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英语六级写作三个套路作文的展开按照三步走:1)题目涉及的现象进行简单的描述,在描述的过程中将写作引向文章的主题(这样的描述可以自己控制,如果第一段落字数单薄,可以适当使描述具体化)。2)在第一步的基础上给出观点,观点视文章主旨可以分为:个人观点(包括方法、途径),和多方观点(观点从正反两方面或者一个方面的多个层次阐述;在交待观点是需要有原因和支持)。3)个人观点总结点题(同意异表),简要指出方法途径,如果找不到具体的解决方法,则将话讲得圆滑(如果正文中间观点没有必然冲突,则可以融合)。例子:A 1995.1 my view on the negative effects of some advertisements 社会上的广告现象越来越多,很多的广告对我们的社会有不良的影响-(广告如何多:路边大型广告,报纸一半是广告,电线杆上垃圾广告,电视商业广告频繁。)Today we live in a world of advertisement. Ads appear on broad side boards, take up much of newspaper coverage, slip their way onto walls and constantly interrupt TV programs. However pervasive they are, (尽管他们四处充斥)they always produce a negative influence。从观点的多个层次描写:1.白日抢劫卖家通过弯曲夸大事实来欺骗消费者购买(化妆品);2.种下不良消费习惯或者价值观(香烟);3.污染环境(牛皮癣和校园商业海报)。To begin with, daylight robbery is made everyday occurrence (白日抢劫每天都在发生)as a result of the negative effects of ads. Harmful ads exaggerate the functions and distort/ignore the facts。(夸大功能,歪曲事实) Every means is tried to hook people into buying(为了诱导人们消费,不择手段). Make-up promotion is a typical case in point。(化妆品促销就是一个典型的例子) Furthermore, misleading ads plant in the mind (在脑海中植下)of consumers, especially young people, a bad consumption habit or, even worse, corrupt values. For proof, look no further than cigarette selling. (香烟销售就是一个典型的例子)Ads with the image of a smoking pop star broadcast an irresistible message。(传递无法抗拒的信息) Last but not least, easily-printed posters and handouts have polluted our environment。个人认为广告负面效应不可避免,要通过严格的法律来减少危害,同时开动脑精,远离它们。Personally, no one can avoid the negative influence. However, we need to step up law enforcement (加强执法)to minimize the harm of such ads. Meanwhile, as consumers, we need to use our head and keep our distance。B 1996.1 Two-day weekend-工作效率提高,物质生活富足,人们可能享受2天周末制,(除了工作效率之外:人们对生活水平的期待。)As the productivity improves, our society becomes more affluent than ever before. As a result of such social advance, a 2-day weekend seems not just possible but also feasible。从正反两方面描写,每个方面可以从多个角度来论述:1. 有人欢呼,原因如下:1)更长的休息时间,更好的调整精力,更高的效率为新的一周做好准备;2)更长的时间与家人分享,更加融洽家庭关系;3)可以进行适当距离的旅游,更好的享受生活。 2.有人反对,原因如下:1)在某种程度上不利于生产和生活(减少产出,办事不方便);2)降低效率(周末未完之事必须拖拉两天;周末活动过多造成假期疲劳)。The proponents (支持者)happily welcome a 2-day weekend for the following reasons. Firstly, a 2-day weekend ensures more time for rest(确保足够的时间休息). People can better recover from 5 days hard work(可以更好的从天的工作中恢复过来) and get more refreshed and productive for the coming week. Secondly, a 2-day weekend allows more time to share with ones family. Thirdly, 2 days make possible(使成为可能) short-distance travels, so that people neednt rush through a destination (在一个游玩的目的地走马观花)and can enjoy more of life(更好的享受生活). On the other hand, the opponents(反对者)argue an extended weekend(延长了的周末) causes incontinences of some kind (某种程度的不便)to life and harm to economy, as workers in service agencies (服务行业)and in companies leave position for leisure and recreation。(离职去娱乐享受) Whats more, a longer weekend reduces efficiency(降低效率) and does not necessarily promise (确保)more energy for a new week. Anything that happens on Friday but cant be finished within that day has to be delayed even longer. After people finish an ambitious travel, they feel exhausted than refueled. (他们感到很疲劳而不是充电了)个人认为是好事,但是要多方面努力,享受好处的同时尽量避免坏处。As for me, I readily welcome the 2-day weekend. Still, we need to make joint efforts to minimize the disadvantages while enjoying a happier life。C 1998.6 do lucky numbers really bring luck?-中国这个社会长期以来的传统:喜欢吉祥的数字。数字和运气之间有必然的联系么?-(如何喜欢:重要事件选择黄道吉日,如婚庆,开业;手机号码选择吉祥数字等等举不胜举。)Its a tradition in the Chinese culture to associate lucky numbers with good luck. We select good days for big events like wedding and business ceremonies; we cast huge money for a good phone number or a car plate. Similar examples simply abound in this country(这样的例子举不胜举). However, does this magical relationship exist?从正反两方面描写,每个方面可以从多个角度来论述:1.有人坚信,原因如下:1)几千年的民族传统肯定有他的道理; 2)偶尔的神奇现象也能增加信心。2 。不相信的人也有自己的理由:1)数字只是人类发明的符号,与运气无关。2)如果不遵守科学规律,任何数字都不能确保幸运(车祸)。Those who believe argue that such a tradition dates back thousands of years(这个传统有几千年的历史了). There must be a reason. In addition, occasional coincidences(偶尔的巧合) in history and in life even add to their confidence(增强了他们对这个信心). By contrast, those who dont believe also have their reasons. For one thing, numbers are nothing but man-made symbols. How can they have anything to do with luck? For another, however lucky the numbers are(不管这个数字都么的吉祥), accidents cant be avoided if we turn a blind eye to science(无视科学), say, driving a car while being drunk。个人认为数字和运气没有必然联系,因此不能当真。同时尊重这样的一个传统。From my point of view, there is never any relation between lucky numbers and good luck. While we keep this tradition, we should never take it too seriously。英语六级写作模板大全第一部分、四六级作文:英文信函题型作文diy写作步骤要求考生根据提纲写一封英文书信,如2005年12月六级作文、2005年1月四六级作文、2004年6月四六级作文、2004年1月四级作文。