20172-温州高考应用文和故事续写写作赏析.docx

树人中学2016学年第二学期高三英语晨读材料（应用文赏析三）使用班级：高三 份数：100编者： 李小琴 日期：2017年2月28日班级：_ 姓名：_温州二模应用文写作（满分15分）假如你是张文，你的美国笔友Jack一家人要来温州度暑假，特别来信询问特色旅游的情况。请你给他回复一封电子邮件。内容包括：1，推荐地点2，推荐理由(次数80左右）Dear Jack，Imgladtoknowyouandyourfamilyarecomingto Wenzhou for the summer holiday.About special attractions here, IbelieveYongjiaisanidealdestination.Withfascinatingsceneryofmountainsandrivers,itisatypicalcounty where dozensofancientvillages lie.You can not only appreciate the fantastic landscapes but also enjoy the unique local customs and delicious food. Surely the trip will leave you an unforgettable memory.Looking forward to your arrival soon! Best wishes, ZhangWen文章电子邮件格式：开头_落款_第一段：_第二段好词好句学习和模仿：_结尾句：_赏析文章连接词过渡_赏析文章词汇/短语表达的准确性/多样性：_温州二模范文故事续写赏析：Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. Jenny didnt answer. How could she explain about the watch and its magic? No one could understand. No one could believe. “But I saw you wearing it yesterday,” Miss Walker gently reminded him. For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that. Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech. Everybody was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless. 78 wordsAt that, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jennys speech first. Jenny walked slowly to the front. She couldnt think properly. All round her, a sea of faces was watching. She felt so frightened and the watch didnt seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walkers encouraging eyes. Jenny took a deep breath. “Im going to talk about swimming” Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jennys wonderful speech. Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence. 72 words赏析首段首句连接_赏析首段最后两句（承上启下）_第二段连接句_结尾句：_其他值得学习的语言表达：_范文二：Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. Embarrassed, Jenny didnt say anything. Dead silence suddenly fell. Then came Miss Walkers voice. “Why is Lees watch on your wrist?” Jenny hesitated for a while and decided to tell everybody about the truth. However, thinking of the well-prepared speech, the magic of the watch, she changed her mind. “But Miss Walker, could I give the speech first and then explain?” She made a request in a tone of begging. 70 wordsAt that, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jennys speech first. Jenny made her way to the platform with every confidence. Words began to flood out of her. “How could she make it? Weve never seen Jenny give so terrific a speech.” Whispers went around the classroom, and even Miss Walker nodded with approval. Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class. Relieved, Jenny told everyone the truth, and especially the magic of the watch. “But its just an ordinary watch with no magic”, Lee announced. 80 words(赏析上文并用下划线标出文章的逻辑，表达等）听力录音稿:Text 1) W: Oh, no! Ive left my new hat somewhere.M: I _remember you having it at lunch in the restaurant. You _ have left it in your _.(Text 2) M: What time is it by your watch? Mine reads 9:15. W: Your watch is _ hours slow. (Text 3) M: What do you think about traveling by _ to France?W: The kids would love it, but I get _. The _ is quicker and goes all the way. Thats the best _ to see the countryside.(Text 4) M: Whats wrong, Rachel? You arent looking yourself!W: My mums got a job in Liverpool! Ive finally made_ after years of _ here. Now _ we go again. Why _my mum have a _?(Text 5) M: _at last ! That was the last time we had a holiday in the Lake District.W: It was beautiful! At _ it _snow.M: I would have _ snow to _ _. We had never seen the sun there!(Text 6) W: I wish I could play music like you! When did you learn to play the guitar?M: Oh, Ive been playing since I was _, and Im _years old now. During that time I learned to play the _ too.W: What about it? That must be really difficult.M: In the beginning, it really was, but after a few lessons I got better. Practice _ perfect, you know. For me, the most difficult is the_. I once tried it, but gave up.(Text 7) M: Hi, very glad to meet you here.W: Hi, have we met before?M: Arent you the woman who _ the computer lecture at the city library last winter?W: Yes, its me. You look familiar. Were you there _then?M: Yes, sure. Im so glad I_your lecture. And Ive _quite a lot from it.W: Thanks. Its also_for me to do something _in my spare time.M: Oh, I thought you were an IT engineer or something like an expert in this profession.W: _exactly, but I know a bit about computer.M: I thought that it would be_ for me to learn how to use a computer _my age, but now Im _ e-mails with my grandchildren. They say I am learning fast and well. Its the _thing after my retirement.W: Thats great. Giving a lecture after work is a good experience for me, because that is a change of pace from my daytime job as a _representative. M: Thats right. (Text8) M: Hey, Julie, havent seen you for a while. How is everything?W: Hi, Gale. Fine, thank you. M: Why dont you travel together with_ to _? As you know, Cathy will leave our company next month for further education, so weve got a_ _ in my car. W: Thanks, Gale, but Ive found a suitable_ partner, Ms. Gomez. She is going to move near my apartment next week. So you see itll be_ for a ride.M: Oh, really? Thats_bad that you couldnt join us but its good youre taking a car with her. I used to work with her in the marketing department.W: Oh, did you? I dont know much about her, but I know _ sure that she is _ late for appointments.M: Yes, right. She was doing well in marketing and popular with the colleagues. W: Thats very nice.(Text 9) M: Hi! You seem busy.W: Hi! You cant imagine what I have to finish by next _! This literature course is so difficult! I have to read two novels by next _ and hand in a 3000-word essay by next_.M: So you dont want to come to an exhibition with me this _?W: Id love to, but Im already behind with my writing class because I had a _ for a week and missed a few lessons. You seem to have loads of free time.M: Well, we just dont have as much academic work as you. My college life is _ compared with yours. Therere varieties of live performances as an art major.W: Yes. Im_ with the life of reading and writing every day. M: Hey. Why dont we stop talking? Just work now. If you have finished everything by the _, we could go to that new play. W: OK. Ill try. And I dont want to miss the student party on the _ so Id better get working. (Text 10) M: Today we are visiting Woodhill Shelter - the most unusual animal shelter in Britain. It _not house wild animals rescued from zoos or sea creatures from ocean par