2020版高考英语二轮复习35分写作规范练（四）.docx

35分写作规范练(四)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。2019临川联考In order to encourage the seniors to take exercise and relax them, we are going to organize a mountainclimbing activity in April 10. We were to gather at the school gate and start at 7：20 am. by bus and get back at 7：00 pm. Well climb Huangshan Mountain in the morning, on which top well have a picnic at the noon. In the afternoon well be divided into group and have a free time. Remember take photos and make notes for the photo exhibition or the essay contest to be held late at our school. Besides, taking your lunch and drinking water with you. Unless you want to join, please come to Students Union and sign up before April 5.答案与解析：In order to encourage the seniors to take exercise and relax , we are going to organize a mountainclimbing activity April 10. We to gather at the school gate and start at 7：20 am. by bus and get back at 7：00 pm. Well climb Huangshan Mountain in the morning, on top well have a picnic at noon. In the afternoon well be divided into and have a free time. Remember take photos and make notes for the photo exhibition or the essay contest to be held at our school. Besides, your lunch and drinking water with you. you want to join, please come to Students Union and sign up before April 5.them改为themselves此处relax的动作发出者，即其逻辑主语the seniors与其宾语为同一对象，应用反身代词作relax的宾语，故将them改为themselves。in改为on具体某一天前用介词on，故将in改为on。were改为are全文主体时态为一般时态，因此此处应用一般现在时表示将来意义，故将were改为are。which改为whose此处为非限制性定语从句，引导词作top的定语，表示所属关系，应用whose，故将which改为whose。删除第二个theat noon为固定短语，意为“在正午”，中间不用定冠词，故删除第二个the。group改为groups根据语境可知，此处表示“我们被分成几个组”，group为可数名词，此处应用复数形式，故将group改为groups。在Remember后加toremember to do sth.为固定用法，意为“记得要做某事”，故在Remember后加to。late改为later此处指之后在“我们”学校举办的照片展或者散文大赛。late意为“晚，迟”，later意为“后来；随后”，故将late改为later。taking改为take根据上文的“Remember. and make notes for.”可知，此处也是一个祈使句，应用动词原形开头，故将taking改为take。Unless改为If句意为：如果你想加入，请于4月5日前来学生会报名。unless意为“除非”，if意为“如果”，此处应用if引导条件状语从句，故将Unless改为If。第二节书面表达(满分25分)2019南昌二模假定你是李华，你和几个朋友打算去参观茶园，想邀请美国交流生Henry同往。请你给他写一封邮件告知其活动安排。内容包括：1时间和地点；2学习如何沏茶、品茶；3介绍中国茶文化的历史和发展。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Henry，_Yours，Li Hua参考范文：Dear_Henry，Some of my friends and I plan to pay a visit to the tea garden near our school this Sunday. Ive learned that you are interested in Chinese tea culture, and I wonder if you could join us.I think it will be an enjoyable experience for you to learn something about the history and development of Chinese tea culture there. And I bet you will be impressed by the traditional craftsmanship of making tea, which includes washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, an