对这类题型,通常分为5个步骤来写:第一、文章开头:称呼第二段、寒暄语句,引出写信的目的: 寒暄句+主题句(注:寒暄句和主题句可以是同一个句子)第三段、根据提纲扩展主体段落: 主题句+扩展句1+扩展句2+扩展句3第四段、表明自己的观点,并结束书信主体段落 在最后要他谈自己的看法第五段、寒暄句+落款第二部分、英文信函题型作文diy写作范文练习实战演练directions:for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic a letter to the university president about the canteen service campus. you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline below:假如你是李明,请你就本学校食堂的状况给校长写一封信,内容应包括:食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等,可以是表扬,也可以是批评建议,也可以都有。diy写作模板:架构阶段第一段:称呼 dear mr. president,第二段:引出写信的目的 主题句: this letter comes to you from _. 扩展句: in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon第三段:对学校食堂正面的看法 主题句:as you know, _ . but unfortunately, _. 扩展句:1、_. (举例) as a result, _. 2、besides, _. 3、and whats more, _.第四段:对学校食堂负面的看法 主题句:some people may argue that _. 扩展句:1、for instance, _ and _. 2、but in my opinon, _.第五段:结尾,表明自己看法 结尾句:to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with _. 扩展句:i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. thanks.li mingdiy写作模板:填充阶段第一段:称呼dear mr. president,第二段:引出写信的目的 主题句: this letter comes to you from one of your students. 扩展句: in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon第三段:对学校食堂的看法 主题句:as you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen. but unfortunately, we dont find the service there satisfying sometimes. 扩展句: 1、the food is not as nutritious as it should be. (举例) as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university. 2、besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands. 3、and whats more, the fare is also a little higher at university.第四段:别人对食堂看法 主题句:some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there. 扩展句: 1、for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing. 2、but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.第五段:结尾,表明自己看法 结尾句:to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with the present canteen conditions, 扩展句:i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. thanks.第三部分、范文Dear Mr. president,This letter comes to you from one of your students.in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.As you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen. but unfortunately, we dont find the service there satisfying sometimes.the food is not as nutritious as it should be. as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.and whats more, the fare is also a little higher at university.Some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导关于如何看待大学生上网的英语作文Internet Surfing-因特网冲浪Nowadays, there is a growing popularity of Internet surfing on college campus. An increasing number of students, majoring either in science or engineering or in liberal arts, spend many hours surfing the Internet with keen interest everyday.Internet surfing has attracted college students like magnets because it is the world of Internet and the world of globalization. First,with the global coverage of Internet,we can reach out and touch anyone at any place of the world. Via Internet,we can send and receive E-mails at any time much faster, cheaper and more effective than conventional means such as telephone, telex and fax. Next,via access to the home pages of libraries, universities, journals and news agencies, and research organizations, we can easily acquire all kinds of information, to know what is going on all over the world. Finally, by clicking the mouse, we are capable of doing such important things as shopping, finding jobs, making friends, down-loading files and programs, doing business, publishing papers and freely airing our opinions on all sorts of interesting issues. What is more, Internet offhrs many opportunities. For example, we can work, educate ourselves and communicate with others at home via Internet.In the Information Age, it is difficuh to imagine modern life without Internet. With the rapid development of Information Technology industry, successful dot-com companies mushroomed everywhere. Internet is revolutionizing our economy, our society and our life.关于大学生压力的英语作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力 2)大学生缓解压力的方式有 3)你一般都是如何排解压力的? How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? _ _ _ 关于大学生压力的英语作文-行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一个问题,提纲第2点要求说明如何解决该问题,提纲第3点要求阐述“我”的做法,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:指出当今的大学生主要面临哪些压力;列举大学生缓解压力的方式;谈谈“我”是采取哪种方式排解压力的。 关于大学生压力的英语作文-高分范文 How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? Todays college students face many pressures, mainly from parents expectation, study, economy, employment and all kinds of competition. 1Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. Pressure can destroy a students confidence. 2More seriously, it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors. 3Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, college students should learn to how to relieve pressure. 