重庆市万州区高三英语第一次诊断考试（扫描版）.doc

重庆市万州区2013届高三英语第一次诊断考试（扫描版） 万州区高2013级第一次诊断性监测英语参考答案及评分参考一、1-5.bacbc 6-10bcaba 11-15cbcbb 16-17ac 18. 10,000 19. november 20.playground二、21-25.dabaa 26-30.cadaa 31-35.cdbcb三、36-40.bcaab 41-45.dacdb 46-50.dcbdb 51-55.adcdc四、56-60.abcad 61-65.aadab 66-70.dccbd 71-75.acbad五、写作一（一）评分原则1归档原则：本题满分15分，基于与材料的结合程度，根据语言质量分为4个档次。词数少于40，下调一个档次。2总体要求：内容切题、观点明确；逻辑清晰、行文连贯；语法正确、词汇丰富。3英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。（二）各档次给分范围和要求第四档很好地达到总体要求。12分15分有效结合材料，观点明确；内容连贯，条理清晰；语言运用得体，词汇丰富，几乎没有语言错误。第三档基本达到总体要求。8分11分有效结合材料，观点基本明确；内容基本连贯，有一定的条理性；语言运用基本得体，有少量错误，但能表达观点。第二档未达到总体要求。4分7分未有效结合材料；内容松散，条理性较差；语言运用较差，错误较多，但基本能表达观点。第一档未达到总体要求。1分3分未结合材料；内容混乱，缺乏条理性；语言运用差，错误很多，严重影响观点表达。0分内容与材料无关；未传达任何信息；所写内容无法看清等。（三）one possible version：li hua often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher. as a result, he misses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. so he has to stay up late and doesnt get enough sleep.however, liu li has quite a different way of learning. she listens attentively and tries to catch everything that the teacher says in class. because of this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her to go to bed early.in my opinion, liu li learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so i prefer her learning method.写作二（一）评分原则1.归档原则：本题满分20分，根据短文覆盖内容要点的情况及语言质量分为5个档次。词数少于60，下调一个档次。2总体要求：内容完整、覆盖要点；行文连贯、语法正确、词汇丰富。3英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。（二）内容要点1对三年高中生活的怀念；2对老师的感谢；3对母校的祝福。（三）各档次给分范围和要求第五档很好地达到总体要求。17分20分覆盖了所有内容要点；语言运用得体，词汇丰富，几乎没有语言错误；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，文章结构紧凑。第四档较好地达到总体要求。13分16分虽漏掉个别次重点，但覆盖了所有主要内容；语言运用较为得体，词汇与语法有少许错误，但不影响理解，有必要的语句间的连接成分，文章结构较紧凑。第三档基本达到总体要求。9分12分虽漏掉个别内容要点，但覆盖了大部分主要内容；语言运用基本得体，词汇与语法有一些错误，但不影响理解；能够使用简单的语句间连接成分。第二档未达到总体要求。5分8分漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容；语法结构单调，词汇贫乏，语言错误较多，影响理解；文章缺少连贯性。第一档未达到总体要求。1分4分明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容；语言错误很多，严重影响理解；文章不连贯。0分内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关；所写内容无法看清等。(四)one possible version：my teachers and fellow students:in a few weeks, well say goodbye to our mother school. how time flies! now its really hard for me to put my feelings into words. the past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys, full of laughter and tears.to make the journey safe and fruitful, our great teachers contributed their time, energy, love and the whole heart. here, we are extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers, have done for us.itll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly. but it is not the end. it just means that were going to begin a new journey.finally, on behalf o