中考英语巩固复习提纲作文写作练习.pdf

2019 中考英语巩固复习提纲作文写作练习含解析 一、写作题 1.书面表达。同学们寒假生活总是快乐而短暂的，你可能通常看电视，做作业，玩电脑，踢 足球， 打扫房间等。 开学了， 你能跟大家一起分享一下你通常在寒假做些什么吗？仿照例句， 来写一写吧！ 要求：1). 句型完整，结构正确。 2). 至少完成 5 个句子。 3).参考词汇：watch TV，do homework，play computers，play football，clean the house 例：I often play mobile phone in the morning at home. 2.为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短 文。 提示：1. 衣着整洁； 2. 保持环境卫生； 3. 待人有礼，乐于助人； 4. 遵守交通规则； 5. 要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中 14 项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥； 2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息； 3. 词数：80 词左右。 3.中学生普遍面临着很多烦恼，请用英语描述下面表格中列出的问题，并提出自己的建议。 烦恼 1 整天有做不完的作业，经常熬夜学习，无暇顾 及个人爱好； 烦恼 2 父母太忙，没有时间陪自己； 烦恼 3 几乎没有亲密的朋友可以交流，经常感到孤独； 烦恼 4 对自己的体重不满意，不知如何改变； 建议 要求：1）条理清楚，语句通顺； 2）80 词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Now, many middle school students face some problems. 4.请根据所给内容的提示，用英语写一篇短文。 你的朋友莉莉将要面临中考，感到压力巨大，吃不好睡不好，情绪低落，学校效率低下，请 你写一封信，给她一些有益的建议，帮助她调整心态，轻松应考。100 词左右（开头和结尾 已给出，不计入总词数） 。 要点如下：1. 学会放松（体育锻炼，听音乐） 2. 健康饮食 ( 习惯，每天吃早饭)3. 充足的睡眠（早睡） 4. 学会沟通（交谈，求助） Dear Lily, Dont worry about your study too much. First, you should I hope you can stay in a good mood and study better. 5.写作 以“The Most Interesting Teacher”为题，根据提示内容，写一篇 70 词左右的短文，可 以适当发挥。 提示： Who is the most interesting teacher in your heart? What does he/she teach? What is the teacher like? Why do you think the teacher is the most interesting? 注意：不得使用真实姓名。如果是女老师称其为 Mary，如果是男老师称其为 Dave。 6.假设某美国教育代表团将来你校参观访问，请你根据下表提示的信息，用英语向外宾简单 介绍学校近年来所发生的变化，并谈谈你的感想。 环境及设 施 过去 现在 至少列举两例说明过去情 况 操场更大、篮球场更多；图书新、品 种多； 树木四季常青，学校美如花园 你的感想 注意： 1词数不少于 90。文章的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 2要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯。 3文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。 Ladies and gentlemen! Its my honor to tell you about the changes to our school. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you very much! 7.假如你是小李， 你的一位美国笔友 Andrew 想来中国旅游， 来信咨询你乘飞机或火车旅行 的利弊。请根据下面表格内容，以从青岛到广州为例，写信简述你的观点。 注意：词数 100 左右。 交通工具 飞机 火车 价 格 1200 元 550 元 旅游时间 2 小时 23 小时 优 点 舒适 便宜，可以观光 views 缺 点 耗时，拥挤，疲劳 Dear Andrew, Yours Xiao Li 8.假如你的朋友在外宾大街新开了一家 Meet All 水饺馆，请你根据下面表格中的提示给这 家水饺馆写一则广告，向前来就餐的外国朋友介绍一下 Meet All 水饺馆。 种类 牛肉水饺、羊肉水饺、猪肉(pork)水 饺和蔬菜水饺。 特色餐 牛肉水饺是本馆的特色餐，大碗每份 15 元，中碗 12 元，小碗 10 元。 特价日 周末。 要求:1）内容须包括所有要点提示，可适当发挥； 2）词数 70 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Meet All House of Dumplings Welcome to Meet All House of Dumplings 9.（可适当发挥，注意书写工整） ：我是个女孩子，我的名字叫 Ann，来自英国，我 13 岁， 我是个学生，在贵港二中（No.2 Middle School in Guigang ）一年级 3 班，我有一双大 眼睛，圆脸蛋，我想学习（want to learn）汉语，我喜欢中国。我有个好朋友，她的名字 是李华，我们在同一个班级。 10.书面表达 根据下列提示写一篇题为“Saving tigers” 的英语短文，词数 80100 词。 1). 老虎是最受人们欢迎的动物之一。 2). 现在世界上仅存老虎约 3200 只，并且数目日益减少。 3). 老虎处境危险的原因。(没有足够的水，食物和居住地；人类的捕猎等) 4). 保护老虎的建议。 11.初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你 给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想 要求：1）应包含以上全部的信息，可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯； 2）词数：80 字左右 3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。 12.亲爱的同学们，新的一年来临了，在新的一年里，你有什么美好的新年决心呢？请根据 以下内容提示写一篇短文，介绍你各方面的新年决心，并说明打算怎样去实现你的决心。 要求： 1). 内容须包括上图所提供的信息，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译。 2). 词数 80 左右，文章开头已给出，不计入词数。 3). 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 A new year, a new start, when I stand on the edge of the a new year, I cant wait to make my New Years resolutions. 13.根据要求完成大作文，词数 6080 词。 为了践行社会主义核心价值观， 我校决定举办以 “文明礼仪伴我行” 为主题的讨论会， 请 你根据下表提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈如何做一个文明的中学生。 地点 内容 在家里 对父母有礼貌，多做家务活 在学校 尊敬老师，与同学友好相处，勤奋学习 在公共场所 遵守交通规则，排队等候，不乱扔垃圾 要求：1.开头结尾以给出，不列入总词数。2.所写内容必须包括表格内所有的信息，并做适 当的发挥。3.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 参考词汇：文明的 civilized As a middle school student,we should have good manners.In my opinion, Lets join together to be civilized students! 答案解析部分 一、写作题 1.【答案】 I often get up at 6:30 am and have breakfast at 7：00.And then I do my homework for two hours. After that I often watch TV and play computers at home. In the afternoon I help my mother clean the house .At three, I play football with my friends in the park. I think that I have a good time in the holidays. 【考点】提纲作文 【解析】 【分析】本文叙述的是通常假期里做的事情，所以句子应该用一般现在时，根据要 求必须以第一人称来写， 参考所给的短语和词汇可以扩写成句子， 适当的使用连词和过渡词 使上下文联系到一起，如：After that.，In the afternoon，at three 等。 【点评】对这种提纲式作文，一定要囊括所给提纲中的全部内容，但又无须拘泥于提纲，更 不能逐字逐句地“翻译”。对此应发挥自己的想像力和创造力，大胆地创作扩展。 2.【答案】How to Behave Well? In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities. Its a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Dont throw litter or spit about. Its good manners to say Thank you and Please and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And wed better not talk or laugh loudly in public. If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive. 