形容词比较级和最高级在写作中的运用-writing.ppt

,unit3writingusingcomparativesandsuperlativesofadjectivesinwriting形容词比较级和最高级在写作中的运用,(small/big)abee,abutterflyoranant?,2.(valuable)iron,silverorgold?,changethesentencesusingcomparativesandsuperlativesofadjectives.,1.LiMingis1.60meterstall,WuWeiis1.70meterstall.WuWeiistallerthanLiMing.LiMingisshorterthanWuWei.2.LiMingweighs56kilos,WuWeisweightisalso56kilos.LiMingisasheavyasWuWei.3.WangGangis12yearsold,WuWeiis13yearsold.WangGangisoneyearyoungerthanWuWei.WuWeiisoneyearolderthanWangGang.,4.LiMinggot100inthelastmathsexam,WangGanggot90inthelastmathsexam,WuWeigot60inthr=elastmathsexam.WuWeismathsistheworstofthethree.LiMingisbestatmaths.5.LiMingis11yearsold,WangGangis12yearsold,WuWeiis13yearsold.,LiMingis11yearsold,WangGangisoneyearolderthanLiMing，andWuWeiistheoldestofthethree.,makethecompositionbetter,修改作文,Ihavethreefriends,myfirstfriendisLiMing,heis11yearsold.Hisweightis56kilos,heis1.60meterstall.Hismathsisverygood.ThesecondoneisWangGang,heis12yearsold,heweighs53kilos,heis1.63meterstall.Hismathsisntgood.MythirdfriendisWuWei.Heis13yearsold,Heweighs56kilos,heis1.70meterstall,buthismathsistheworstofthethree.Ilikethemverymuch,wearefriendlytoeachother.,HeisoneyearolderthanLiMing,butheisthinnerthanhim.,besides,heistallerthanLiMing,andheisworseatmaths.,heistheoldestandtallestone,andheisasheavyasLiMing.,Kindergarten,primaryschool,HuanggangMiddleSchoolGuangzhouBranch,Talksomethingaboutyourkindergarten(幼儿园）,yourprimaryschool（小学）andHuanggangMiddleSchoolGuangzhouBranch.要求：1.字数不少于602.可就校园环境，学校生活，老师,同学等方面进行比较。3.至少包含三个方面的内容。参考词汇：environment,asbeautifulas,bekinderthan,studyharderthan.，bebusierthan.,havemoreactivitesthan.havemorehomewrokthan.,审题,主体时态：人称：要点：,一般现在时,第三人称,幼儿园，小学和黄冈中学广州学校的三个方面的对比,makecomments,评论作文,此文章最大的问题是审题不清，未抓住三所学校的三个方面情况的对比进行写作，而只是在写我们班级情况的对比，且出现了一些语法错误，书写不工整，按中考评分标准应是第五档的作文（0-3分）,此文章重在分述三所学校的情况介绍，而没有重在学校情况的对比，且出现了一些语法错误，书写不够工整，按中考评分标准应是第三档的作文（7-9分）,此文章包含了所有的要点，且重在三所学校的情况对比，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确，句子通顺、行文连贯，书写漂亮，美观，按中考英语评分标准是属于第四档的作文（12-15分）,pairwork-makeyourpassagebetter,小组活动-修改自己的作文,Asamplepassage,Ihavestudiedinthreeschools-knidergarten,primaryshcoolandHuanggangMiddleschoolGuangzhouBranch,letmetellyousomethingaboutthem.Mykindergartenisnearmyhome,myprimaryschoolisfartherthankindergartenandthemiddleschoolisthefathest.soIcanntgohomeeveryday.Myprimaryschoolisverysmall,butitisasbeautifulasmykindergarten.HuanggangMiddleSchoolGuangzhouBranchisthelargestandthemostbeatifulofthethree.Therearemanytreesandsweetflowers.Ilikethemverymuch.Inmiddleshcool,thereisalotofhomeworkeveryday,soIamthebusiest.thereislesshomeworkinprimaryschool.andinkindergarten,wehavenohomework.atthattime,wecanplaywithmyfriendswithoutthinkingaboutthehomework.AlthoughIambusyinthemiddleschool,Ifeelhapyeveryday.Ithinkmyschoolilfewillbebetterandbetter.,Whatdoesagoodpassagelooklike?,1、内容要完整（抓住要点，注意文体）2、语句流畅。（要尽量使用自己能够正确运用的语句和表达方式。注意句子之间的连贯性-连接词的使用）3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范，漂亮。,英语课堂当场测试卷,翻译下列句子。1.李明和吴伟一样重。_2.吴伟的数学最差。_3.王刚比李明大一岁。_4.幼儿园比小学漂亮。_5.黄冈中学广州学校的老师是最好的。_,英语课堂当场测试卷,翻译下列句子。1.李明和吴伟一样重。liMingisasheavyasWuWei2.吴伟的数学最差。WuWeismathsistheworst/WuWeiisworstatmaths.3.王刚比李