广东省湛江一中锦绣华景学校中考英语 作文训练课件 人教新目标版.ppt

第六讲书面表达 解析 1 仔细审题 注意题目的具体要求 明确写作要求 确立短文的体裁 要用的时态和格式 本题是讲述网购的话题 介绍网购在日常生活中的利与弊 并阐述自己的观点 时态用一般现在时 2 注意写作要点 本书面表达是提示作文 所给提示的内容一定要写全面 根据表格中的两个方面提示展开 不必根据表格内容直接翻译 可以适当发挥 3 连句成篇 注意语言的连贯和过渡 如写作过程中适当运用连词 如and so but等 就会使文章过渡自然 还要注意单词拼写 标点符号 大小写等细节 专题训练11书面表达 一 参考范文 savefoodandeathealthilyourgovernmenthascalledonthecitizenstosavefoodandeathealthilysothatwecanenjoyourhappylife wemiddleschoolstudentsshoulddosomethingforit tosavefood weshouldn twasteanyofourfood weshouldeatupallthefood weshouldn torderthefoodmorethanwecaneatwhilediningout becausemanypeopleintheworlddon thaveenoughtoeat toeathealthily weshouldn teatjunkfoodbuthealthyfood it sgoodforourhealthtoeatabalanceddiet we dbetternoteatinsmallrestaurants thefoodandtheoiltheyusearenotcleanorhealthyenough we dbettereatatschoolorathomeifwehavetime 专题训练12书面表达 二 参考范文 ourlifeinthefuturewhatwillthelifebelikeinthefuture ithinktheworldwillbesmallerandsmallerbecauseofthedevelopmentofhightechnology peoplecantalkwitheachotherwithsmallmobilephones fromwhichpeoplecanseeeachotherveryclearly eventheyliveveryfarfromeachother ialsothinktheenvironmentwillbecleanerandcleaner peoplearoundtheworldarenowrealizingtheseriousenvironmentproblems andtheyaretryingtheirbesttomaketheenvironmentbeautiful ihopethelifeinthefuturewillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful 参考范文 theteacherilikebestofallmyteachers ilovemrs libest shetaughtusenglishinjuniormiddleschool shehadmanywaysofmakingherclassesinterestingandexciting shealwaystaughtussomethingnewineasyways shehelpedususeenglishbydoinginterestingactivities suchas makingsurveys playinggames etc mrs liwasastrictbutkindteacher sheoftenaskedustobeontimeforclassanddohomeworkbyourselves whenwehadtrouble sheoftenhelpedusout thankstomrs li istartedtoloveenglish ilovemrs liandherclass 参考范文 apersoniwillneverforgetthepersoni llneverforgetismyenglishteacher he satallmanwiththickglasses helikessportsandoftenplaysfootballandbasketballwithus he shumorousandalwaysmakeshisclasseslivelyandinteresting he skindbutisstrictwithus heneverallowsustopretendthatweknowwhatwedon tknow heoftentellsusthatit snousememorizingnewwordswithoutunderstanding myenglishhasgreatlyimprovedwithhishelp 参考范文 myhobbydifferentpeoplehavedifferenthobbies myhobbyiscollectingcoins igotmyfirstcoinonmy8thbirthdayfrommygrandpa itwasanoldchinesecoin ilikeitverymuch ihavebeencollectingcoinsfor7years andihaveover2 500coinsfromdifferentcountriesindifferentshapestillnow istorethemintheboxesunderthebed mymotheroftensaidwehadrunoutofroomtostorethem collectingcoinshelpsmelearnalotaboutdifferentculturesandhistory lastyear idonated