【考点】提纲作文 【解析】 【分析】这是一篇英文征文比赛的参赛稿，首先一定要明确文章的主题现在请你根 据所给提示内容， 用英语写一篇参赛短文， 所以要用第一人称来写。 需要写的内容已经给出， 但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要 组成一篇通顺连贯的文章。 需要注意题目要求： 1. 文章必须包括所给提示中 14 项内容， 可展开思路， 适当发挥； 2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、 校名和其他真实信息； 3. 词数： 80 词左右。注意紧扣文章主题，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关 系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、词组及句型，同时也要注意使用高 级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。 【点评】本文属于参赛稿作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义， 不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类 似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。 3.【答案】One possible version： Now， many middle school students face some problems. Many students have too much homework to do. To finish it， they have to stay up late. So they often feel tired and have no spare time for their hobbies. Some students feel lonely because their parents are too busy to stay with them and they dont have any close friends to talk to. I think they can talk to their parents and teachers about their problems and ask them for help.Some other students arent happy with their weight. To lose weight and keep fit， they need to do more exercise and eat healthy food. 【考点】提纲作文 【解析】 【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。题目所给材料内容比较详细，条理清楚，我们要做的 就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。 动笔前首先应该熟读表格中所列举的一些问题分析出问题 的所在，然后，根据情况提出自己的合理化建议。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一 致问题，同时尽量包括文中提示的内容，并注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【点评】这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文 章的结构组织上使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时文章还使用了一些 常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少，是一篇不可多得的佳作。 4.【答案】Dear Lily, Dont worry about your study too much. First, you should learn how to relax yourself. I think doing more sports is good for your health. Listening to music is also a good way to relax. And I think it necessary to have healthy eating habits. Please remember to have breakfast every morning. It can give you enough energy to study for the whole morning. Youd better go to bed early and have enough sleep. It will keep you active during the day. Finally I think you should talk with your friends, parents and teachers often. Tell them about your thoughts and feelings. Try to get help from them. I hope you can stay in a good mood and study better. Yours, Sandy 【考点】提纲作文 【解析】 【分析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达。在写作时应注意符合主题，根据要表 达的内容确定句子的时态，语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。 写作步骤：一，阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。 1，学会放松:learn how to relax yourself. 2, 健康饮食:have healthy eating habits. 3, 充足的睡眠:have enough sleep. 4, 学会沟通:learn to talk with friends,parents,teachers . 二，根据要点，写出关键词，短语和句子。 三，组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般现在时。 【点评】本题属于给出内容写作型作文，需要考生熟练使用相关短语，单词，和句型，注意 词性的搭配，时态的把握，人称的使用等细节问题。 5.【答案】例文： The Most Interesting Teacher My English teacher, Mary, is the most interesting teacher I have ever met. She is a 30-year-old lady of medium height and she wears a pair of glasses, which makes her look more lovely. Shes energetic and humorous. She can always get special ways to make her classes interesting and lively. All the lessons she gives are easy to understand and remember. Such is Mary, who is popular with all her students. We all love her. 【考点】提纲作文 【解析】 【分析】带提纲和关键词的作文,就是把所给的提示语用上,合理安排次序,注意上下 文之间的联系而写的文章。 6.【答案】 Ladies and gentlemen! Its my honor to tell you about the changes to our school. In the past, there was only a small playground. The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them. The number of the trees and flowers was small. But things have greatly changed these years. Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts. More different kinds of new books can be lent to us. Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round. I think its lucky of us to have such good studying environment. We will work harder and serve the people better in the future. I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you very much! 【考点】提纲作文 【解析】 【分析】这是一篇介绍类作文，要点和开头结尾已经给出。我们所要做的就是用 正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要自由发挥的地方 较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑 关系，一定要契合给出的开头结尾,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式， 同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。 【点评】本文属于介绍类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不 能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似 的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。 7. 