（5月集训）湖北省黄冈市高考英语作文训练题连载（7）(1).doc

湖北省黄冈市2014高考英语作文训练题连载（7）及参考范文【浙江省2014高考英语模拟冲刺卷】书面表达（满分30分）请以the persons helping me most”为题，用英语写一篇100-120个字的短文。要求如下：简要谈谈他们对你的帮助。你从他们那里得到的启示。【参考范文】书面表达（满分30分）the persons helping me mostin the process of my growing up, parents play the most important role. not only do i depend on them for money, food, clothes etc, but they are also the safe havens that always shelter me whenever im hurt. they help me to distinguish between right and wrong, and give me the solid values around which to build up my life. they teach me how to make decisions at the crossroads. when im faced with difficulties, i also turn to my friends for help. they will always give me advice, and back me up when i deal with challenges. the faith and love between us remain here in my heart. i have met many setbacks and challenges, but i always manage to get through them, owing to my parents and my friends help. i thank them for the warmness and support they gave me in the process of growing up.【2013界广东省惠州市三模】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分)上周一你们班围绕“追星族”现象进行了一次讨论会，同学们就“追星”的现象、原因等展开了讨论1.年轻人作为追星族的主体花太量的时间、精力，甚至金钱收集明星的资料参加他们的演唱会。2.许多年轻人深感压力.、缺乏信任感，“追星可给他们带来厂定的安全感。3.明星常引领当舍被尚潮流。【写作内容】1.根据以上内容，描述这次讨论会；2.谈谈你对“追星族”现象的看法。 【写作要求】只能使用五个句子表达全部内容。 【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。 参考词汇： 追星族 fans of celebrities 【参考范文】基础写作 last week we had a heated discussion in our class on the issue of pursuing celebrities,in which we talked about the phenomenon and the reasons.young people,making up the major about celebrities ,not only spend plenty of time and energy in collecting information abourt celebrites but also pay a large amount of money for their concerts .their crazy behavior shows that they are under great pressure and lack sense of trust.being fans can bring them sense of security to some degree and the fact that celebrities often lead the fashion trend of modern times also contributes to their admiration,as for me,i think we students should try to achieve the balance between chasing celebritise and studying hard because after all,accumulating knowledge and learning skills are our main task at present.【2013界广东省惠州市三模】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分y阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文1.the ministry of education is considering new measures to test the physical quality of students across the country each year, beijing news reported. according to the measures, every student in a school is required to participate in the annual test and the results should be reported to the ministry, which will select a specified number of students from each province each year to test their suppleness and endurance. the ministry will select 4 pilot provinces this year and the measures are expected to expand across the whole country next year.2.in guangdong province it is reported that the students in junior 3 are required to take 100-meter swimming test and the results will be part in the total grade in 2014. also there is a growing voice in society that ncee (national college entrance examination) should include pe tests.【写作内容】1.以约30个词概括两篇报道的内容：2.然后以约120.个词,.就以上新闻话题发表你的看法，包括如下要点(1)体育成绩纳入总分的重要性；(2)简述你所在学校加强学生体育锻炼的做法；(3)你所喜欢的体育项目对如的影响。 【写作要求.】1.在作文中可以使用自已亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的 内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中,不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准】.概括准确，、语言规范，内容合适，.篇章连贯。【参考范文】读写任务： according to the two reports,new measures about physical assessment among students are being congsidered in beijing and guangdong.besides,the society calls for more attention to students physical quality. with more attention being paid to students academic achievements,people gradually ignore the positive influence of physical exercise on students.it brings about an increasing number of students who are weak in body.as the saying goes ,healrh is pre-condition of all work.in order to strengthen students health and make them qualified to undertake the reponsibility to bulid up our country ,our government and schools should consider students taking pe tests when they graduate and the results should be part in the total grade. in our school,we have two pe classes each week,in which our pe teachers often teach us to do proper exericise to relax ourselves.besides,there is a “big break”for us,which lasts thirty minutes every day after the third period in the afternoon.when the music for “big break”starts,we will hurry to the playground to do exercise and then do some running.the greatest sports event in our school is the annual sports meeeting .it pushes everyones enthusiasm about physical exercise to the fullest. as far as im concerned,im fond of jogging.on one hand,its not a rough sport and convenient to do every day,from which i relax myself a lot and refresh my mind.on the other hand,it strengthens my suppleness ,endurance and perseverance to deal with the difficulties in my study.【2013界广东省揭阳市二模】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）你是英语俱乐部的成员，参加俱乐部组织的英语学习经验交流，介绍自己最喜欢的英语读物。【写作内容】请你根据以下表内内容介绍21世纪学生英文报“高中版”。名称21世纪学生英文报“高中版”（21st century teens senior edition）创办时间2001年10月读者对象中国高中学生报纸类型周刊宗旨满足高中生学英语的要求，提高他们的英语应用能力报纸特色根据高中学生的阅读水平，提供国内外的时事新闻包容八大版块（section）,包括frontpage, our world, campus trends等；涉及时事新闻、文化、社会生活、娱乐、体育等等网址/个人感受这是一份优秀的英语报刊；受益匪浅【写作要求】 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） founded in october, 2001, 21st century teens senior edition is an english language weekly designed for senior high school students in china. to meet the needs of senior high school students to learn english and improve their ability in using the language, the weekly provides up-to-date news at home and abroad, which is suitable for their reading level. it contains eight sections, such as frontpage, our world, campus trends, covering culture, social life, sports, entertainment, etc. its website / is available now. 21st century teens senior edition is indeed an excellent english newspaper, from which i have benefited a lot.亮点点击：本文是介绍一份报纸。第一和第二句是含非谓语动词(founded, to meet)做状语的简单句。范文中用了不同的词(provide, contain, be available)表示“有”，使文章语言更丰富。最后一句用了非限制性定语从句表达读这份报纸的收获。【天津市蓟县2014高考英语第一次模拟】书面表达（满分25分） 61在紧张的高三备考阶段，英语老师为了提高复习效率，广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华，请根据以下提示，给英语老师写封信，表达你们的需求和建议。适当放慢进度，留出思考时间反复训练重要、易错知识点指导方法减少作业量以保证质量给予更多鼓励注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。2.要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。dear mr. wang,were so pleased that you are willing to share our views.in the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _【参考范文】写作 (1题;30分)范文 (one possible version)dear mr. wang,were so pleased that you are willing to share our views.in the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. as you know, we didnt learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. as for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural english. i still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.by the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. we would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time. 【天津市2014高考英语六校第三次联考试题】书面表达（满分25分）61. 假定你是来自澳大利亚的高三学生tom，爱好广泛，性格开朗，到中国某高中学习中文。该校流行音乐俱乐部正在招聘新成员，要求会某种乐器、嗓音好且有团队意识。你希望加入该俱乐部。请用英文写一封申请信，要点如下：个人基本情况；加入俱乐部的目的及满足加入俱乐部的条件;自己的联系方式（电话：12345678；邮箱: ）。