初中英语Using an outline to write a topic composition课件.ppt

usinganoutlinetowriteatopiccomposition chengguanmiddleschoolmaliyang freetalk whatcanwedoontheinternet ifyouspendtoomuchtimeontheinternet whatwillhappen compare 比较 moststudentsthinkthattheinternetisveryusefulinourlife firstofall wecanlearnalotfromtheinternet wecanalsolistentomusicandenjoymoviesforfun besides wecandosomeshopping however someotherstudentsfeeldifferently therearelotsofunhealthypicturesormoviesontheinternet theymakestudentsloseinterestintheirstudy differentstudentshavedifferentideasabouttheinternet moststudentsthinkthattheinternetisveryusefulinourdailylife firstofall wecanlearnnewsfromallovertheworld whenwearefree wecanalsolistentomusicandwatchmoviesforenjoyment besides it sconvenientforustodosomeshoppingontheinternet however someotherstudentsfeeldifferently thereislotsofbadinformationontheinternet itwillhaveabadinfluenceonus inmyopinion weshouldstayawayfromtheunhealthywebsitesandmakegooduseoftheinternet onlyinthisway itcanhelpusalot topic ontheinternet beginning body正文 ending moststudentsthink keysentence2 keysentence1 however feeldifferently inmyopinion onlyinthisway firstofall also besides outline 提纲 differentpeoplehavedifferentideasabout learn from when listento enjoy it sconvenientforus badinformation haveabadinfluence stayawayfrom makegooduseof help alot supportingsentences differentstudentshavedifferentideasabouttheinternet moststudentsthinkthattheinternetisveryusefulinourdailylife firstofall wecanlearnnewsfromallovertheworld whenwearefree wecanalsolistentomusicandwatchmoviesforenjoyment besides it sconvenientforustogoshoppingontheinternet however someotherstudentsfeeldifferently thereislotsofbadinformationontheinternet itwillhaveabadinfluenceonus inmyopinion weshouldstayawayfromtheunhealthywebsitesandmakegooduseoftheinternet onlyinthisway itcanhelpusalot linkingwords 连接词 canyouretellthecompositionaccordingtotheoutline outline 提纲 retell 复述 writingstrategy itishelpfultomakeanoutlinebeforewriting 写作前制定提纲对写作是有帮助的 topic ontheinternet beginning body正文 ending moststudentsthink keysentence2 keysentence1 however feeldifferently inmyopinion onlyinthisway firstofall also besides differentpeoplehavedifferentideasabout learn from when listento enjoy it sconvenientforus badinformation haveabadinfluence statawayfrom makegooduseof help alot supportingsentences completethecompositionwiththelinkingwordsgiven practice what sworse however also ontheotherhand besides findoutsomegoodsentencesinthecomposition recentlyweheldadiscussionaboutwhetherthestudentsshouldusemobilephonesatschoolornot someofusthinkmobilephonesshouldbeusedatschool firstofall wecansurftheinternetforinformationweneed withmobilephones wecan playgamesforenjoymentinourfreetime wecancallourparentseasily someotherstudentsdon tthinkso somestudentssendmessagestotheirfriendsonmobilephonesinclass whichisbadfortheirstudy wecanusetheschoolpublicphonesinsteadofmobilephones keepingamobilephonecostsmuchmoney inmyview it snotagoodideatousemobilephonesatschoolbecauseitmakesnodifferencestoimprovingourstudy 班长在主题班会课上组织大家讨论 看电视对九年级学生是否有好处 请你根据表格内容写一篇英文发言稿 陈述同学们的观点及理由 并附上你的观点及理由 write topic isitgoodforstudentsingradeninetowatchtv body ending beginning weheldadiscussionaboutif activity1 writeanoutline haveabadinfluenceon openupone seyes write tips 1 usesomelinkingwordscorrectlyifnecessary 2 useoneortwogoodsentences inourthemeclassmeeting weheldadiscussionaboutifitisgoodforstudentsingradeninetowatchtv activity2 writeacomposition about100words homework readyourcompositionagainandtrytomakeitmorebeautiful 2012黄冈 第三节书面表达 1题 满分10分 随着网络的发展 人们消费观念的转变 购物方式也在悄然地发生变化 网购 成为一种时尚 越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中 请你根据以下表格的提示 写一篇网上购物的文章 注意 所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息 否则不予评分 词数 80词左右 文章开头已给出 不计入总词数 提示词汇 网购shoppingonline 避免做某事avoiddoingsth 商品goods 导致causewiththedevelopmentoftheinternet manypeopleareusedtoshoppingonline onepossibleversion withthedevelopmentoftheinternet manypeopleareusedtoshoppingonline ithasbecomeafashioninourdailylife