【答案】 Im glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. In my opinion, both air travel and train travel have advantages and disadvantages. Travelling by air can save much time. For example, if you fly from Qingdao to Guangzhou, it takes only two hours. If you take the train, you will not get to Guangzhou in 23 hours. Also, air travel is more comfortable. The train is usually crowded and you have to sit on your seat for a long time. You will get tired after the long travel. On the other hand, train travel also has its advantages. First, it costs only 550 yuan while travelling by air costs 1200 yuan. Whats more, you can enjoy the beautiful countryside views outside the window along the way. Which would you prefer? I am afraid you have to make your own choice. If you need more information, please let me know. Have a nice journey! Yours Xiao Li 【考点】提纲作文 【解析】 【分析】本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，谈谈两种交通方式的利弊。要求 中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真 阅读提示，确定写作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连 词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英 语的表达习惯。 【点评】做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列 出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一 些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。 8.【答案】One possible version： Meet All House of Dumplings Welcome to Meet All House of DumplingsIn our restaurant，there are all kinds of dumplings. We have beef dumplings, mutton dumplings, pork dumplings and vegetable dumplingsAnd the beef dumplings are our great specialA large bowl of beef dumplings is 15 yuan, a medium bowl is 12 yuan，and a small bowl is 10 yuan .On weekends, all the dumplings are on saleCome and enjoy the delicious dumplings in Meet All House of Dumplings! 【考点】提纲作文 【解析】 【分析】这是一篇广告词，向前来就餐的外国朋友介绍新开的 Meet All 水饺馆， 重点描写水饺馆里水饺的种类和特色餐。要用上关键句型 there are all kinds of dumplings.介绍水饺种类时用名词短语，例如 beef dumplings，mutton dumplings， pork dumplings and vegetable dumplings.注意名词短语的 前一个名词用复数形式。 【点评】做书面表达时要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词， 注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，注意描述的全面性，不能漏掉写作要点提示；语言的 表述应该符合语法结构，句子应该符合英语的表达习惯。 9. 【答案】 I am a girl. My name is Ann. I come from England. I am thirteen years old. I am a student. I am in Class Three, Grade One, No. 2 Middle School in Guigang. I have a round face with big eyes. I want to learn Chinese. I love China. I have a good friend. Her name is Lihua. We are in the same class. 【考点】提纲作文 【解析】 【分析】这是一篇材料作文，根据提示需要用第一人称来写，这就给写作降低了难 度， 第一人称的一般现在时动词用原形就可以了。 但是文章的后半部分介绍好朋友李华时需 要用第三人称单数，注意动词的三单形式。 【点评】 做英语书面表达时， 要注意认真审题， 分析体裁， 确定时态； 分析内容不要犯语法、 句法以及搭配性错误。 10.【答案】 Saving Tigers Have you visited zoos? Have you seen tigers in the zoos? I think a tiger is one of the most favorite animals in the zoo. But now there are about 3200 tigers in the world, and the amount of them is reducing. What caused them to reduce? Because many forests are cut down and they have no place to live in. In order to protect them we must build many natural reserves. And we must stop people from hunting. 【考点】提纲作文 【解析】 【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。在写作前首先要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的 所有信息，明确有哪些要点。其次要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情 景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。再次根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表 达要符合英语习惯。 【点评】 该文语句流畅， 准确表达了题目中的每个要点。 还多次使用了连接词如 and、 but、 because 等，都为文章增色不少。 11.【答案】 How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldnt do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, Ive become interested in English and Im good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. Ive learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others。 【考点】提纲作文 【解析】 【分析】英语作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式， 谓语动词形式要有根有据， 选用比较有把握的词汇， 用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的 句子。再者，要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词 的正确形式， 句子之间的衔接和过渡。 最后， 要忠实于材料， 不必过度扩展， 注意用好连词， 多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。 【点评】 这是一篇提纲作文。 文中运用的 get on well with 相处融洽； help each other and learn from each other 互相帮助，互相学习；with ones help 在某人的帮助下；in the future. 在未来；come true.（梦想）成真。为文章增色不少。 12. 【答案】 A new year,a new start,when I stand on the edge of the new year.I cant wait to make my New Years resolutions. The first resolution is my physical health.Im going to build a strong body.I plan to run every day.Eating more fruit and vegetables is good for my health.And enough sleep is important to my health. The second solution has to do with my study.As a middle school student,I should listen to the teacher carefully in class.After class ,Im going to read and practice exercises as much as possible.If I have some questions,I will ask the teache