新人教版七级下册（）Unit 11 How was your school trip？写作课（共15张PPT） 人教版.ppt

writing unit11howwasyourschooltrip laizhoubilingualschoolwulei writingaims 1 beabletodescribeyourtripwiththerighttense 能够运用正确的时态描述你的一次旅行 2 toenjoythefunoflife 学会享受生活的乐趣 mytrip wenttothezoo rodeahorse atedeliciousfood visitedthemuseum sawsomeanimals tooksomephotos talkaboutsomethingaboutyourtriponsummervacation makeaconversationingroups wheredidyougo whatdidyoudo howwasthetrip theweather groupwork june23rdyesterdaymyschoolvisitedthezoo itwasreally wewenttherebybus atthezoo isawalotof anditooksomephotos myclassmatesandialsowenttothe andboughtsome itwasagreatday 3a june23rdmyschoolwenttothezooyesterday thetripwas atthezoo i butididn tlikethem ialsowentto withmyclassmates butididn tbuyanythingbecause itwasaboringday interesting animals giftshop gifts boring sawmanyanimals thegiftshop theyweresoexpensive yesterdaymyschoolvisitedthezoo itwasreallyinteresting wewenttherebybus atthezoo isawalotofanimalsanditooksomephotos myclassmatesandialsowenttothegiftshopandboughtsomegifts itwasagreatday howdidbobtalkabouthistrip 总 分 总 iwentonaschooltrip ihadatripto talkabout thetriptoshanghai onyoursummervacation allinall itwasanexcitingtrip ilikedthetripverymuch iwastiredbuthappy iwentonaschooltrip ihadatripto weatherwherewhohowfeelings 感受 allinall itwasanexcitingtrip ilikedthetripverymuch iwastiredbuthappy 总 分 总 talkabout thetriptoshanghai onyoursummervacation atriptoshanghai 先小组讨论文章脉络 然后小组每人2 3句 组成一篇完整的文章 注意 假期期间你到哪里旅行了 请你运用所学语言谈谈你自己的旅程 注意文章的结构与时态的运用 开放性作文 指令性作文 要注意语言的连贯性及文章的基本结构 还要注意时态的正确运用哦 提示 评价标准 注意 先对照评价内容进行自评 补充 然后组内互评 1号4号 2号3号 a档 六项内容齐全 错误3处以内 b档 含5项内容 错误在5处以内 c档 含4项内容 错误在7处以内 1号 a档达标 3 4号学生 c档达标 2号 b档达标 达标标准 whowantstoshowyourself 积极推荐展示组内的优秀作文吧 晒一晒 canyoutalkaboutyourtrip 你学会如何描述自己的一次旅行了吗 canyoulearnsomethingfromother scompositions 你能通过学习别人的作文而有