作文范文之别人对我伸出援助之手英语作文.docx

别人对我伸出援助之手英语作文【篇一：2012高考英语书面表达辅导资料：英语作文14讲】 英语作文14讲 . 1. 步骤1: /筛检材料（注：提纲一定要涉及所有 提供得要点）。 信息转换 a) 以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。 b) 连词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。 c) 连句成文：正确使用表逻辑关系的连接词，使文章前后连贯，结构紧凑， 过度自然。 步骤4: 检查修改。重点检查单词拼写、大小写、标点符号等。 步骤5: 规范抄写。保持卷面整洁。如书写较差，以致影响阅读，分数将降低一个档次。 2. 案例分析 例题：你班进行了一次综合实践活动。通过活动，同学们收获很大，尤其是李华同学进步最快。请你根据表格内容写一篇关于李华的短文。词数80个左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考作文对比，注意划线部分。 英语写一篇日记。 注意： 1. 日记须包括所有图画的内容，可以适当增加细节，使其连贯。2. 词数：100 左右。 . 句子的写作 文章无论长短，都是由句子组成的。要想写出漂亮的英文作文，就需使用正确无误的、 符合英文文法的句子。从用途来分，句子可以分为陈述句，疑问句，祈使句和感叹句；从结构来分，句子可分为简单句，并列句，复合句和并列复合句。英文句子千变万化，但无论怎 样，都离不开五种基本句型。 1. 写作指导-五种基本句型 （1）主语+谓语 my father smokes a lot.some are dancing, some are singing. （2）主语+连系动词+表语 she is an english teacher. the one in red shirt is my uncle. （3）主语+谓语+宾语 he likes learning chinese. we all donated our pocket money. （4）主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语 mr. wang teaches us english. i lent her my book. 主要有两大类等； (2) buy, find, get, leave, make, save, choose等。 （5）主语+谓语+宾语+宾补 i often ask him to help me with my homework. we chose him our monitor. 练习题（一）、请将下列词连成句子。 1). walk, supper, shall, we, have, after, a ? 2). i, him, my, considered, friend, best. 改：_ 3). mr. wang went to bed until 12 last night. 改：_ 4). when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do. 改：_ 5). when i get to the station the train leave. 改：_ 6).could you tell me where shall we meet tomorrow? 改：_ 7). watch tv too much is bad for our eyes. 改：_ 8). though we were very tired, but we felt very happy. 改：2. 满分作文短文要求达意、正确、连贯。 my school the school has no tall building. it has only four old houses. it is funny and interesting. the houses there is a nut garden. when autumn comes, are in harvest. they are delicious. s amazing, isnt it? this is my school. please come and see it. 3. be crazy about 发狂的喜欢? 例句：i am really crazy about michael jacksons rocknroll. 造句 give sb. a hand 帮助某人 the 比较级? 越?越? _ ? （充分）利用? 翻译：我们应该充分利用水。 _ theres no point in doing sth. 做某事无意义、没必要 翻译：等待毫无意义。 _ would rather do sth. than do sth. 宁愿（可）做? 不愿做?【篇二：托福作文练习-论幸福happiness_改2】 happiness better living conditions never equals to a happier life, instead, many people are now more stressed than before. we tend to become irritable and impatient, which mess up our to me, happiness is a state of mind and has three levels. every day looks the same, we are struggling with the endless boring work at the supervisors commands; we have to learn those rigid books whose contents may never be used in the future; we need to finish the tiring housework with a tired body and moodseems quite unpleasant. but i have to say that, life is not about beautiful details-a cool sunny day after a series of rainy days; a passerbys simple acts of kindness; those warm words when we are in a bad mood learn to discover them, and let them intersperse our life, we can be the happiest person in the world.many people today just work for works sake, study for studys sake, live for using up the lifespan, and then finally they experienced a and tiring life. going with the stream can never bring us happiness. to break up this ordinary state, we should set our goals. during the courses of realizing our ideals, we can feel ourselves improved and the feeling of achievement is a kind of self-affirmation, then we can