人教版高中英语课件：人物介绍 基础写作.ppt

welcometoourclass basicwriting characterintroduction 人物介绍 canyouintroducesomeofyourclassmates introductionandguessing bornonthe18thofjanuary 1979intaiwan hewasraisedbyhismotherandwasshyandquietduringhischildhood showinginterestinmusic hebeganlearningtoplaythepianoattheageof3 whenhisfirstalbumwasreleasedin2000 hegottheworld sattention hispopularitysky rocketed 急速上升 andhehasreceivedmanyawardsforhissongs hisownuniquechineser bstyleisunparalleledbyothersandhecontinuestomakebreakthroughsashetakesrisksinattemptingnewthings jaychou 周杰伦 bornonthe18thofjanuary 1979intaiwan jaychou afamoussinger wasraisedbyhismotherandwasshyandquietduringhischildhood 分词结构 同位语 身份与生平 尽量用分词短语 同位语结构 使文章简洁 通顺 task1appreciateawriting showinginterestinmusic hebeganlearningtoplaythepianoattheageof3 whenjay sfirstalbumwasreleasedin2000 hegottheworld sattention hispopularitysky rocketed 急速上升 whichallowedhimtoreceivedmanyawardsforhissongs 经历 省略句 状语从句 定语从句 注意尽量用非谓语动词 使文章精炼 尽量用复合句 倒装 非限定定语从句等 润色文章 hisownuniquechineser bstyleisunparalleledbyothersandhecontinuestomakebreakthroughsashetakesrisksinattemptingnewthings 评价 注意运用一些动词 形容词等短语 人物介绍常用短语 1 生于一个富裕的家庭wasbornintoapoor richfamily2 毕业于 3 被一所好大学录取beadmittedtoagooduniversity4 获得博士学位5 出国深造6 作出贡献7 高度赞扬8 被誉为 graduatefrom receiveadoctor sdegree goabroadforfurtherstudies makegreatcontributionsto singhighpraisefor speak think highlyof behonoredas 译 邓亚萍 35岁 生于河南郑州 是一位世界闻名的女乒乓球运动员 borninzhengzhou henanprovince dengyaping aged35 isaworld famouswomanplayeroftabletennis borninzhengzhou henanprovince dengyapingisaworld famouswomanplayeroftabletennis patterndrill 译 在2004年的雅典奥运会上 刘翔获得了110米栏的冠军 这使他一举成名 atthe2004athensolympicgames liuxiangwonthechampioninthe110 metrehurdles whichquicklymadehimbecomewell knownallovertheworld athensolympicgames the110 metrehurdles 译 李时珍为医学做出了巨大的贡献 备受世人的尊敬 lishizhen whomadegreatcontributionstomedicine wasrespectedbypeopleallovertheworld 译 钟南山 年出生在广州 是我国最伟大的医生之一 一生致力于医学研究 并取得非凡的成就 borninguangzhouin1941 zhongnanshan oneofthegreatestdoctorsinchina devotesallhislifetomedicalresearchandmakesgreatachievements 译 在中山大学英语系毕业后 她继续学习 获得了博士学位 aftershegraduatedfromthedepartmentofenglishofzhongshanuniversity aftergraduatingfromthedepartmentofenglishofzhongshanuniversity shewentonfurthereducationandreceivedadoctor sdegree havinggraduatedfromthedepartmentofenglishofzhongshanuniversity thedepartmentofenglish writingtime task2while writing 费孝通是我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家 请根据下文提示 用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先生 参考词汇 社会学家sociologist社会活动家socialactivist社会科学sociology促使advance农村经济ruraleconomy从事workon 写作要求 使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容 并组织成连贯的短文 步骤一 审题文体 人称 时态 人物简介 用第三人称 过去时 步骤二 整合信息 写出要点 参考词汇 社会学家sociologist社会活动家socialactivist社会科学研究theresearchonsociology促使advancevt 农村经济ruraleconomy从事workon groupwork youaregoingtowritethispassageingroupsoffour eachstudentwritesonesentence thensharewithyourclassmates lastlyjointhesentencesintoacompletepassage sharingtime bornintoarichfamilyonnovember2 1910 feixiaotong afamouschinesesociologistandsocialactivist passedawayduetodiseaseinbeijingonapril24 2005 whengoingtocollege hefirstchosetostudymedicinebutthenchangedhismind between1930and1935 hestudiedintsinghuauniversityandthenwenttoenglandforfurthereducation wherehereceivedhisdoctor sdegree after1938 heoncetaughtintsinghuauniversityandpekinguniversity fei whostudiedhardallhiswholelife devotedhimselftotheresearchonsociologyandadvancedthedevelopmentofchina sruraleconomy task3post writing writeanotherpassageforconsolidation 菲尔普斯 michaelphelps 菲尔普斯 michaelphelps 请根据下面表格中的提示 写一篇介绍美国著名游泳运动员菲尔普斯 michaelphelps 的短文 参考词汇 开始 takeup热爱 hasastrongpassion全能 all rounded泳坛 inthecircleofswimming 写作要求 使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容 并组织成连贯短文 步骤一 审题文体 人称 时态 人物简介 用第三人称 过去时和现在时相结合 步骤二 写出要点 整合信息 modelessay borninmaryland usain1985 michaelphelpshasastrongpassionsincehetookupswimmingattheageoffive the15 year oldboybecametheyoungestamericanolympicswimmersofalltime thenhehasbroken21individualworldrecordssincehebroketheworldrecordin200 meterbutterflystrokein2001 fantastically hewon8goldmedals