概要写作指导Getting up early.ppt

概要写作指导,提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。阅卷时将主要考虑以下内容：(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；(3)上下文的连贯性；(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况。,评分原则本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。词数少于40或多于80的，从总分中减去2分。评分时，应主要从以下4个方面考虑：拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。,(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；(3)上下文的连贯性；(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况。,Summary:,Summaryisashortpassagegivingthemainpointsofanoriginalarticle.,Whatisasummary?,Whatshouldwepayattentiontowhenwewriteasummary?,文体,时态,人称,主题,writeasummary,记叙文,议论文,说明文,概要写作解题步骤：一、区别文体，看清结构；（文体+结构）二、把握大意，找主题句；（大意+主题句）三、分析段落，切中要点；（段落+要点）四、同意置换，串句成文。（置换+串联）,阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Gettingupearlyhasbeenregardedasagoodhabitsinceancienttimes.Manyyearsago,peoplethoughtthatifwewenttobedearlyandgotupearly,wewouldbeenergeticthewholeday.Nowadays,peoplestillholdthesameview.So,gettingupearlyisofgreatimportancetousall.Infact,morningisthebesttimeofaday.Inthemorning,theairisthefreshestandpeopleareusuallyinthebestconditions.Manyofusmayhavetheexperiencesthatwememorizesomethingsmorequicklyandaccuratelyinthemorningthanatanyothertimeoftheday.Additionally,ifwegetupearlyanddosomemorningexerciseoronlytakeashortwalkinthemorning,withoutdoubtwecanbuildourbodiesandbecomemuchhealthier.Thatiswhymanypeoplegettingupearlydophysicalexerciseyearafteryear.Wewillalsohaveenoughtimetomakeaplanandgetreadyforourworkorstudyofthedayifwegetupearly.Forexample,ifeveryoneinthefamilygetsupearly,wifewillhaveenoughtimetopreparethebreakfastforthewholefamily.Childrenwillhaveenoughtimetocatchtheschoolbus,andhusbandwillneverforgettochangehisdirtyshirt.Everythingisinorder.Whataharmoniousscene!However,ifwegetuplate,wellprobablyhavetodoeverythinginagreathurry,makingitinamess.Letusremembergettingupearlyisagoodhabit.Ifyouarealateriser,youmayfinditdifficulttoformthehabitofgettingupearly.Youwillhavetomakeeffortstodoso.Ifyouwanttogetupearly,sleepingearlierthenightbeforeexpecttobesuccessful.Besides,youcansetyouralarmclockorasksomeonewhomyouknowwillbeawakeatthattimetocallyou.Ifyousticktogettingupearlyeveryday,youwillcertainlybenefitalotfromit.,reasons,topic/phenomenon,suggestions,体裁：_主题：_结构：_,Step1.Readforthetopicandstructure（确定体裁，明确主题及结构）,Step2.Exploreforthekeyinformationofeachparagraph(划主题句,找关键信息),Step3.paraphrase(改写),Step4.polishthepassage(改良),Writeasummarywiththesteps&tips,Step1.Readforthetopicandstructure（确定体裁，明确主题及结构）,expositorywriting(说明文),gettingupearly,topic()reasons()suggestions(),Step2.Exploreforthekeyinformationofeachparagraph(划主题句,找关键信息),Writeasummarywiththesteps&tips,Gettingupearlyisofgreatimportancetousall.,para.1:,para.2:,Inthemorning,theairisthefreshestandpeopleareusuallyinthebestconditions.,para.3:,Ifwegetupearlyanddosomemorningexercise,Withoutdoubtwecanbuildourbodiesandbecomemuchhealthier.,para.4:,Wewillalsohaveenoughtimetomakeaplanandgetreadyforourworkorstudyoftheday,para.5:,sleepingearlierthenightbeforeBesides,youcansetyouralarmclockorasksomeonetocallyou.,Writeasummarywiththesteps&tips,Gettingupearlyisofgreatimportancetousall.,para.1:,2.Itis_.,1.Gettingupearlyisofgreat_tousall./Gettingupearlyis_tousall.,3.Gettingupearlyplays_inourlife.,4.Weshouldattachgreatimportancetogettingupearly./Greatimportanceshouldbeattachedtogettingupearly.,Step3.paraphrase(改写),significance,significant,importantforustogetupearly.,animportantpart,Tips:1).paraphrasewithsynonyms(同义词)2).rewritesentencestructure(改句型),Writeasummarywiththesteps&tips,Inthemorning,theairisthefreshestandpeopleareusuallyinthebestconditions.,para.2:,1.Weareusuallyinthebestconditionswith_ofaday.,2.Inthemorning,wecanlearnmorethingsbecauseofthefreshestairandpeoplesbestconditions.,3.Thereasonisthatmorningisafantastictimeofadaytoenjoythefreshestairandtheexperienceofmemorizingthingsquickly.,Step3.paraphrase(改写),thefreshestair,Writeasummarywiththesteps&tips,para.3:,1._wecanbehealthierwiththehelpofexercise.,Ifwegetupearlyanddosomemorningexercise,Withoutdoubtwecanbuildourbodiesandbecomemuchhealthier.,2.Wecanbeincreasinglyhealthyby_inthemorning.,3.Whatsmore,peoplewhosticktophysicalexerciseinthemorning,thus,havestrongerbodies.,4.Gettingupearlytodosomephysicalexercisecanhelpuskeephealthy.,Step3.paraphrase(改写),Thereisnoboubtthat,workingout,Writeasummarywiththesteps&tips,para.4:,Wewillalsohaveenoughtimetomakeaplanandgetreadyforourworkorstudyoftheday,1.Itenablesusto_theday.,2.Timewillbe_.,3.Whatsmorebeneficialisthatenoughtimecanbegottomakeaplanforworkorstudyofthedayifwegetupearly.,4.Whatsmore,notonlycanwehavemuchtimetomakeaschedulebutalsomakeprepartionsforourworkandstudy.,Step3.paraphrase(改写),5.Andthemostimportantthingisthatgettingupearlycanhelpusdoeverythinginorderandletusmakegooduseofthelimitedtime.,makegoodpreparationsfor,enoughforustomakepreparationsfortheday.,Writeasummarywiththesteps&tips,para.5:,sleepingearlierthenightbeforeBesides,youcansetyouralarmclockorasksomeonetocallyou.,1.Sleepingealierandsettinganalarmclockoraskingsomeonetocallusarethe_forthelaterisers.,2.Finally,weshouldtrysomeproperwaystomakeourselvessticktogettingupearly,suchas,sleepingearlierandsettinganalarmclockorasksomeonetocallus.,3.However,ifyouarealazyman,whynotmakeuseofanalarmclockorasksomeonrforhelp.,Step3.paraphrase(改写),4.Asalateriser,youcanovercomeitbysleepingearlyandsettinganalarmclockorasking.,suggestions,Step3.paraphrase(改写),Writeasummarywiththesteps&tips,Gettingupearlyisofgreatimportancetousall.,theairisthefreshestandpeopleareusuallyinthebestconditions.,para.1:,para.2:,para.4:,para.5:,Withoutdoubtwecanbuildourbodiesandbecomemuchhealthier.Thatswhydophysicalexercise,Wewillalsohaveenoughtimetomakeaplanandgetreadyforourworkorstudyoftheday,Gettingupearlyissignificanttousall.,Weareusuallyinthebestconditionswiththefreshestairofaday.,para.3:,Wecanbeincreasinglyhealthybyworkingoutinthemorning.,Itenablesustomakeagoodpreparationfortheday.,sleepingearlierthenightbeforeBesides,youcansetyouralarmoclockorasksomeonetocallyou.,Sleepingealierandsetanalarmclockorasksomeonetocallyouarethesuggestionsforthelaterisers.,Step4.polish(改良),Tip3:Polishwithconnectives(连接词)tomakeitcoherent(连贯).,Sinceancienttimes,greatimportancehasbeenattachedtogettingupearly._,morningisafantastictimetoenjoythefreshestairandhaveamoreaccuratememory._,peoplewhosticktophysicalexerciseinthemorningwillbeinbetterhealth._,gettingupearlycanenableustomakegoodpreparationsfortheday._,sleepingearlierandsettinganalarmclockorturningtoothersarethesuggestionsforthelaterisers.,Sinceancienttimes,greatimportancehasbeenattachedtogettingupearly.Firstly,morningisafantastictimetoenjoythefreshestairandhaveamoreaccuratememory.Secondly,peoplewhosticktophysicalexerciseinthemorningwillbeinbetterhealth.Finally,gettingupearlycanenableustomakegoodpreparationsfortheday.Asaresult,sleepingearlierandsettinganalarmclockorturningtoothersarethesuggestionsforthelaterisers.,NostandardanswerNowadaysshynessiscommonandthereareseveralreasons.Firstly,manyscientistsbelieveshynessisgeneticsothatsomepeoplearebornshy.Secondly,familysizemightresultinshyness.Youngchildrenortheonlychildaremorelikelytobeshy.Finally,thebirthplacemayleadtoshyness.PeopleinIsraelarelessshythanpeopleinJapanbecauseofdifferentattitudestofailure.Toovercomeshyness,scientistsalsogiveusefulsuggestions.,阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Gettingupearlyhasbeenregardedasagoodhabitsinceancienttimes.Manyyearsago,peoplethoughtthatifwewenttobedearlyandgotupearly,wewouldbeenergeticthewholeday.Nowadays,peoplestillholdthesameview.So,gettingupearlyisofgreatimportancetousall.Infact,morningisthebesttimeofaday.Inthemorning,theairisthefreshestandpeopleareusuallyinthebestconditions.Manyofusmayhavetheexperiencesthatwememorizesomethingsmorequicklyandaccuratelyinthemorningthanatanyothertimeoftheday.Additionally,ifwegetupearlyanddosomemorningexerciseoronlytakeashortwalkinthemorning,withoutdoubtwecanbuildourbodiesandbe