高考英语二轮复习 专题辅导与测试 第十二周练（三）写作板块练练规范.doc

第十二周练（三）写作板块练-练规范第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。(2017合肥高三第二次教学质量检测)nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work.it causes more traffic jam and accidents.as the student, what can we do to guarantee our safe? first of all, the traffic rules must be strict obeyed.when we cross streets, wait until the traffic light turn green.next, dont forget walk on the pavement.finally, i think it very dangerously to wear earphones while walking or cycling.since we cant pay enough attention on the traffic around us, so accidents may happen.taking good care of ourselves and dont let our parents worry about us.答案：第二句：jamjams第三句：thea; safesafety第四句：strictstrictly第五句：turnturns第六句：forget后加to第七句：dangerouslydangerous第八句：onto; 去掉so第九句：takingtake第二节：书面表达(满分25分)(2017南昌十校二模)假定你是李华。来自澳大利亚的交换生kenton首次离家来中国读书，因生活上和语言交流上有困难，他萌生了回家的念头。不知如何是好的他在某网站上发帖求助，请你据此给他回帖。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。dear kenton， i am looking forward to your reply.yours sincerely，li hua参考范文：dear kenton，i am sorry to hear you have difficulty with life and communication abroad, but im willing to help you out of trouble.to tell you the truth, it is natural that you are missing your parents and want to go home.but personally, i dont think we can live with our parents all the life.thus, it is a good chance for you to be more independent.you can call your parents more often instead of giving up your study.if you dont mind, i would like to be your friend.we can chat online frequently, which will improve your chinese a lot.only by communicating with others ca