（全国新课标Ⅰ卷）2016年高考英语母题题源系列 专题01 书面表达（含解析）.doc

母题一 书面表达【母题来源】2016年全国新课标卷【母题原题】【2016全国新课标i】书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教mr jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。【答案】dear ms jenkins,i am li hua, i am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and i also want you to do me a favor.in order to get some practical experience, i am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. i havealready finished my application and resume. but this is the first time that i have written an application and the personals resume, so i dont know if there are something to pay attention to. so, im writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. i will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.looking forward to your reply. and id be really thankful.yours,li hua【试题解析】本文是一篇考生们熟悉的书信类体裁的书面表达，内容贴近学生生活，所以人人有话可说。文章没有给出开头和结尾，所以考生要注意书信的格式，包括称呼语，正文以及结束语等。在写作时要注意先列出写作要点，而且要注意将来时、现在时以及现在完成时的交错使用；注意高级句式和多种结构的使用，而且语气要委婉礼貌。【命题意图】本题考查了学生的语言的运用能力和发挥想象的能力。从微观上考查了学生写句子的能力。【考试方向】把语言知识和能力结合起来，综合考查学生的语言运用能力和临场发挥的能力。【得分要点】格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅。高级表达：不定式短语in order to get some practical experience,、现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help、宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that i have written an application and the personals resume 【母题1】【2016石家庄二模】假定你是李华。你将参加本周六主题为an unforgettable experience in high school的英语演讲比赛。你写了一篇演讲稿，请外教jason给予指导。根据下面的提示，给他写一封邮件。1.说明情况；2.指导内容（词汇、语法、结构等）；3.回复时间；4.表示感激。注意：1.词数100左右；2.信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。dear jason，_yours lihua【答案】【名师点睛】本题的命题立意和高考题全国新课标i卷的，基本一致。基本命中的高考题。文章题干要求朴素，简单明了。以电子邮件的形式，让外教修改演讲稿。符合学生的学习生活实际，学生有话可说。范文使用了高级表达：its about an english speech contest with the title an unforgettable experience in high school, which im going to take part in this saturday. i find it still far from satisfactory.if its convenient to you, please send it back by thursday afternoon.id appreciate it if you could give me your guidance.【母题2】假定你是李明，上网时发现有外籍教师在网络上辅导英语口语，因此发帖向在线外籍教师peter寻求帮助。要点包括：1自我介绍（姓名、身份及年级）；2英语学习情况、困难及感受；3请求给予帮助。注意：1.词数100左右；2适当增加细节，不要逐句翻译；3 开头和结束语已为你写好。dear peter,_yoursli ming【答案】dear peter,im li ming, a senior student from china. im very happy to find that some foreign teachershelp students with oral english online along with your contact information. so i cant wait to post this message to you.ive learnt a lot from my school teachers in the past six years and known about three thousandenglish words and some basic grammar. i can do some reading and writing in english now. but i still have difficulty in listening and speaking. i always feel nervous when talking with native speakers.thats why i am writing to you. it would be nice if you could do me a favour. im lookingforward to chatting with you often.yoursli ming【亮点说明】im very happy to find that some foreign teachers help students with oral english online along with your contact information.句中运用宾语从句；im very happy to find that some foreign teachershelp students with oral english online along with your contact information.句中使用现在完成时态；but i still have dif