英语议论文写作指导(对比分析正反观点).ppt

,议论文写作指导对比分析正反观点,正反观点对比对同一件事情，人们常有不同的看法，即正反两种观点。在写作时，常使用一般现在时。写作格式一般是：提出问题两种不同观点对两种不同观点的论据（理由）逐项作对比。有时题目会要求说出自己的观点，可在结尾段加上自己的观点并简要说明理由，最好不要重复前面的已谈到的理由。写作方式一般采用集中比较。在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：,正反观点对比常用句型(1)wehavea(heated)discussionabout我们对进行了一次讨论。wevehadadiscussionaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.(2)wehavehadasurveyon我们对开展了一次调查。wevehadasurveyonwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedtocarrymobilephonestoschools.(3)opinionsaredividedonthequestion.在这个问题上意见有分歧。(4)opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups.有两种不同意见。,(5)othershavedifferentopinions.其他人有不同看法。(6)sixtypercentofthestudentsarefortheidea,whilefortypercentofthestudentsthinkotherwise.有60%的学生支持这个观点，然而有40%的学生则不这样认为。(7)sixtypercentofthestudentsthinkitnecessaryto,butfortypercentofthestudentsdontthinkso.60%的学生认为是必须的，而40%的学生则不这样认为。(8)ontheonehand,ontheotherhand,一方面，另一方面,在对某一观点作进一步论证时，可用下列句型：(1)whatsmore,还有就是whatsmore,wecangetagoodknowledgeofthecultureandsocialcustomsofthecountrywherewestudy,aswellasimproveourenglish.(2)besides,除此之外somestudentscannotdisciplinethemselves.besides,itsfartooexpensivetostudyabroad,whichisaloadtothefamily.当然在提出多个论据时，也可用first,second,third,来列举论据。,80%studentssupportit.theprogrammeiscreativeandunique.inaddition,itprovidesastageforyoungpeopletoshowtheirtalents,andhelpsyoungpeoplegainmoreconfidencethanever.onthecontrary,20%studentsthinkthattheprogrammemisleadstheyouthtosomedegree.whatsworse,theywillfeelsuccessdoesntcomefromhardwork.afterall,beingyourselfisntthesameasbeingdifferentfromothersinbehavioursorappearance.inmyopinion,iamforthisprogramme.aslongasourstudyisnotdisturbed,wecanwatchit.,最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。2、词数：100左右。3、参考词汇：门票：entrancefeedeareditor,imwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.,2002年考题范文,deareditor,imwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks(提出问题).opinionsaredividedonthequestion.60ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefee.theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves.changingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.whatismore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.,过渡句,观点一,论据一,论据二,ontheotherhand,40thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers,andtobuyplantsandyoungtrees.theysuggest,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.yourstrulylihua可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一，并用一系列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出观点二，继续用论据进行说明。如果需要说明自己的观点，可接下来说明自己的观点。,观点二,论据一,论据二,对比类写作实战模版,议论文的框架-对比观点题型（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1有一些人认为。2另一些人认为。3我的看法。thetopicof-（主题）isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.somepeoplesayaistheirfavorite.theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof-（支持a的理由一）whatismore,-(理由二).moreover,-(理由三).,whileothersthinkthatbisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.firstly,-(支持b的理由一).secondly(besides),-（理由二）.thirdly(finally),-(理由三).frommypointofview,ithink-（我的观点）.thereasonisthat-(原因).asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.,（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点somepeoplebelievethat-（观点一）.forexample,theythink-（举例说明）anditwillbringthem-(为他们带来的好处).inmyopinion,ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint.foronething,-(我不同意该看法的理由一).foranotherthing,-(反对的理由之二)formallwhatihavesaid,iagreetothethoughtthat-(我对文章所讨论主题的看法),(3)不同观点列举型（选择型）thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat_作文题目.butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.amajorityofpeoplethinkthat_观点一_.intheirviewsthereare2factorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows:inthefirstplace,_原因一_.furthermore,inthesecondplace,_原因二_.soitgoeswithoutsayingthat_观点一_.,people,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.somepeopleholdtheideathat_观二_.intheirpointofview,ontheonehand，_原因一_.ontheotherhand,_原因二_.therefore,thereisnodoubtthat_观点二_.asfarasiamconcerned,ifirmlysupporttheviewthat_观点一或二_.itisnotonlybecause_,butalsobecause_.themore_,themore_.,practiceinclass,面对繁重的初中学习任务，高初中生对参加学校活动有着不同的看法，请以takingpartinschoolactivities为题，用英文写一篇120词左右的短文，着重介绍两种不同的观点和态度，最后谈谈你个人的看法。