湖北省兴山县高考英语一轮复习 短文改错练习3.doc

湖北兴山县2017高考英语短文改错（一轮）练习短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均限一词。2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。from the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is，they are short-sightedas we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesightbut do you know how to protect your eyesight? first, dont keep your eyes work for a long timeyoud better have rest after you have studied an hour or sosecond, pay much attention to the followingdont read under the sun or in a poor light; dont to read in bed or in a moved busthird, do eye-exercise every dayit will also help you keep good eyesightand last, you should have enough sleeponly you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from become short-sighted 【参考答案】6.1students后（加who或去are ） 2which（改it）3work（改working） 4have后（加a） 5under（改in） 6dont to（去掉to ）7moved（moving） 8eye-exercise （改eye-exercises） 9only 后（加if）10become（改becoming） (2015嘉兴市二模)my best friends gave me a present in a box on my birthday. it was a little heavy, which made me very curiously. so i intended to open it at once but she prevented me do so. she said i mustnt open it until i went back home but gave me a naughty smile. although there is a strong desire in my mind to know that was inside the box, i just did as she said. on the way to home, all i did was thinking about the puzzle. finally i opened the box. it was a cup printing with a pink wordfriendship.it was so lovely that i liked very much.now, every time i use a cup, i will think about her and the friendship between us.参考答案：my best gave me a present in a box on my birthday. it was a little heavy, which made me very . so i intended to open it at once but she prevented me so. she said i mustnt open it until i went back home gavea naughty smile. although there a strong desire in my mind to know inside the box, i just did as she said. on the way to home, all i did was thinking about the puzzle. finally i opened the box. it was a cup with a pink wordfriendship.it was so lovely that i liked very much.now, every time i use cup, i will think about her and the friendship between us.1命题立意：考查名词。解析：friendsfriend根据下文的a present判断friend应用单数形式，故friends改为friend。2命题立意：考查形容词。解析：curiouslycurious 根据前面的动词made判断此处是形容词作make的宾补，应用形容词形式，故curiously改为curious。3命题立意：考查非谓语动词。解析：dodoing根据词组prevent sb. (from)doing sth.阻止某人做某事，故do doing。4命题立意：考查连词。解析：butandbut前后的两个动作是并列关系，故but改为and。5命题立意：考查时态。解析：iswas根据上下文语境应该用过去时。故iswas。6命题立意：考查宾语从句。解析：thatwhatknow的宾语从句中缺少主语，应用what引导。故that改为what。7命题立意：考查副词。解析：home前的to去掉home是副词，前面不用加介词。故去掉to。8命题立意：考查非谓语动词。解析：printingprintedcup是print的动作承受者，应用过去分词作定语。故printing printed。9命题立意：考查代词。解析：liked后加it根据本句的句型：so.that.如此以至于。状语从句中的liked缺少宾语，应用it代替前文的cup。故加上it。10命题立意：考查冠词。解析：athecup在文中是第二次出现，应用定冠词修饰。故athe。 (2013东北三省三校第二次联考)yesterday, li mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)when she got there，she refused. the salesman said that he wouldnt take it back if she showed him the receipt. thinking it was no way out，li mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her. they found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. many eyes were staring at her, what made li mei very embarrassing. luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.【参考答案】：yesterday, li mei to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)when she got there，she refused. the salesman said that he wouldnt take it back she showed him the receipt. thinking was no way out，li mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. suddenly two shop stopped her and began to search her. they found the shirt in the bag and looked at it . many eyes were staring at her, made li mei very . luckily, salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go. 短文改错-记叙文【2015届浙江省“温州八校”高三返校联考】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 例如： it was very nice to get your invitation to spendweekend with you. luckily thei was completely tree then, so ill to say “yes. ill arrive in bristol at around 8:00p.m. amin friday evening.on it isnt hard to grow up into a responsible members of society. i can well remember an incident that happens on a rainy sunday afternoon. i was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked on by a passing car, it drove off quickly. a man immediately rushed to a girl to give her first aid and i joined in without hesitation. luckily she was not badly injured but we sent her to the nearest hospital. comparing with the escaped driver, i am proud of what i did.as a member of society, i am aware of that being responsible is that it takes to make a better society.【答案】【知识点】 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】第一节 members-member 考查名词单复数。句意：成长为一名有责任的成员并不难。因为前面有a,故用单数形式。第二节 happens-happened 考查动词的时态。我记得这件事发生在一个下雨的周日下午。事发生在过去，故用一般过去时。第三节 waiting后面加for 考查固定搭配。wait for sth等待某事；第四节 knocked on -down 考查固定搭配。knock down sb 撞倒某人；第五节 itwhich 考查定语从句连接词。which指代 a passing car第六节 a the 考查冠词。句意：一个男人立刻冲向那个女生给她急救；the girl上文已经提到过，表示特指； 第七节 but-and 考查连词；句意：幸运地是她伤的不重并且我们送她去了最近的医院。两个句子是并列关系；第八节 comparing-compared 考查非谓语动词。句意：与逃跑的司机相比，我对我的所作所为感到很骄傲；第九节 aware of 去掉of 考查固定短语。