高考英语二轮复习 专题辅导与测试 第六周练（三）写作板块练练规范.doc

第六周练（三）写作板块练-练规范第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。(2017山东六校联考)the day before mothers day, everybody around me was talking about what was most suitable gift that they would buy for their mothers. buying flowers were what most students would do. however, i wanted to do something differently. as then i lived in school and couldnt go back home on mothers day, so i decided to call her and sent her my best wishes. i searched the internet for suggestions, what were very useful, and i read it carefully. when i called my mother, however, i had the feel that someone elses words would have no meaning to her. so i gave in and just told my mother i loved her and thanked her to all she had done for me.答案：第一句：most前加the第二句：werewas第三句：differentlydifferent第四句：去掉so; sentsend第五句：whatwhich; itthem第六句：feelfeeling第七句：inup; tofor第二节：书面表达(满分25分)(2017安徽省蚌埠市高三第三次教学质量检查)假定你是李华，你计划暑假与父母去纽约进行为期两周的旅游。请你给你在纽约的笔友tom写一封电子邮件，请求他帮助你解决以下问题：1推荐一家旅馆(周边环境、设施)；2推荐旅游线路；3询问是否可以接机。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：地铁subwaydear tom，i will take a twoweek trip to new york with my parents in the summer holiday. im looking forward to your early reply.yours，li hua参考范文：dear tom，i will take a twoweek trip to new york with my parents in the summer holiday. im writing to ask you to do me a favor.wed like you to recommend us a hotel near the subway in order to get around new york more easily. and the hotel with a private kitchen is better because we want to cook meals by ourselves. in addition, please recommend a reasonable tour route so that we can save a lot of time. i know there are many places of interest in new york. more importantly, i wonder whether you can pick us up at the airport because we arent familiar with new york. w