四级作文评分标准(同名1143).doc

四级作文评分标准2分：条理不清，思路混乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分：基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性性差，有较多严重的语言错误。8分：基本切题，有些地方思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，句型结构形式单一；语言错误较多，其中一些是严重的错误。11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，运用丰富的句型结构（从句，倒装句，虚拟语气，分词，非谓语动词）但有少量语言错误。14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误，仅个别小错（仅仅由于笔误而造成的不超过1-2处错误）。注意：不够120词，每10词扣1分作文题目：Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic Bags1. 一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用2. 造成的问题3. 限制使用的意义Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags With the development of technology, many new inventors came out, and disposal plastic bag is one of the most popular. Meanwhile, it bring about a lot of problems. First, it is hard to be disposed, it pollute the river, the sea and the soil. Besides, some people may throw a plastic bag with some food in it, then it may be eaten by some animals. Of course it may do harm to the animals, even make them dead. We should limit the use of disposal plastic bags. First, we can replace the disposal plastic bags with baskets and cloth bags. Second, we can ask people to buy the disposal plastic bag if they want to use it. Then we will make our life better. 本文基本切题，大致传达了作者想要表达的意思，但每段都存在许多小问题。第一段只是表述了一次性塑料袋是一种科技产物，但没有明确表达出使用普遍的情况，并且前两段都存在时态使用错误的问题。第二段条理清楚，但论点和论据缺乏逻辑关系词(for the first/ second place, finally/ therefore)，句子衔接不够自然。第三段没有按照提纲要求阐述限制塑料袋的意义。Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags It is a truth universally acknowledged that disposable plastic bags have made our life convenient. However, the appearance of the plastic bags also raises an issue: Should we look for convenience at the cost of environment and health? Convenient as they be, the disposable plastic bags also caused many problems. First of all, deserted plastic bags can bring about “white pollution”. In addition, burned plastic bags may release poisonous gases and materials that can lead to various diseases. Finally, plastic bags are hard to decompose（分解）.Our government advocates limiting the use of disposable plastic bags. I am entirely in favor of it. I believe, in the near future, the plastic bags will be used less often and the environment we live in can be more pleasant and comfortable. Whats more, we will enjoy more healthy lives. In a word, it is high time for us to take effective actions to make a more beautiful and harmonious world. 本文内容切题，框架完整，能够围绕提纲进行写作，段落分明，思想表达基本清楚，并且巧妙地运用了多种过渡性的词语。不足之处在于：文章第三段句型过于单一，草草收尾。 14分范例：To sum up, it is meaningful to limit the use of disposable plastic bags. It is significant (obvious) that our government has limited the use of disposable plastic bags officially (formally), and people will be charged for (pay for) the use of such bags, which not only enhances (raise) peoples awareness on environmental protection but also cuts down (reduces) the cost of the running of