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Module6Unit1 Aletterofsuggestion 1 Samplewriting1DearCommitteeMembers Iwishtomakeasuggestionaboutakindofarttoputintoournewartgallery Ourdistrictiswell knownforpaper cuttingandthepeopleareveryskilledatit Atthemomentthesepeopledonothaveanywheretodisplaythevarietyandskilloftheircraftsmanship Iftheskillislost theremaybenorecordofit Thegallerywouldprovidethemwithanopportunitytopreservethisskill Ifyouweretoallowthemtodisplaytheirexpertisehere Ibelievewecouldmakeourdistrictfamousandencouragemoretouriststocomehere Ihopeyouwillconsidermysuggestionfavorably Yoursfaithfully 2 Ourdistrictiswell knownforpaper cuttingandthepeopleareveryskilledatit 1 skillofworkersAtthemomentthesepeopledonothaveanywheretodisplaythevarietyandskilloftheircraftsmanship 2 noothergalleryIftheskillislost theremaybenorecordofit 3 theremaybenorecord1 2 3点强调建艺术馆的必要性Thegallerywouldprovidethemwithanopportunitytopreservethisskill 4 preservetheskillIfyouweretoallowthemtodisplaytheirexpertisehere Ibelievewecouldmakeourdistrictfamousandencouragemoretouriststocomehere 5 famous moretourists4 5点强调建艺术馆的益处 3 Samplewriting2DearCommitteeMembers Iwishtomakeasuggestionaboutthekindofartworkthatshouldgointoournewgallery AsIhavecarefullyresearchedthesubjectandhavehadmanydiscussionswithresidentsinourdistrict Ibelievemysuggestionwillbepopularwithmostpeople Ihavediscoveredthatwehavemanyfineartistsinourdistrict Wehavemanypainters bothmodernandtraditional somesculptorsandafewexcellentpotters Wealsohaveagroupofpeoplewhomeetregularlytopractisetraditionalfolkart Atpresent noneofthesegroupshaveaplacetodisplaytheirwork Thegallerywouldprovidesuchaplaceandwouldhelppeopleinthedistricttolearnmoreaboutourartists Ibelieveagalleryoflocalartcraftwouldencouragetheartistsandwouldalsomakeothersproudofourlocaltalent Idohopeyouwillconsidermysuggestion Yoursfaithfully 4 一 篇章结构及内容 一 首段 表明写作意图 简洁 精炼 二 主体段落 1 要点全面 包括给出的 和要求扩展的 建议内容和理由 2 条理清晰 要点清晰 顺序合理 之间要有连接词或过渡语 理由充分 与建议内容之间有必然的因果关系 3 合情合理 建议内容要入情入理 有合理性和说服力 4 礼貌得体 语言要委婉礼貌 使人易于接受 不能写成批评 命令或投诉信 三 尾段 希望对方接受建议 并能对其有所帮助 二 时态 多用一般现在时和一般将来时 5 常用套语 A 建议信开头常用句式1 Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof 2 Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto andI lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions 3 Iknowyouhavetroublein afterreadingyourletter 4 Iwishtomakeasuggestionabout 6 B 表达建议 body 1 first firstofall firstly secondly then afterthat intheend finally Meanwhile what smore besides moreover Consequently therefore asaconsequence asaresult 2 Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould 3 Iwouldliketosuggest recommendthatyou should 4 IfIwereyou Iwould 5 Inmyopinion itwouldbewiseto 6 Whenitcomestosuchasituation Iwouldliketosuggestthatyou should 7 Itwouldbeagoodideaifyoucould 7 C 建议信结尾常用句式 1 Thankyouforyourconsideration Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals suggestions practical useful helpful beneficial 2 Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount consideration 3 Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard 4 Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit 8 假如你叫孙军 是恩施高中的学生 要给市长写一封信 反映学校门前交通拥挤现象 包括以下要点 参考词汇 穿行threadone sway天桥overpass 9 第一步 审题养成重视审题的习惯 虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的 但审题仍然十分重要 现以样题为例 谈谈如何审题 第一人称 建议信 建议原因建议内容 说理逻辑性 一般现在时 10 适当运用模板 11 DearBob I mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto 引出主题 Hereareafewsuggestions First itisimportantto Then italsohelpsto Besides itshouldbeagoodideato Youcanalso 此四句不同的句式提出建议 Asto Isuggest 有时根据需要具体到某一反面 Inaddition 其他建议 I msure 预测可能的结果 给对方以行动的信心和决心 I mlookingforwardto 表达愿望 Sincerelyyours LiHua 12 第二步 搜索相关词组或句型 1 学校和一所小学毗邻 对着大街 高峰期交通繁忙 2 加之孩子小 家长接送 交通更拥挤 3 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险 13 学校与一所小学毗邻 对着大街 standnextto primary face befacedwith themainstreet Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool facedwiththemainstreet 推荐句型 非谓语结构 Standing Locatednexttoaprimaryschool ourschoolisfacedwith facesthemainstreet Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool facedwith facingamainstreet 倒装 14 It scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhours 高峰期交通繁忙 traffic duringtherushhours Duringtherushhours therearesomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroadthat Duringtherushhours thereisalotoftraffic so that with结构 Withsomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroad 15 加之孩子小 家长接送 交通更拥挤 send to fetch 非谓语结构 Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome whichmakesthetrafficheavier Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome makingthesituationmoreserious which 16 加之孩子小 家长接送 交通更拥挤What smore pickup make Tomakethingsworse what sworse manyparentscomingtopickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded Inaddition Additionally What smore parentsoftenattendtheirkidstoschool resultinginmoreserioustrafficjams Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage 17 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险 threadone sway whendoing Itisdangerousforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad 固定句型Itis adj for todo 18 Studentsareriskingtheirlivestothreadtheirwayamongcars 润色小建议 2 Someareexposedtodangerwhencrossingtheocean seaofcars 灵活运用其它的短语进行意译 适当增加形容词和副词 itisextremelydangerous itisofgreatdanger 19 政府应采取措施 如修天桥等 suggest suggestion takesteps measures actiontodo suchas Mysuggestionisthatthegovernmentshould 表语从句 固定句型Itishightimethat 虚拟语气 Itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuilding Isuggestthatthegovernmentshouldtakemeasuressuchasbuildinganoverpass 简单句 20 1 Inordertoreleasethestressoftrafficproblems 润色小建议 2 Aimedatsolvingtheseproblems thegovernmentshould A 适当添加一些意思 过渡句 3 Seeingthesematters neverwillIstopurgingourgovernmenttotakesomemeasures Forthesakeofimprovingthequalityoftraffic itissignificanttobuild B 添加形容词和副词 Istronglysuggest active effectivemeasures 21 第三步 连句成文 但要注意 篇章的连贯性 Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool facingamainstreet it scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour childrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage it sofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass A Asaconsequence B Accordingtothephenomenonstatedabove C Whenitcomestotrafficjams D Whatmakesthingsworseisthat A C D B 22 反面范例 23 反面范例 24 反面范例 25 不推荐字体 26 优秀作文范例 优点 运用therebe句型 介词短语 从句 非谓语 套用句式等来提亮句子 使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底 27 优秀作文范例 优点 该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等来提亮句子 使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴 28 假定你是李华 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文 请你根据下列要点写回信 要点 参加中文学习班 看中文书刊 电视 学唱中文歌曲 交中国朋友 注意