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文段表达一：根据英文提示的内容，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。在你的生活中总有挥之不去的记忆。假如你是李明，在即将与高老师分开之时，请你按以下英文提示用书信形式写下你想对她说的话。After three years staying together, you will say goodbye to Miss Gao. You must have a lot to say her . We want to know:l what you want to say to your teacher most;l why you want to say so;l what you want to tell her about your future plan.注意：1.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数, 请不要抄写在答题纸上。2.请不要写出真实姓名和学校名称。答案：Dear Mrs Gao, I want to say”Thank you” most at the moment when I have to say goodbye to you. I can never pay you back for your kindness and your patience. I used to be too shy to speak English in front of the class. You found my problem and helped me out. I still remember your smile on the day when I won first prize in the English speech competition. It was you who gave me the confidence. I have a dream of going to Beijing University in the future. Though its not easy for me, Im sure your love will encourage me to achieve it.Yours, Li Ning作文层次要点分析：Dear Mrs Gao,I want to say _Yours,Li Ning书面表达二：2011年海淀二摸根据中文提示内容，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的文段。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束！在此离别之际，恰逢21世纪英语周刊征稿，请以“A helpful person in my school life”为题，介绍一位老师或同学，描述一件发生在你们之间的、令你印象深刻的事情并谈谈你的感受。答案：A Helpful Person in My School LifeI have met a lot of people in my school life. One of them is my good friend Emma. She is the best friend Ive made in the class, who is always there for me when I am in need of help.Recently, I found myself getting upset easily. I often complained about the stress and even couldnt concentrate on studies. Emma noticed my problem and spent two hours with me one day, talking about her own stress and how she was dealing with difficulties. From her, I learnt that the only way to beat difficulties is keeping trying instead of complaining. And I felt much more confident to fight against them together with Emma. “A friend in need is a friend indeed”. A good friend is who makes you happy when you are crying and strong when you are giving in, and that is Emma to me. 作文层次要点分析：书面表达三：假如你是李芳，即将告别难忘的初中时代。请你给远方的朋友Lucy写一封信，讲述曾经发生在你身边的一件事，以及你对此事的感受。提示词语：school life, happy, sad, exciting, embarrassing, go, do, think, hope 答案：Dear Lucy,How time flies! I will graduate from middle school in a month. Im eager（渴望的;热心的） to share my happiness and sadness with you. Thinking back（回想）, I always remembered the moving moment. One day, when I stepped into （走进；进入）the classroom, my classmate told me that Mr. Sun, our math teacher, couldnt come to school because of a terrible traffic accident. I was so worried about him that I went to the hospital to visit him. Although he got badly hurt, he smiled to me as usual. Such a beautiful smile made me warm and moved. Mr. Sun is the teacher who not only gives me knowledge but also encourages me to be positive all the time. I will never forget his smiles. Would you like to tell me some of your unforgettable experiences? Yours, Li Fang作文层次要点分析：书面表达四：假如你叫李雷，在你的成长过程中肯定得到过许多人的帮助。这些人群中有你的爸爸、妈妈、老师、同学。毕业在即，请你根据以下提示给他（她）写一封不少于60词英文信。在信中表达感激之情；回忆印象至深的一件事（一次帮助，或一次鼓励或一次批评）;表达你的真实情感，说出你的祝福或建议。信中不得出现真实校名和姓名；英文提示词供选用：at this moment, say” Thank you” to, still remember/never forget, in trouble, take care of, encourage, say goodbye to, so lucky to be, hope,答案：Dear Miss Zhao,As you know, I ve made a great progress in English with your help. At this moment, I want to say Thank you. I still remember when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn t do well in it. I lost my confidence and almost gave it up. As soon as you knew it, you had a long talk with me kindly about how to learn English well. You always encouraged me whenever I made a little progress. Ever since then I have been interested in it and improved myself a lot. Though I have to say goodbye to you very soon, I still think I am so lucky to be your student. Hope you can relax yourself and keep healthy.Best wishes to you!Yours Li Lei作文层次要点分析：Yours, Li Lei书面表达五：经过三年的中学生活，你一定有了自己的好朋友。你最好的朋友是谁？他/她有什么特点？业余时间你们经常一起干什么？围绕你们之间曾发生过的一件小事，简单谈谈你衡量好友的标准。good friends , best, like, spare time, remember, think， each other.答案：Everyone has his own good friend. So do I. My best friend is A. He is 16 years old. He has a round face with big eyes. And he looks very tall and thin. In our spare time we often play football together because we both like sports. Besides, he is good at not only English but also maths, but Im weak in maths. So he often helps me with it after school.I still remember that he was ill last week and couldnt go to school. So I went to his home to help him with his lessons after school every day. He felt very happy.I think good friends should not only help each other but also share happiness and sadness together. I believe that “ A friend in need is a friend indeed.” 作文层次要点分析书面表达六：一家英文报社正在开展题为 The Person I Want to Thank的征文活动，请你写一篇文章参加比赛。内容包括：1.你想要感谢的人是谁。 2.举例谈谈你感谢他/她的原因。 3.你有什么感想或受到了哪些教育。 注意：请不要写出真实校名和姓名。 want, say thank you to, kind, friendly, take care of，encourage，cheer up答案： I want to say thank you to my mother. My mother is kind and friendly. She helps me a lot. She takes good care of my daily life. For example, every morning, she wakes me up and cooks breakfast for me. When Im in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and cheers me up. I still remember that once I argued with my best friend and became upset. My mother talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem. With her help, I became a top student in my class. Im very thankful for all that she has done for me. I believe she will be proud of me in the near future.作文层次要点分析: 书面表达七：初中生活即将结束，三年的学习一定令你难忘。思考一下，三年中哪一个人给你的帮助最大？请简单介绍一下他（她），并谈谈你的感想和体会。注意：请不要写