公开课：应用文写作之建议信PPT课件.ppt

课程名称 应用文写作之建议信 复习内容 建议信基础写作 书面表达 满分25分 假设你是李华 你的朋友Mike与父母一道来到中国 他发现自己所学的汉语根本就不够用 因此 他给你发来一封电子邮件 向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力 请给他回一封邮件 要点如下 1 邮件已收到 理解他所遇到的问题 2 提出如下建议 在课内课外要多说汉语 多注意电视节目主持人的发音等3 祝愿他学习取得进步 注意 1 词数100左右2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文流畅 一 欣赏与学习 见巩固练习第一题 DearMike IamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceonhowtoimproveyourChineseandIunderstandyourproblem HereismyadviceforimprovingyourChinese Firstly itisimportanttospeakChinesemore bothinandoutofclass TryyourbesttocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinChinese Ithinkthemoreyouspeak thebetteryourChinesewillbe Secondly itshouldbeagreatideatopaymoreattentiontoTVhostswhenyouarewatchingTVathome I msureyouwillmakegreatprogresssoonerorlater Inconclusion Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou Wishyoueverysuccesswithyourstudies YoursFaithfully LiHua ALetterofAdvice Raisetheproblem Advice Wishes Firstperson Presenttense Letter DearMike IamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceonhowtoimproveyourChineseandIunderstandyourproblem HereismyadviceforimprovingyourChinese Firstly itisimportanttospeakChinesemore bothinandoutofclass TryyourbesttocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinChinese Ithinkthemoreyouspeak thebetteryourChinesewillbe Secondly itshouldbeagreatideatopaymoreattentiontoTVhostswhenyouarewatchingTVathome I msureyouwillmakegreatprogresssoonerorlater Inconclusion Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou Wishyoueverysuccesswithyourstudies YoursFaithfully LiHua ALetterofAdvice Usefulexpressions 1 Iamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceon 2 Hereismyadvicefor 3 itisimportanttodosth 4 themore thebetter 5 itshouldbeagreatideatodosth 6 I msureyouwillmakegreatprogress 7 Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou 8 Firstly Secondly Inconclusion Learntomakesentences 见巩固练习第二题 1 我收到你的来信询问我关于学习压力的问题 我深感遗憾 Iamsorryto 2 劳逸结合很重要 combine with 3 强烈建议你保持均衡的饮食习惯 keepabalanceddiet 4 适当的户外运动是一个好主意 outdooractivities 5 你吃的健康食品越多 你的身体就会越好 Doyouknowanyotherusefulexpressions Iamsorrytoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonpressure Itisimportanttocombinestudywithplay Istronglyadviseyoutokeepabalanceddiet Itshouldbeagreatideatodoproperoutdooractivities Themorehealthyfoodyoueat thebetterhealthyouwillhave UsefulSentences 假设你是李华 你的笔友Tony写信告诉你他最近在学习中的一些困难 他感到学习压力大 正常生活也受到影响 如睡眠不足 身体也开始亮起了红灯 请你给他写一封信 给他提供帮助 注意 1 词数100左右2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文流畅 Learnwritealetterofadvice 见巩固练习第三题 Raisetheproblem Advice Wishes Firstperson Presenttense Letter Para1 Raisetheproblem问题1 问题2 Para2 Adviceonhowtodealwithpressure 建议1 建议2 建议3 Para3 Wishes havesomesleepingproblems haveabadhealth Itisimportanttocombinestudywithplay Istronglyadviseyoutokeepabalanceddiet Itshouldbeagreatideatodoproperoutdooractivities Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou 别忘了连接词 Firstly Secondly Inconclusion 参考范文 DearTony Iamsorrytoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonstudypressure Youhavesomesleepingproblemsandabadhealth whichhaveabadeffectonyourstudy Hereismyadvice Firstly itisimportanttocombinestudywithplay Secondly Istronglyadviseyoutokeepabalanceddiet Themorehealthyfoodyoueat thebetteryourhealthyouwillhave Finally itshouldbeagreatideatodoproperoutdooractivities