better define ourselves, find out our living value and enjoy great happiness. remember the journey to the west? the four characters set a great goal and fight for it, they overcame numerous difficulties and finally the goal was reached and they all made a jump in abilities-became buddhas, quite pleasant and inspiring. the happiness comes from the improvement of abilities is the happiness comes from ourselves, which worth recalling over and over again. the highest level is loving others; it needs us to learn something about the true spirit of giving. the fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose. helping others, be happy at others gratefulness, be happy at others happiness, and be happy at the satisfactory from our own deep heart. mr. grandet spent all his life making money, never gave a single coin to others, he died in others disdain; true happiness never appeared in his life. a taker wont be welcomed in the group. happiness is always around us, never let the complaints blind our eyes, never let the laziness slow down your steps to our dream, never find any excuses for not helping others, and well find that happiness is waiting for us. the highest level is loving others; it needs us to learn something about the true spirit of giving.（显得单一，可分三层意思，递进地用例子诠释） 我们自己在困难时，曾经得到过别人无私的帮助和安慰，曾给我们温暖，鼓舞我们的信心，让我们感到头上的天依然是蓝蓝的，所以我们愿意伸出无私的手帮助素不相识的人。尽管时间很宝贵愿意抽出时间去做义工、尽管自己不富裕却愿意为受灾的人捐款，点燃别人生活的希望，让阳光也照耀在他人的心头。只是一味索取的人，是可悲的。. mr. grandet spent all his life making money, never gave a single coin to others, he died in others disdain; true happiness never appeared in his life. a taker wont be welcomed in the group. 有的人只想到自己的利益、只想到追逐自己的梦想，往往无法实现，因为实现自己的梦想往往需要别人的无私帮助，要得到别人的无私帮助，需要的就是自己首先慷慨地帮助别人。老板给优秀的雇员发奖金，雇员才乐意为老板奉献自己的才华；老我老以及人之老，幼我幼，以及人之幼；生活中我们愿意帮助那些帮助过我们的人，对于那些自私的人我们不愿意搭理。 帮助别人，让别人幸福，我们从中得到的幸福丰富，更满意，是幸福的最高层次。帮助素不相识的人，是幸福的，因为你知道他会感到幸福。对于朋友事业，多给一些关照，不仅友谊更进一步，自己的事业也会得到朋友的捧场；对于陷入困境中的人，伸出援助之手，是幸福得，得到是不只是别人的感激，而是自己心灵的满足。爱人者，仁恒爱之。 the fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose. helping others, be happy at others gratefulness, be happy at others happiness, and be happy at the satisfactory from our own deep heart. mr. grandet spent all his life making money, never gave a single coin to others, he died in others disdain; true happiness never appeared in his life. a taker wont be welcomed in the group. 后面的例子太老套 ，不生动 此段缺乏例子 文章中贵乎例子， 太多的说理，别人不喜欢看，不合作文之道 这个境界是个人价值的实现，自我实现的满足感，是幸福的较高层次。大多数人没有人生目标，也有人有目标没有付诸实际，因为缺乏追求目标的勇气或毅力。能够像盖茨一样，看到目标，就奋起追求的人值得我们学习。 太罗嗦，没有例子，不生动 帮助身边的人，你会总是心里快乐，因为看到周围的人快乐；关心素不相识的人，也会感到幸福，因为你知道他会感到幸福。对于年老的父母，我们多花点时间陪陪，老人得以宽慰，与父母的讨论让自己前途更明确，力量更充足，心里更踏实； 对于朋友事业，多给一些关照，不仅友谊更进一步，自己的事业也会得到朋友的捧场； 爱人者，仁恒爱之。 太没有情趣的结尾【篇三：2014年高考英语短文写作分析】 龙源期刊网 .cn 2014年高考英语短文写作分析 作者：王幼平 冯建国 【真题呈现】 请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。 small things make a big difference. the small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society. 注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称； 词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总次数。 【审题谋篇】 提示语意为：小事情有大的影响，我们所做的小事情能使我们成为这个社会中有责任感的一员。提示语的落脚点在第二句话，因此我们要把小事情和社会责任感这两个点有机结合起来。一个人的社会责任也许并不起眼，一件事情上体现的社会责任也许并不惊天动地。但是，无数人担负共同的社会责任，无数小事情上汇集的社会责任举动，就能形成推动社会进步的巨大力量。在日常生活中，我们会遇到很多小事情，比如在灾难面前伸出援助之手，参加志愿者活动，节约水电，保护环境等，都能体现出我们的责任意识。因此，从我做起，从小事做起，尽到自己的社会责任是这篇文章的立意所在。 对于这种话题作文，我们依然采取引题、记叙、总结的三段式。把握了立意后，就可以谋篇布局了。第一段提出话题；第二段例举自己生活中遇到的一件体现自己社会责任感的小事； 第三段写这个经历给自己的体会和启示，再次