高考英语 基础写作指导课件.ppt

高考英语基础写作指导 instructionsofbasicwriting standardsforevaluation 句子内容的完整性 completeness 句子结构的正确性 correctness 句子结构的复杂性 variety 句子内容的连贯性 coherence let simproveacomposition 2008广东高考基础写作你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者 负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍 写作内容 请根据以下中文提纲 编写射击项目的英语介绍 背景 射击最初只是生存工具 19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动 1896 第一次成为奥运项目 1904 中断 1928 中断 1932 重回奥运会 1968 第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 现状 稳步发展 1896奥运会只有三项射击项目 现今有17项 起源originate 中断suspend draft 1 shootingwasoriginatedasameansofsurvivalanddevelopedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury 2 thesportfirstappearedin1896 butitwassuspendedduringthe1904and1928games 3 thesportreturnedtotheolympicsin1932 4 womenwerefirstallowedtocompeteintheolympicshootingin1968 5 thesporthasgrownsteadilyfromjust3shootingeventsatthe1896olympicgamesto17today skillsforimprovement 名词短语作同位语介词短语作定语或状语形容词短语作定语或状语非谓语动词with复合结构不定式短语简单句 并列句与复合句之间的转换强调句倒装句被动句过渡性词语 插入语等的使用 improvement 1 shootingwasoriginatedasameansofsurvivalanddevelopedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury a shooting originatedasameansofsurvival developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury b onlyinthelate19thcenturydidshooting firstasameansofsurvival developintoasport 2 thesportfirstappearedin1896 butitwassuspendedduringthe1904and1928games a thesport whichfirstappearedin1896 waseversuspendedduringthe1904and1928games b thesport firstappearingin1896 waseversuspendedduringthe1904and1928games 3 thesportreturnedtotheolympicsin1932 a itwasin1932thatthesportreturnedtotheolympics b notuntil1932didthesportreturntotheolympics c itwasnotuntil1932thatthesportreturnedtotheolympics d itwasonlyfouryearsbeforethesportreturnedtotheolympics 4 womenwerefirstallowedtocompeteintheolympicshootingin1968 a notuntil1968werewomenfirstallowedtocompeteintheolympicshooting b itwasnotuntil1968thatwomenwerefirstallowedtocompeteintheolympicgames 5 thesporthasgrownsteadilyfromjust3shootingeventsatthe1896olympicgamesto17today a withthesportbecomingmoreandmorepopular ithasgrownsteadilyfromjust3shootingeventsatthe1896olympicgamesto17today shooting originatedasameansofsurvival developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury thesport whichfirstappearedin1896 waseversuspendedduringthe1904and1928games itwasonlyfouryearsbeforethesportreturnedtotheolympic however notuntil1968werewomenfirstallowedtocompeteintheolympicshooting withthesportbecomingmoreandmorepopular ithasgrownsteadilyfromjust3shootingeventsatthe1896olympicgamesto17today haveanothertry 写作内容 2006年10月 我国著名歌唱家宋祖英在美国肯尼迪艺术中心举办了名为好一朵美丽的茉莉花的个人独唱音乐会 在音乐会上 她演唱了 辣妹子 好日子 等16首经典曲目 三次谢幕之后 她用英语演唱了美国人民非常熟悉的 美丽的美国 使许多观众感动得流下了眼泪 因为她的精彩表演 肯尼迪艺术中心授予她艺术金奖 这场音乐会加深了中美的相互了解 个人独唱音乐会 asoloconcert肯尼迪艺术中心 johnf kennedycenter好一朵美丽的茉莉花 whatabeautifuljasmine 辣妹子 好日子 美丽的美国 spicysister happylife americathebeautiful 三次谢幕 threecurtaincalls艺术金奖 goldartaward songzuyingisafamouschinesesinger inoctober 2006shestagedasoloconcertatthejohnf kennedycenter theconcertwasentitled whatabeautifuljasmine inoctober 2006songzuying afamouschinesesinger stagedasoloconcertentitled whatabeautifuljasmine atthejohnf kennedycenter shesang16classicalsongsaltogetherattheconcert thesongsincluded spicysister and happylife attheconcert shesang16classicalsongsaltogether including spicysister and happylife afterthreecurtaincalls shefinallysang americathebeautiful inenglish itisanamericansongfamiliartoallamericans itmovedmanypeopletotears afterthreecurtaincalls shefinallysang americathebeautiful inenglish anamericansongfamiliartoallamericans whichmovedmanypeopletotears forherwonderfulperformances shereceivedgoldartawardfromthejohnf kennedycenter asaresultof owingto duetoherwonderfulperformances shereceived wongoldartawardfromthejohnf kennedycenter for asaresultof owingto duetoherwonderfulperformances shewasawarded wasgivengoldartprizebythejohnf kennedycenter theconcerthelpstodeepentheunderstandingbetweenchinaandamerica thereisnodoubtthattheconcerthelpstodeepentheunderstandingbetweenchinaandamerica let ssharebeautifulwritings inoctober 2006 songzuying afamouschinesesinger stagedasoloconcertentitled whatabeautifuljasmine atthejohnf kennedycenter attheconcert shesang16classicalsongsaltogether including spicysister and happylife afterthreecurtaincalls shefinallysang americathebeautiful inenglish anamericansongfamiliartoallamericans whichmovedmanypeopletotears forherwonderfulperformances shereceivedgoldartawardfromthejohnf kennedycenter thereisnodoubtthattheconcerthelpstodeepentheunderstandingbetweenchinaan