广东省湛江第一中学高考英语复习 Dynamic writing课件.ppt

dynamicwriting 1 commonmistakes 缺胳膊少腿类少主语thoughwasaskedseveraltimes heremainedsilent 少谓语however otherstudentsagainsttheidea 少宾语heseatedonthegrass reading 少介词besides i measytogetalong andenjoyworkingwithothers 画蛇添足类语义重复hereturnedbackthebookyesterday 谓语重复butthereareabout60percentofthestudentssupporttheidea 宾语多余 重复hedressedhisclothesquicklyandwentout 介词多余wemuststudyhardtoserveforthepeoplebetterinthefuture 张冠李戴类误用主语don tworry yourbodywillgetwellsoon 误用谓语timepastquicklybeforewerealizedit 误用宾语iwasverypleasedtohearfromyourletter 误用表语thepriceofthehouseisveryexpensive 误用定语chinahasmorepopulationthanjapan 误用介词therobbersranawaytowardthedirectionoftheresidentialarea 乱点鸳鸯类主谓不当ourschoolhastakenplacealotofgreatchangesinrecentyears 动宾不当goon please i mjusthearingyou 系表不当mydreamhasatlastbecometrue 定 状不当thisismyfirsttimevisittothevillage heatequicklydinnerandthenwenttowardschoolinahurry 生搬硬套类thereusedtohaveabigtreeinfrontofthetemple thosewhobreakthelawwillmustbepunished 瞻前不顾后类althoughhewastired buthewentonworkinginthefields ononehand 40percentofthestudentsthinktheideaisreasonable buttherestareagainstit 2 howtopolish 润色 sentences 用简单句代替复合句 对比一下两个句子 a doyoulikethehotel ifyoudon tlikeit iwilltrytofindanotherforyou a doyoulikethehotel ifnot iwilltrytofindanotherforyou b however otherstudentsdon tsupporttheidea theysaybeijingzoowasbuiltin1905andithasahistoryof100years itiswell knownathomeandabroad b however otherstudentsdon tsupporttheidea sayingthatbeijingzoo builtin1905 withahistoryof100years iswell knownbothathomeandabroad 活用句型 结构提升档次 对比前后两个句子 a ihavefoundahouseforyou itis25squaremetres ithasabedroom abathroomandakitchen a ihavefoundahouseforyou asmallflatof25squaremetres withabedroom abathroomandakitchen b onecansucceedbyworkinghard b onlybyworkinghardcanonesucceed c ahhusavedhismasteratlast c itwasahhuwho thatsavedhismasteratlast a isuggestinternetbarsshouldbestrictlymanagedandthatweshoulddirectyoungkidstosurftheinternetproperly a isuggestthatinternetbarsshouldbestrictlymanagedandyoungkidsbedirectedtosurftheinternetproperly b heenteredtheoffice thenhestartedtodowork b hardlyhadheenteredhisofficewhenhegotdowntowork b onenteringtheoffice hesetaboutwork 准确使用连接句与句的词 短语 句子 常用的词 短语 句子有 1 表顺序first second firstly secondly then finally theformer thelatter 2 表时间sincethen forthefirsttime atlast now soonafterthat beforelong atthatmoment 3 表转折but however onthecontrary instead yet unfortunately 4 表递进what smore moreover furthermore besides inaddition additionally even 5 表并列and or aswellas both and either or neither nor some others 6 表列举forexample forinstance takesb sthforinstance suchas like andsoon etc 7 表因果so therefore asaresult asaconsequence dueto thanksto owingto becauseof 8 表总结inaword inshort inall brieflyspeaking9 表对比ononehand ontheotherhand while atthesametime inthe meanwhile 10 表程度firstofall aboveall especially particularly 11 表空间ontheright left totheright left atthefootof atthebottomof inthemiddleof inthecentreof bythesideof 12 表解释说明thatis thatistosay inotherwords namely orrather 或者更准确地说 13 作插入语tostartwith 首先 后不加宾语 tobefrank franklyspeaking tobehonest honestlyspeaking totell you thetruth generallyspeaking considering given judgingby from comparedwith 3 howtoshowindividuality 个性 使用大家不常用的单词 短语 句型 习惯用法等 对比一下两个句子 a thenextmondaymorningourclassmateswerebothsurprisedandveryhappywhentheysawthewallnewspaper a thenextmondaymorningourclassmateswerebothsurprisedandoverjoyedwhenseeingthewallnewspaper b iusedtohavealotofhomeworkevenatweekends b iusedtohavetoworkevenatweekends doingendlesshomework c thebathroomandthekitchenaregood c thebathroomandthekitchenarewell furnished d anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown d anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown e hedidn tlistentomeinclass e heturnedadeafeartomylectureinclass f ilikeswimmingverymuch f swimmingismyfavouritesport g youcanfindmyhouseeasily g you llhavenotroublefindingmyhouse h ihopeyoucanwritemebacksoon h iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou i ladiesandgentlemen listentome please i ladiesandgentlemen mayihaveyourattention please j we lltryourbesttomakeyouhappyinbeijing j we lltryourbesttomakeyourstayinbeijingapleasantexperience k suddenlyithoughtoutagoodidea k suddenlyagoodideaoccurredto struckme k suddenlyagoodideacameintomymind l inourschoolthereare2500students l ourschoolismadeupof2500students l ourschoolconsistsof2500students m nowtherearemoreschoolsandhospitalsforthepeopleinthecity m nowmoreschoolsandhospitalsareavailableforthepeopleinthecity n theyarrivedhereat8yesterdayevening n theydidn tarrivehereuntil8yesterdayevening n notuntil8yesterdayeveningdidtheyarrivehere n itwasnotuntil8yesterdayeveningthattheyarrivedhere 精心组织开头 结尾1 书信dearxxx verygladtoreceiveyourletter nowi dliketotellyouourarrangementsforyoursummerholidaysinbeijing lookingforwardtoseeingyousoon hearingfromyousoon yourimmediatereply yoursxxx dearsir madam ihavelearnedfromthelocalnewspaperthatasecretaryisneededinyourcompany i mveryinterestedinthepost soi mwritingtoapplyforit nowi dliketointroducemyselfbriefly ifisatisfyyourdemands iwouldbeverypleasedtoworkinyourcompany i mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon yourssincerelyxxx 2 通知 口头 书面 dearxxx mayihaveyourattention please that sall thanksforyourattention yourlistening notice announcement students unionmay1st 2006 3 议论文 解题步骤 提出论点 展开论据 得出结论 发表看法 thestudentsinourclasshadadiscussionon aboutwhethermobilephonesshouldbetakentoschool theyaredividedintheiropinions somethinkitisoktotake however othersdon tagree inmyopinion 4 图表类asisshowninthegraph table chart peoplenowenjoyavarietyofchoicestospendtheirsummerholidays 5 欢迎词 欢送词ladiesandgentlemen firstofall