be aware of sth 意识到某事；be aware that 后面加句子。第十节 that what 考查表语从句。句意: 做为社会的一员，我意识到，责任正是这个社会所需要的。【由内蒙古包头市201模拟改编】 阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项(a,b,c和d)中，选出最佳选项。millions of sports lovers are sill thinking about one thing-the winter olympics in sochi russia. close to 2900 men and women competed in the 2014 winter games about a month ago.the olympics brought a lot of attention to sochi，a city on the black sea, which is a popular area for vacation travelers. the area is known for its mild winters，with warm to summer.at least $50 billion was spent on the 2014 winter games, making it the costliest olympics in history. seven billion dollars was spent on the 2010 winter games in vancouver, canada. olympic officials chose sochi to host the 2014 games almost seven years ago, at that time，russian president vladimir putin said the games would cost about $13 billion. yet times his estimate. so where did all the money go? some observers say the high cost is partly the result of security measures. brian jenkins，a terrorism expert from the rand corporation，gave the following explanation. there were anywhere between 70 ,000 and 100 , 000 policemen and military troops deployed around the city. the main threat came from separatist and islamist groups from the north caucasus, especially from chechnya and dagestan. one group claimed responsibility for two suicide bombings in volgograd last december. the attacks killed more than 30 people. the city is only about 600 kilometers away from sochi. bruce hoffman is a terrorism export from georgetown university in washington dc. he says the increased security made sochi a difficult target for terrorists. it is thought that the terrorists intention was to make life difficult for the russians and to create some sort of incident that would take away the enjoyment.the last olympians from around the world on russian soil was in 1980 .that was a year after soviet troops invaded afghanistan. more than sixty countries didnt take part in the moscow summer games to show their anger.1. according to the passage, why did the sochi winter olympics cost so much?a. because it was held at an area popular for vacation travelers.b. becauae the russian government wanted to make it the best ever held.c. because security measures at sochi were stricter than before.d. because the original plan was made 7 years before.2. it can be known from the passage that bruce hoffman was a. a terrorism expert from the usab.the writer who wrote this articlec. an athlete who competed in sochid. a terrorism expert from rand corporation3. which of the following is false? a. sochi olympics cost about 4 times as estimated. b. next winter olympics will be held in vancouver. c. many countries refused. to attend the 1980 olympics. d.security is often a problem in international sport games.4. the terrorists might have attacked sochi olympics because a. they wanted to make trouble for the russians b.they thought russia shouldnt spend so much on sport c. they thought putin was not a nice president d. they were not interested in winter sports【参考答案】1-4、caba 阅读理解。阅读下列短文, 从给的四个选项 (a、b、c和d) 中, 选出最佳选项。a classical guitarist was excited to hear from new york city police that his valuable guitar had been found. it disappeared almost a year ago when he got out of a cab and forgot to take the guitar with him. laurence lennon, 44, said he was running late that day. he was talking to his manager on his cell phone when he dashed out of the taxi. he said that he gave the driver $ 60 and told him to keep the change. he walked through the front doors of the concert hall still talking on the phone to his manager.upon discovering his loss, lennon used his cell phone to call the police. the policewoman asked him for the name of the cab company, the number of the cab, and the name of the driver. he said that she had to be kidding.she told lennon that he could file a missing items report at the police station or online. lennon asked for the online address. she told him that finding the guitar might take a couple of yearsfinding guitars was not as important as finding murderers and marijuana smokers. then she told him to have a nice day.“this year has been depressing，” said lennon. “i had to postpone the recording of two new cds. ive been using borrowed guitars. and i was losing hope of ever recovering my guitar.”lennon was reunited with his $ 100,000 musical instrument yesterday. the case and the guitar had been discovered in the corner of a coffee house only two blocks from where lennon had lost it in the first place. lennon had offered a $ 10,000 reward for its return. he said he would give the reward to the coffee house owner, who had informed the police.1it can be inferred from this reading passage that_.alennon gave the driver much more money than what was actually neededblennon couldnt give any useful information about the driver and his cabclennon was too busy talking to his friend to remember to pay the cab driverdlennon used to work at the concert hall in new york city答案：b推理判断题。根据第二段第二句“the policewo