高考英语一轮复习 写作指导四 过渡词语课件 新人教版.ppt

写作指导四过渡词语 1过渡词语指导一 根据过渡词本身在文章中起的作用 主要分为以下四类 即 起 承 转 合 1 表示 起 的过渡词 用于开篇引出扩展句 如 atfirst atpresent currently recently first ly ingeneral inthebeginning tobeginwith firstofall generallyspeaking inthefirstplace tostartwith presently now等 2 表示 承 的过渡词 用来承接上下文 如 after afterthat afterwards bythistime afterafewdays certainly aftera while also too forexample forinstance forthispurpose besides what smore fromnowon inaddition second inadditionto secondly infact simi larly inotherwords inparticular inthesameway bytheway indeed third meanwhile thirdly moreover foranother nodoubt suchas obviously later ofcourse truly particularly等 3 表示 转 的过渡词 用来表示不同或相反的意见 如 afterall fortunately allthesame however anyway inspiteof atthesametime luckily but though although in bycontrast onthecontrary eventhough otherwise unfortunately yet等 4 表示 合 的过渡词 用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容 如 aboveall accordingly asaresult insum ashasbeennoted insummary asihavesaid onthewhole atlast therefore thus briefly tospeakfrankly bydo ingso tosumup 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thehatistherightsizeforyou andmoreover itgoeswellwithyourskin thatistosaythestockpriceisdeclining thatistosay iamlosingmoney inotherwordsiamnothungry inotherwords ireallydislikethefoodinthiscanteen equallyimportantyoushouldreadmorenewsfromnewspapers andequallyimportant keepaneyeonthenewsfromtheradio what smoreitisharmfultomyhealth andwhat smore itisnogoodtomywork lastbutnotleastlastbutnotleast mythanksshouldgotoeverymemberofmyclass 5 表示比较关系equallyasateacher ishouldteachwell butequally ishouldstudywell incontrasttoincontrasttoyourbelief iquitedisagreewithyou insteadifyoudon tgo i llgoinstead onthecontrary youthinkilikeit onthecontrary idislikeit incontrastitishotinthedaytime butincontrastit sverycoldatnight whilewearehappyinchina whilemostafricansliveunhappily 2写作典例 2014安徽 为了帮助中学生健康成长 某中学英文报开辟了 heart to heart 专栏 假设你是该栏目的编辑jamie 收到一封署名为worried的求助信 信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰 近日容易发脾气 使正常 的学习和生活受到了影响 请用英文给该同学写一封回信 内容要点如下 1 表示理解并给予安慰 2 提出建议并说明理由 注意 1 词数120左右 2 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息 3 信的开头与结尾已为你拟好 不计入总词数 参考词汇 tempern 脾气 情绪 hiworried i msorrytoknowthatyou rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment yours jamie 范文 hiworried i msorrytoknowthatyou rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment thetruthisthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong soyoudon thavetoworrysomuch theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou llregret herearethreeusefultips first talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel thisisagoodwayoflet tingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself second gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger andthird remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits ihopeyou llsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasnormal yours jamie 写作点评 1 第一段中准确地使用了关系副词when引导的定语从句 一下子就抓住了读者的注意力 2 第二段使用了first second andthird来连接作者提出的这几条建议 表达清晰 使文章前后连贯顺畅 3跟踪训练 2015辽宁大连第二十高级中学期中 假设你是李华 请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记 记述你周末或在假期中帮助家人做家务的一次经历 写作要点 1 做家务的理由 2 做家务的过程 3 你的感受 注意 1 词数不少于100 2 开头已给 不计入总词数 3 不可写真实姓名 注意时态 iaman18 year oldmiddleschoolstudent 范文 i man18 year oldmiddleschoolstudent ihavebeenbusywithmystudyandseldomhelpedmyparentswiththehousework feelingquitesorryforthat ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp lastsunday whenmyparentswentoutshopping isuddenlygotanidea whynotgivetheroomsathoroughcleaning firstly icollectedallthebooks newspapersandotherthingssca