新人教高中英语书面表达步步练2.ppt

书面表达步步练2 10 答案 1 roseisinlovewithjohn butjohnisinlovewithmary 2 tomwroteaquicknotetonancy hisfriend 3 wheniwasspeakingbeforeacrowdofpeopleforthefirsttime mykneesshook speaking的逻辑主语与句子主语不一致 产生 垂悬 修饰语 4 shelikesplayingtennisandwatchingbasketballgames 两个平行的思想toplaytennis和watchingbasketballgames用了不同的结构 破坏了句子的连贯性 5 iamwrong hesaidtomybrother hesaidtobybrother youarewrong 6 they thestudents 代词they无指代对象 7 whenireturnedtomyroom ifoundanotefromjackundermybook hesaidhewasinthecitylookingforajob buthehadn tfoundanythingyet headdedthathewassorrynottohaveseenme 此段出现了一连串的短句 这些短句提供的信息量小 语义支离破碎 缺乏连贯性 11 答案 1 myfamilyhasadog wekeepadogathome 2 theyhadagoodtimelastnight theyenjoyedthemselvesverymuchlastnight 3 wefinditdifficulttolearnenglish 4 idon tthinkshecanswim 5 sheisveryyoung 6 eveningcamebeforewerealizedit 7 alotofhisstudentshavegonetocollege 8 tolearn learningenglishwellisnoteasy it snoteasytolearnenglishwell 9 manyteachershavetaughtmeenglish 10 ilikeenglishverymuch 11 thoughhewasill hewentonworking hewasill buthewentonworking 12 becausesheisill sheisabsenttoday sheisill sosheisabsenttoday 13 hewasmarriedtoannalastmonth hemarriedannalastmonth 14 haveyousuggestedhetryagain haveyousuggestedhimtryingagain 15 heisoldenoughtogotoschool 16 inwinteritiscolderinchangshathaninguangzhou 17 godgavemeagoodchance it sreallyagoodchancethatgodgaveme 18 allthestudentshadstartedreadingenglishbeforeigotup 19 itrainsmuchinbeijinginaugust 20 afirebrokeoutatthehospitallastnight 21 sheisathomenow 22 thisisno 4middleschool jiujiangcounty jiangxiprovince 12 1 去掉书名号 汉语中有书名号 但英语中没有 书写报刊 书名等时 常用报刊 书名的每个单词首字母大写 且常在文中用斜体或在名称下划一横线的形式表示 2 此句为短句错误 可在第二个分句前加上表对照的连词while或将句中逗号改为分号 3 ijoinedtheleaguein1989 hesaid 直接引语是陈述句且放在插入语之前时 应是逗号 不用句号 4 空心圆点改为实心圆点 5 句末问号改为句号 因为此为陈述句 6 把顿号改为逗号 英语中没有顿号 7 johnsaysbillwillflytonorthk