2First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves 4so as to 5make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages. 2Second, we should 6set a clear aim of a struggle. The aim can give us motivation, and make us become active. 2Third, 7attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve pressure. 2Finally, if you find pressure is nearly 8beyond your control, youd better turn to professional psychological guidance. 2As to me, my pressure is mainly from future employment. 4In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages, and produce a more practical job objection. 2So my employment pressure was relieved greatly. Now I become confident in my future, and I 9do believe I can get an ideal job after my graduation. 【亮点点评】 1although引导让步状语从句。 2过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 3“考虑到,鉴于”,介词。 4表示目的。 5“扬长避短”。 6“设立一个明确的奋斗目标”。 7动名词短语作主语,用不同于前两点的句式提出缓解压力的第三种方式。 8“超出范围或能力”。 9强调动词believe。 佳句临摹 1.佳句:Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. 临摹:尽管兼职工作能够带来很多好处,但我们不应该在它上面花费太多的时间。 _ 2.佳句:Attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve 临摹:学会如何与人沟通是步入社会的第一步也是最重要的一步。 _ 3.佳句:In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages 临摹: 为了在激烈的竞争中获得优势,大学生们必须全面发展自己的能力。 _ 【KEY】 1. Although a part-time job does much good to us, we should not spend too much time on it. 2. Learning how to deal with people is the first and the most important step to enter into the society. 3. In order to get their priority in the fierce competition, college students have to develop their abilities 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡 2)分析产生该现象的原因 3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议 Credit Cards on Campus _ 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因,提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-高分范文Credit Cards on Campus In recent years, credit cards have 1gained more popularity among college students. 2With banks more focus on college market, 3an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it. 4The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college. 5Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, 6which is 7a big attraction for those students who have no much money for their domination. 5Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and 8hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. 5Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. 7Drawn by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards. 5As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. 5However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they dont need really, and even some of them owe a big credit cards debt. 5Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. 9Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards. 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文【亮点点评】1“越来越流行”。 2“随着”,介词。 3“越来越多的”。 4用于引出原因。 5过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 6which引导非限制性定语从句。 7表示“吸引”的两种不同的方式,用词富于变化。 8“由此,因此”。 9“only+状语”位于句首,引起句子部分倒装。 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-佳句临摹1.佳句:With banks more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card. 临摹:随着市场经济的快速发展,金钱在社会中扮演着越来越重要的角色。 _ 2.佳句: A credit card can help those poor students pay their tuition and fees, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school. 临摹:一些同学希望通过社会实践提高自己的能力,并由此来增加就业机会。 3.佳句:Drawed by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards. 临摹:在就业压力的迫使下,一些大学生开始自主创业。 _ 【KEY】1. With the rapid development of market economy, money plays a more and more important role in the society. 2. Some students hope to enhance their practical abilities by attending social practice, and hence increase their chances of employment. 3. Forced by employment pressure, some college graduates begin to set up their own businesses.(关于勤俭节约的英语作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)随着人们生活水平的提高,一些人认为勤俭节约的生活方式已经过时了 2)但是很多人反对这种说法 3)你的看法是,为什么? Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? _ _ 关于勤俭节约的英语作文-行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种观点,提纲第2点提出另外一种相反的观点,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的观点,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:提出第1种观点:节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了,并说明理由;提出第2种观点:勤俭节约仍然是一种美德,并说明理由;表明“我”对节俭的看法,并说明理由。 关于勤俭节约的英语作文-高分范文 Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? With the improvement of the living standards, many people are 1no longer interested in the simple life style 2and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style. 3However, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say that the unprecedented power of production doesnt mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited 2and some of them even are 4on the decline. 5Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation of so
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