托福综合写作技巧完全版ppt课件.ppt

1 INTEGRATEDTASK 综合写作技巧展示 2 INTEGRATEDTASK 本课内容 3 INTEGRATEDTASK 1 NOTE TAKING 双栏式 笔记法 2 columnwayT R L 4 INTEGRATEDTASK 讲义第12页 第3题演示先画好 双栏 注意阅读信息笔记字数不超过15字读阅读每一段的Mainpoint和detail reason 5 PRIVATESPACETRAVEL T privatizedspaceflightindustryR benefitsL 6 PRIVATESPACETRAVEL 阅读笔记 7 PRIVATESPACETRAVEL 听力笔记 8 SCHOOLUNIFORM T schooluniformR stressL 9 SCHOOLUNIFORM 阅读笔记 10 Schooluniform听力笔记 11 INTEGRATEDTASK 2 SUMMARIZING 12 INTEGRATEDTASK SUMMARIZING1 eliminateunnecessaryinformation2 Combineintoasentence 因果关系 13 INTEGRATEDTASK Because 14 INTEGRATEDTASK 展示SUMMARIZING通过题目SCHOOLUNIFORMPRIVATESPACETRAVEL 15 SCHOOLUNIFORM 阅读笔记 16 Schooluniform听力笔记 17 Schooluniform 展示SUMMARIZING通过例题SCHOOLUNIFORM共6句话 18 SCHOOLUNIFORM 1 Ifallstudentswearthesamestyleofuniform clothingcostwillbeless 阅读第1Schooluniformisexpensive pricy andstudentswhowearuniformwillbuytrendyafter schoolclothes 听力第1 19 SCHOOLUNIFORM 2 Witheveryonewearingthesameuniform studentswillnotbeconcernedaboutwhethertheyarewearingthefashionably correctclothes 阅读第2Beingmadetowearaschooluniformmakesmanystudentsfeelmoreself conscious becausetheycanpresentthemselvesinawayofmakingthemcomfortable 听力第2 20 SCHOOLUNIFORM 3 Unityinclothingcaneliminatediscrimination soteasingandbullyingofsomestudentsbyotherswillbesignificantlyreduced 阅读第3Itisimpossibletoeliminateteasingandbullyingbecausetheyareinthatparticularstage alsotheycanpickonotherthingslikemusicandbackpacks 听力第3 21 INTEGRATEDTASK 3 SYNTHESIZING 22 INTEGRATEDTASK SYNTHESIZING把SUMMARIZING的6句话整理成3大段 形成BODYPARTConnecttheinformationfrombothsources 23 SYNTHESIZING Accordingtothelecture thiscontradictsthepointsinthereadingthat Theprofessorarguesthat Thisisdifferentfromthereading whichstatesthat Theteachersaysthat However thisisnotwhatthereadingstates itsaysthat 24 SYNTHESIZING Contrarytothebeliefinthepassagethat theprofessorassertsthat Theauthorofthepassagepointsoutthat whilethelecturenotesthat Accordingtothereading Thepassage spointisdifferentfromtheprofessor whichstatesthat 25 SYNTHESIZING 展示SYNTHESIZING通过例题 PRIVATESPACEFLIGHT 26 PRIVATESPACETRAVEL 阅读笔记 27 PRIVATESPACETRAVEL 听力笔记 28 SYNTHESIZING 1 Accordingtothelecture thecostsofcreatingandrunningtrafficcontrolsystem andoftestingnewspaceshipwillmakespaceflightexpensive Thiscontradictsthepointsmadeinthereadingthatcompetitionintheprivatespaceflightindustryquicklyreducecosts 29 SYNTHESIZING 2 Theprofessorassertsthatprivatespacetravelislikelytopreventorevendelayscientificinnovationsbyluringtopscientistsawayfromseriousresearchestocommercialprojects Contrarytowhatthebeliefinthepassagethatprivatizationofspaceflightwillspeedupbyincreasingthenumberofscientistsworkingintheareaofspaceflight 30 SYNTHESIZING 3 Thelecturenotesthatthetaxpayingpublicwillendupsubsidizingspacestation andsoon becausetheprivateinvest customers cannotcoverthecost Whiletheauthorofthepassagepointsoutthatthecostspaidbycustomersofprivatespaceflightindustrywillsignificantlyreducethefinancialburdenonpublic 31 INTEGRATEDTASK 32 例题 CHARITABLEGIVING T charitablegivingR declineL 33 CHARITABLEGIVING 阅读笔记 34 CHARITABLEGIVING 听力笔记 35 CHARITABLEGIVING 2 mindrill写出BODYPART的第一段 2个句子 阅读一句话 听力一句话 36 CHARITABLEGIVING 1 Theteachersaysthatcharitablegivingwillriseinthefuture asthegrowingcostsofpublicservicesfromincreasingelderlyandretiredpeoplecreateneedforprivatefunding Thisisnotwhatthereadingstates