. i played games and sang english songs with other children there. then i discovered the beauty of the language, and began my colorful dream in the english world.【篇三：六年级小升初英语作文】 1.this is my day hi!im xx.this is my day.i usually get up at 7:00 and then i eat breakfast at 7:20. after break fast i go to school on foot.i do morning exercises at 8:20, i have four classes from 8:40 to 11:55 and then eat luch at 12:00.school is over at 4:20.i ofen play sports with my classmates after school.i go home at 16:55.i eat dinner at 7;00.then i go to bed a