someofusstudentsalsojointhegroup shoppingonlinehasmanyadvantages justbyaclickofthemouse youcanbuywhatyou reinterestedinwithoutgoingoutdoors youcanavoidgettingtiredandbeingtrappedinthecrowdedpeopleandcarsandsavetime whenshoppingonline youcanchoosefrommorevarietiesofgoods whosepricesaregenerallylower everycoinhastwosides itsdisadvantagesareobvious too ononehand it sveryeasyforyoutobuygoodsdifferentfromthepicturesyouseeontheinternet ontheotherhand shoppingonlinemaycausepeopletobuygoodsthatarenotbadlyneeded that sawasteofmoney asforshoppingonline ilikeit becausethingstherearemuchcheaperandidon tneedtowalktotheshops whichhelpsmesavetime nomatterwheretoshop ienjoyitbecauseit sreallyrelaxing onepossibleversion i majuniorhighschoolstudentfromjiangxi inmysparetime ilikeshopping thereisasupermarketinmytown lotsofthingsarebeingsoldthere soioftengotherewithmymothertobuyschoolthings foodanddrinks ofcourse sometimesiwanttobuysomethingexpensive anmp4playeriswhatiwantmost butican tafforditnow i mgoingtoworkforanenglishclubduringthissummerholidayandmakesomemoneyforit weteenagersshouldnotalwaysaskourparentsformoney asforshoppingonline ilikeit becausethingstherearemuchcheaperandidon tneedtowalktotheshops whichhelpsmesavetime nomatterwheretoshop ienjoyitbecauseit sreallyrelaxing inourthemeclassmeeting weheldadiscussionaboutifwestudentsingrade9canwatchtv someofusthinkthatwecanwatchtvathomealthoughweareingradenine watchingtvcanmakeusrelaxedafteraday shardwork what smore itcanhelpmelearnalotandopenupoureyestotheoutsideworld however someotherstudentsdisagree theythinkwatchingtvisawasteoftimeandithasabadinfluenceonourstudy theyalsothinkitisbadforoureyesifwewatchtvtoooften inmyopinion wecanwatchtvonweekends butnotonweekdays weshouldspendenoughtimeonourstudy ontheotherhand wealsoneedtorelax whileyouaremakinganoutline writedownsomeverbsandphrasalverbsyouwilluseinyourcomposition writingsuggestions whileyouarewritingthecomposition usesomelinkingwordscorrectlytomakeitmorefluent ontheinternetdifferentstudentshavedifferentideasabouttheinternet moststudentsagreethattheinternetisausefultoolinourlife firstofall wecanlearnalotfromtheinternet suchasreadingdifferentkindsofbooksandlearningforeignlanguagesbyourselves secondly wecanlistentomusicandenjoymoviesforfun finally theinternetmakesourlifemoreconvenientbecausewecandosomeshoppingandchatwithfriendsonit however someotherstudentsfeeldifferently therearelotsofunhealthypicturesormoviesontheinternet theymakestudentsloseinterestintheirstudy besides somestudentsarecheatedwhiletheyaresurfingtheinternet inmyopinion weshouldmakegooduseofitandstayawayfromtheunhealthywebsites onlyinthisway theinternetcanhelpusstudentsalot 中学生是否可以在校使用手机 你班就此话题进行了讨论 请你根据以下记录表写一篇短文 陈述讨论结果 并发表你的观点 班长打算在主题班会课上组织大家讨论 九年级学生是否可以看电视 请你根据表格内容及自己的体验写一篇英文发言稿 提示词 达成共识 haveanagreement write topic onwatchingtv beginning body正文 ending wehaveanagreementthat it sagoodquestionto keysentence2 supportingsentences writingsuggestion1 whileyouaremakinganoutline writedownsomeverbsandphrasalverbsyouwilluseinyourcomposition keysentence2 recentlyweheldadiscussionaboutwhetherthestudentsshouldusemobilephonesatschoolornot someofusthinkmobilephonesshouldbeusedatschool firstofall wecansurftheinternetforinformationweneed withmobilephones wecanalsoplaygamesforfuninourfreetime besides wecancallourparentseasily however someotherstudentsdon tthinkso somestudentssendmessagesonmobilephonesinclass ontheotherhand wecanusetheschoolpublicphonesinsteadofmobilephones what sworse keepingamobilephonecostsmoney inmyopinion it snotagoodideatousemobilephonesatschool ifwedothat wewillconcentratemoreonourmobilephonesthanourstudies firstofall also besides practice2 makeanoutlineforthecomposition topic onmobilephones beginning body正文 ending someofus keysentence2 keysentence1 however inmyopinion it snotagoodidea ifwedothat what sworse whetherthestudentsshoulduse surftheinternet playgames call easily sendmessages use ontheotherhand costmoney supportingsentences recentlyweheldadiscussionaboutwhetherthestudentsshouldusemobilephonesatschoolornot someofusthinkmobilephonessho