itissaidthatcharitablegivingwilldeclinesubstantially becausegovernmentcancovermostofcharity 37 CHARITABLEGIVING 2 Thetalksaysthatthemismanagementincharitieshasbeenreformed byforcingthecorruptedmanagerstoresign whichgivesdonorsmoreconfidence Inthereading however itisarguedthatdisclosuresofmismanagementofthecharitywillleadtoapermanentdeclineincharitablegiving 38 CHARITABLEGIVING 3 Accordingtothelecture peoplearelearninghowtoavoidfraudulentgivingincharitiesbyreceivingdocumentsbeforedonation byturningdowndonationviatelephone Theprofessor spointisdifferentfromthereading Thereadingstatesthatpeopleareunwillingtodonateduetothecharityfraud 39 INTEGRATEDTASK 科学性文章READING 设想LISTENING反1事实 解释驳 解释2事实 解释3事实 解释 40 EasterIsland T EasterIslandculturedeclineR invasionL internalcauses 41 EasterIslandp16 T EasterIslandculturedeclineR invasionL internalcauses 42 EasterIsland 1 TheteachersaysthatthedeforestationofEasterIslandisthemostplausiblyexplainedbyoverloggingbythenativepopulationwhousethelogstotransportthegiantstatues Thisisnotwhatthereadingstates itissaidthatEasterIslandwasdeforestedbyinvaderswhowereunconcernedaboutnaturalresources 43 EasterIsland 3 Accordingtothelecture ItislikelythatEasterIslandersadoptedanewreligionbecausetheylostfaithintheiroldgods Theprofessor spointisdifferentfromthereading adoptinganewreligioncalled BirdmanWorship ofEasterIslandwasintroducedbyaforeigninvasion 44 EasterIsland 2 Thetalksaysthatthemakingofgiantstatuesstoppedbecauseeconomicdifficulties thelackoffishtoeat leftislanderswithoutanyenergytomakethem andalsoitbecausetherewerenologstotransportthem Inthereading however itisarguedthatthistraditionalculturepracticeofEasterIslandwasdestructedbyinvasion 45 开头段 划去BODYPART只看开头段模板 46 Modulartemplate 开头段 Inthelecture theprofessormadeseveralpointsabout Theprofessorarguesthat However thereadingcontendsthat Thelecturecontradictsthereadingregardingseveralpoints 47 Firstly thelecturerpointsoutthat whichdiffersfromthereadinginthatthereadingstates Theprofessorproveshisideawithanexample areasonthat Thepointmadebytheprofessorcastsdoubtonthereading 48 Secondly contrarytothebeliefinthepassagethat theprofessorclaimsthat byshowingthat Thepointunderminestheclaimmadeinthereading 49 Finally theprofessorstatesthat Thisiscontrarytotheclaimthat Alsotheprofessorexemplifieshis heropinionbyshowingthat Thisdirectlychallengeswhatthereadingpassageindicates Inconclusion thepointsmadeinthelecturecontrastwiththereading 50 INTEGRATEDTASK 1 NOTE TAKING 双栏式 笔记法 2 columnwayT R L 51 ALTRUISM OGp282 52 ALTRUISM的范文 IntroductionParagraphThetopicforthelectureandthereadingpassageis Theprofessorarguesthat whilethereadingcontendsthat Thelecturecontradictsthereadingregardingseveralpoints altruism peopleandanimalsactuallybenefitfromso calledaltruismacts altruismisakindofunselfishbehaviorwhichisquitecommonamongpeopleandanimals 53 BodyParagraph1 Firstly thelecturerpointsoutthat whichdiffersfromthereadinginthatthereadingstates Inotherwords Thepointmadebytheprofessorcastsdoubtonthereading sentinelmeerkatsactuallyeatbeforetheothermeerkats theygowithoutfoodtostandguard sentinelmeerkatshaveafullstomachastheyworkaccordingtorecentstudies 54 BodyParagraph2 Secondly contrarytothebeliefinthepassagethat theprofessorclaimsthat byshowingthat Thepointunderminestheclaimmadeinthereading sentinelmeerkatsplacethemselvesindangerfrompredators thealarmsentinelsgiveoffcandrawawaytheattent