很多学生持拥护态度，认为既可以学到实践知识，又可以得到放松；不少学生漠不关心，认为学生就应该学习，学校活动与学习无关，同时嘲讽积极参加学校活动的学生。标题和开头已给，不计入总词数。词数；120词左右。takingpartinschoolactivitiesasforschoolactivities,studentsmainlyholdtwoviews,mainerrors,1.时态：现在的时态2.therearemanystudentssupportit.therearemanystudentswhosupportit.therearemanystudentssupportingit3.要有清晰的、完整的句子的痕迹thoseinfavorofthinkitisgoodforus.becauseitcanhelpusgetrelaxed.,mainerrors,thoseinfavorofthinkitisgoodforus,becauseitcanhelpusgetrelaxed.,thoseinfavorofthinkitisgoodforus.itisbecauseitcanhelpusgetrelaxed.,清晰的句子的痕迹itcanhelpusmakemanyfriends,theywillgiveusmanyproposer.,itcanhelpusmakemanyfriends.theywillgiveusmanyproposer.,itcanhelpusmakemanyfriends,andtheywillgiveusmanyproposer.,mainerrors,takingpartinschoolactivitiesasforschoolactivities,studentsmainlyholdtwoviews.manystudentsareveryenthusiasticaboutschoolactivitiesbecausetheythinkthatlearningfromtextbooksisnottheironlytaskandtheyshouldtakeanychancetogetsomepracticalknowledge.besides,afterlonghoursstudy,theycanrelaxthemselvesbyparticipatinginschoolactivities.,however,alargegroupofstudentstakelittleinterestinthemandspendmostoftheirtimeonstudy.theybelievethattheyshouldmakefulluseoftimetostudyandthatschoolactivitieshavelittletodowiththeirfurtherdevelopment.thussometimestheyevenlaughatthosewhotakeanactivepartinschoolactivities.asfarasiamconcerned,ipreferthefirstview.ontheonehand,wecanlearnagreatdealfromotherstudentswemeetinactivities.furthermore,modernsocietyrequiresmanyqualitiesofyoungstudents,so“bookworms”cantkeepupwiththetimes.,requiressth.ofsb.要求某人某事,takingpartinschoolactivitiesasforschoolactivities,studentsmainlyholdtwoviews.somestudentsareinclinedtoapproveofit.theybelievethatbytakingpartinschoolactivities,studentscannotonlylearnsomepracticalknowledge,butalsorelaxthemselves.however,otherspaylittleattentiontoit.obviously,theythinkstudyisstudentsonlytask.whatthismeansisthatschoolactivitieshavenothingtodowithstudy.besides,theysneeratthosewhotakepartinitactively.,asforasiamconcerned,theformeropinionholdsmoreweight.ontopoftheabove-mentionedpositiveeffectsitmightbringabout,theschoolactivitiesalsoenrichourschoollifeandhelpustounderstandeachotherbetter.so,wecannotemphasizetheimportanceoftakingpartinschoolactivitiesenough.,如何把句子写得丰富些？,很多学生持拥护态度，认为既可以学到实践知识，又可以得到放松。,somestudentsareinclinedtoapproveofit.theybelievethatbytakingpartinschoolactivities,studentscannotonlylearnsomepracticalknowledge,butalsorelaxthemselves.,manystudentsareveryenthusiasticaboutschoolactivitiesbecausetheythinkthatlearningfromtextbooksisnottheironlytaskandtheyshouldtakeanychancetogetsomepracticalknowledge.besides,afterlonghoursstudy,theycanrelaxthemselvesbyparticipatinginschoolactivities.,homework,根据教育部通知，从2007年9月1日起，中小学生每天要跳校园集体舞。通知发出后，在社会上引起了热烈的讨论。假如你是李华，请根据下表提供的内容给“chinadaily”编辑写一封信反映讨论情况，并提出自己的看法和理由。注意：(1)词数100-120；(2)开头已写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：集体舞groupdancing社交能力sociability,deareditor,thedepartmentofeducationannounced,能锻炼身体，丰富校园生活begoodforhealthandcanenrichourschoollife培养社交能力improvetheirsociability.不能达到锻炼身体的目的canthelpstudentstokeepfit,deareditor,thedepartmentofeducationannouncedinjune,2007thatfromsept.1,2007primaryandsecondaryschoolstudentswillhavedanceclass,whichhasledtoaheateddebate.somepeoplethinkgroupdancingisgoodforhealthandcanenrichourschoollife.ithelpsstudentsunderstandeachotherbetter.alsoitcanhelpstudentsimprovetheirsociability.itisahealthymeansofcommunication.,butotherpeopleholdtheoppositeview.theyfeelthatinthecountryside,theteachersdonthaveenoughexperienceinteachingdancingandalsothereisntenoughroomforstudentstolearndancing.lastbutnotleast,groupdancingisjustaformoraperformance,whichcanthelpstudentstokeepfit.astome,groupdancingmayleadtoanincreaseofboysandgirlsfallinginlove(witheachother)oncetheyhavemorechancesforphysicalinteraction.yours,lihua,homework,假设你是林明。你班最近就“大学生是否应该经济独立”的话题展开了讨论，大家发表了不同看法。请你根据以下所给内容，写一封信给21世纪英语报高中生版反映讨论情况。讨论情况如下：135的同学认为：通过打工可以获得工作经验，了解社会；同时还可以体会到父母挣钱的不易，避免乱花钱的不良习气。250的同学认为：通过打工来付学费会影响自己的学习，自己可以通过好好学习来报答爹娘，回报社会。315的同学(包括你在内)觉得双方的观点都有一定道理，但又不完全赞同，请简述你自己的看法。注意：1文章开头已经给出，不计入总分；2词数120个(不包括起始句)；3参考词汇：学费tuitionfee报答repay经济独立financiallyindependentdeareditor，iamwritingtotellyouaboutarecentd