2017英语浙江卷读后续写学案.doc

Continuation writingDesign： Litiantian 团队：高二英语组 2019.3.29Continuation writing2017 浙江卷第二节 读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled(骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. Man, thats a big dog! he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶). Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easily caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh. At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.Preparations for writing:How the story begins: find the key words.Who: _When: _What: _How the story develops: Use a sentence to describe the development. _Action! Verbs!Action 1: Mac _, red cloud _ the wolf, but it _ again, _his tent bag.Action 2: Mac _, but the wolf _the chase.Action 3: Mac _ hard, and _ the passing cars, fearing the wolf would be _ into his flesh.What did Mac do in the last minute?He _.Where the story is heading:Plotting: Mac friends bicycle pedaled wolf jumped cars climb PaulTips: Who might appear in this paragraph ? How might they feel ? What action would they take ? Will Macs friends be in time to help him or not ? Paragraph 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2: A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Expressions that might be helpful to your writing.Peoples behavior:1. However, as the evidence began to accumulate, experts from the Zoo felt obliged to investigate.2. Armed with a torch, the vicar went up into the clock tower to see what was going on.3. The journalist immediately set out to obtain these important facts.4. After gazing at the display for several minutes, Mr Taylor went back into his shop.5. The silence was suddenly broken when a large car, with its headlights on and its horn blaring(blare), roared down the arcade. It came to a stop outside the jewelers. One man stayed at the wheel while two others with black stockings over their faces jumped out and smashed the window of the shop with iron bars.6. One of the thieves was struck by a heavy statue, but he was too busy helping himself to diamonds to notice any pain. A few minutes later, I was able to hurry away with precious chalk-marks on my baggage. 7. The man let out a cry and jumped back several paces. When Mrs Richards walked towards him, he fled, slamming the door behind him. Children always appreciate small gifts of money.8. A crowd of people gathered round him and a lady rubbed his arm with soap and butter, but George was firmly stuck.9. George was not too upset by his experience because the lady who owns the sweet shop heard about his troubles and rewarded him with a large box of chocolates.10. At first, she decided to go to the police, but fearing that she would never see Rastus again -the letter had made that quite clear-she changed her mind. Latham made another attempt a week later and got within half a mile of Dover, but he was unlucky again.11. To compensate for his unpleasant experiences in hospital, the man drank a little more than was good for him.12. Olive dashed into the room, grabbed her bag, and ran out again.Animals behavior:1. It immediately ran away when she saw it, and experts confirmed that a puma will not attack a human being unless it is cornered.2. Wherever it went, it left behind it a trail of dead deer and small animals like rabbits. Paw prints were seen in a number of places and puma fur was found clinging to bushes.3. As no pumas had been reported missing from any zoo in the country, this one must have been in the possession of a private collector and somehow managed to escape. 4. For hundreds of years, St Bernard dogs have saved the lives of travellers crossing the dangerous Pass.几5. They stretch out their legs like flying squirrel.6. It gave me the impression that it was about to leap out at me.7. Day after day, month after month, finally, the tiger could also run, jump, roll, grasp, tear, and strike as well as the cat.Fear1. Below, the captain realized to his horror that the Titanic was sinking rapidly, for five of her sixteen water-tight compartments had already been flooded !2. He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.3. She was struck with horror when.4. Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.5. Fear slowly creeps upon her.6. Fear flooded over him.7. Reuben ran/rushed down Water Street, trembling with great pa