2017英语专四作文讲评及写作指导.doc

TEM4 新题型写作题型变化：Previously：陈述观点论证观点得出结论Now：概括材料提出观点并论证观点得出结论（重申观点或提出建议）材料作文Tactics：1. 仔细审题，分析材料（2-3mins）2. 列出提纲，确定布局（3-4mins）Para. 1. 引出话题，概括材料（summarize， paraphrase）Para. 2. 提出自身观点，列出理由论证Para. 3. 重申观点或提出建议3. 正式写作（30-35mins）4. 检查并优化（2-3mins）评分标准 如何总结材料第一段：Describe the phenomenon/introduce the discussed topic + opinions from both sides/summarize or paraphrase the topic sentences in the excerpt.参考范文With Intelligent Machines to Do the Thinking, Will Our Brains Get Lazy?Nowadays, many aspects of peoples daily life have undergone considerable changes because of the recent development in artificial intelligence. Obviously, artificial intelligence has already completely renovated peoples lifestyle. On the one hand, the contribution of artificial intelligence to the society is prominent and peoples dependence on it is an irreversible trend. People enjoy the benefits and convenience brought by intelligent machines. On the other hand, people are still concerned about its negative impact, for example, whether our brains will regress with intelligent machines to do the thinking.第二段：先表明自己观点Stance: as far as Im concerned, as to me, from my perspective, in my view, personally speaking, from my point of view再分条论证（灵活运用连接词）1. First and foremost, besides, last but not least2. First, second, third3. In the first place, in the second place, last but not least4. Initially, besides, furthermore, last but not least范文：In my opinion, artificial intelligence will enable our brains to get more creative. Admittedly, a lot of work has been done by intelligent machines. It seems that the function of people has been weakened and peoples brains have been replaced. As a matter of fact, thanks to intelligent machines, people can expand their creative energy and add new varieties. Simply speaking, when people are free from tedious, repetitive, sometimes even dangerous work, work efficiency will undoubtedly be improved. As a result, people can spare more time to do what they want and pursue what they dream of, which is the premise of creativity. Moreover, creativity stems primarily from knowledge and thinking. Once people have the opportunity to do more thinking and learning, their intelligence would be enhanced rather than weakened.第三段：enrich your restatement/express your hopes/give suggestionsAll in all, in a nutshell, to sum up, in brief, in short, in summary, in conclusionBased on the above exhaustive elaboration, its quite natural to come to the conclusion that范文：Although artificial intelligence is the exhibition of peoples high degree of creative power, it should be noted that it is like a double-edged sword. The sensible choice is to embrace its advantages and cope with the problems it has aroused. This is what an advanced and rational society should be like.合理利用模板及范文例句：Para. 1：It has long been a contentious issue as to whether 题目陈述. Some people are of the opinion that 观点一, while others point out that 观点二. （总结材料）Nowadays, with 现象, people are becoming increasingly aware of the problem whether (再总结材料) Nowadays, it is a heatedly discussed topic that 引出话题. This problem is much debated in that it affects almost everybody in their daily lives.Para. 2: As for me, I agree to the idea that because its advantages outweigh its disadvantages. There are dozen of reasons behind my beliefAs far as I am concerned, the opinion that holds more weight. For one thing, 论据一. 理由一. For another, 论据二. 理由二.In my point of view, 把标题变为陈述句. There are numerous reasons to support my opinion. One of the primary causes is that 理由一. Another reason that can be seen by every person is that 理由二. A good case in point is 举例证明二.As a college student, I think that 论点. To begin with, 理由一. 证明理由一. A further reason why I support this is that 理由二. There is a good e