（全国新课标III卷）2016年高考英语母题题源系列 专题03 书面表达（含解析）.doc

母题三书面表达【母题来源】【2016全国新课标iii】【母题原题】【2016全国新课标iii】书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】dear bob,im sorry to say that i cannot go to the bookstore with you on friday afternoon. i have just found that i have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. i hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.shall we go on saturday morning? we can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. if its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. if not, let me know what time suits you best. i should be available any time after school next week.yours,li hua【解析】试题分析：题目要求写一封道歉信，就不能如约一起去书向bob道歉，使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句that i have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的状语从句so that well have more time to read and select books；条件句if its convenient for you；省略句if not等，长短句结合，使内容更加丰富。考点：书信类作文 【命题意图】本题考查了学生的语言的运用能力和发挥想象的能力。从微观上考查了学生写句子的能力。【考试方向】把语言知识和能力结合起来，综合考查学生的语言运用能力和临场发挥的能力。【得分要点】题目是常规的书信作文，要求写一封道歉信，是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出，表达歉意的同时，还要与对方另约时间。因此，不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时注意涵盖所有要点，还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。【母题1】【来源】【百强校】2016届北京市朝阳区高三第一次综合练习（一模）英语试卷（带解析）书面表达假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的美国同学jim 写一封电子邮件，告知周末你不能参加他的生日聚会，希望他谅解。邮件的内容包括：1. 表达歉意；2. 说明理由；3. 告知已准备了生日礼物。注意： 1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。dear jim,_best wishes,li hua【答案】one possible version:dear jim,im terribly sorry that i cant go to your birthday party this saturday.my uncle will come to beijing from america on saturday afternoon. my parents want me to go to the airport with them to pick him up. so its a pity that i cant have fun with you then.i wish you a happy birthday and hope everything will go well. by the way, i have bought the latest cd of jay chou for you as a birthday present and i will give it to you on monday.best wishes,li hua考点：考查应用文写作【母题2】【2016年襄阳五中英语5月模拟考试】【2016年襄阳五中英语5月模拟考试】假定你是李华，本已约好与kelvin今天(4月8日)晚上一起看电影捉妖记(monster hunt)。但你临时有事，他打篮球未回，故给他写留言条。要点如下：1. 临时有事要做。2. 具体更改的见面时间、地点。3. 此事已告知谁。4. 见字告知。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头结尾已给。【答案】april 8hi kelvin, i am going to tell you that i have something important to attend this evening, so i cant go to see the movie, monster hunt, with you this evening. and i have to change it to another place, the wanda cinema. we will meet together at 7:00 p.m. at the gate of the cinema tomorrow evening. i have already told your parents about this change when you were out to play basketball. if this change is not convenient to you, it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie.yours, li hua【亮点说明】i am going to tell you that i have something important to attend this evening, so i cant go to see the movie, monster hunt, with you this evening.宾语从句和并列句完美结合；i have already told your parents about this change when you were out to play basketball.句中运用时间状语从句；if this change is