雅思移民类书信写作.pdf

1 雅思写作 普通培训类 Task 1 书信写作 一 基本信息及备考重点 1 考试时间 建议 20 分钟 篇幅要求 150 170 words 评分权重 40 2 书信或图表评分标准 Task 1 书信或图表 按照以下三方面评分 Task Fulfillment 完成任务 Coherence and Cohesion 连贯与衔接 Vocabulary and Sentence Structure 词汇与句子结构 Task Fulfillment 指的是考生是否能够在正确审题的基础上完成题目的指令 Coherence and Cohesion 指的是文章通过一定的衔接手段 Cohesive Devices 来表明上下文的连贯性 Vocabulary and Sentence Structure 指的是文章的语言表达 5 分或 5 分以下的作文一般语法错误较多 6 分作文则一般没有致命的语法错误 用词和句子基本准确 7 分以上的作文用词丰富 Variety 句子结构复杂 Complexity 3 书信写作类型 08 08 30 You rent an accommodation for a week and you found that there were problems with it Write a letter to the owner and tell him or her What the problems are Describe the problems And say what actions you want the owner to take to solve the issue 08 04 12 You recently bought an item of clothing in another town but you found some problems with it after you returned home Write a letter to the manager and say What happened What are the problems And what you would like them to do 08 11 20 You got a newspaper prize but you did not get it yet Write a letter to inquire about this In your letter you should ask When the prize will come What your expectation of the prize is And how the editor should deal with it for you 08 11 08 Write a letter to the local council to provide suggestions on how to improve tourist facilities in your town In your letter you should give Present situation of tourist facilities Your suggestions Benefits from tourism 4 书信的格式与基本结构 You booked a holiday with a travel agency but the tour did not live up to your expectations Write a letter to the agency In your letter you Describe the problem Explain what you expected on your holiday Explain what you want the travel agency to do 2 Dear Sir or Madam I wish to complain about the service provided by one of your travel operators Jenny Chang I contracted with her for a holiday I booked in Sydney for a total cost of 2 000 but later discovered the tour fell below an acceptable standard On February 13 2006 I talked to Mrs Jenny Chang and reminded her of some special requirements I had including a double room in a four star hotel ten main places of interest and so forth Your tour operator confirmed that these would be surely arranged Unfortunately these requirements were not met The four star hotel was in fact a three star hotel and the room service was below the average The so called double room was cramped and caused me considerable discomfort The guide took us to six places of interest instead of tem as set out in contract and some famous tourism sites were not on our itinerary Since you undertook to book a holiday in accordance with my requirements and your tour operator assured me that all my requirements would be met I must hold you responsible for my disappointment Please let me know how you propose to settle this matter Yours sincerely You want to sell some of your furniture You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you Write a letter to your friend In your letter Explain why you are selling Describe the furniture Suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture Dear Jan As you know we ll be moving to a new house soon and there are a few things that I won t be able to take with me The new house is a bit smaller so I have to sell some furniture and I was wondering if you might be interested In particular I want to sell my big dinning table Do you remember it the one in the living room It has wooden legs and a grey glass top and it s big enough for six people There are six matching chairs to go with it I know you ve always liked this furniture so I could let you have it at a good price I d rather sell it to you than to a strange Why don t you come around and take another look at them on Saturday We ll be here all day so maybe we could have some lunch together Give me a ring and let me know Love Shanda 格式 称呼一律采用齐头写法 中间段落如采用缩进式 落款要写在右下角 如采用齐头式 落款也应该为齐头式 3 信件基本结构 称呼 正文 开篇 主体 结尾 信末礼貌语和署名 称呼写法 称呼后加逗号 如果收信人为一个企业 团体或者机构 不知道收信人的名字和性别 一般用 Dear Sir or Madam 或 To whom it may concern 也可以使用 Dear 加收件人头衔 Dear Professor Manager Editor 如果收信人是一个认识的人 知道姓名和性别 但其并不是你熟悉或者亲密的朋友 一般使用 Dear Mr Mrs Miss Ms 收信人姓氏 surname 举例 Dear Mr Gates Dear Ms Clark 如果收信人为熟识的朋友 一般使用 Dear 收信人的名字 Dear 名字 first name 举例 Dear John 正文写作 正文包含三部分内容 即开篇 主体段落及结尾 开篇 介绍主题并说明写作目的 我给您写信是希望您能够针对即将到来的考试给我一些建议 这封信是关于一件令我很不高兴的事情 并且希望您能够将这件事及我的意见刊登在贵报上 主体段落 清晰地 有逻辑地交代主要信息并展开论述 参考题目的三点信息对情节进行合理的联想 要有 合理的分段 每段关注一个具体问题 段落之间要注意连贯与衔接 按照信件功能的不同 信件所使用的语气和用词也不一样 一般来说 除了投诉信可以使用比较强烈的语气外 其他信件最好采用比较礼貌和客气地语气 此外 收信人和你的关系也需要考虑在内 如果和收信人比较熟悉 那么正式的语言就不是非常合适 对比而 言 如果和收信人不是很熟悉 那么用正式的语言则比较恰当 结尾段 要使读信人非常清楚你所表达的态度 内容应该是积极并且明确的 信末礼貌语和署名 信末礼貌语通常使用 yours sincerely yours faithfully yours truly 如果写给很好的朋友 一般使用 yours with best wishes lots of love 等 签名可以随意写 不一定写自己的真实姓名 如 Mary Jane Bill Tom 等 5 书信写作备考重点 熟悉书信的格式 分辨书信的类别 熟记书信的常用语 二 各类信件写作内容 1 投诉信 Letter of Complaint 开篇 说明写作意图 遭遇不愉快经历需要投诉 我写信来投诉 我写信来表达我对 的不满 我写信请求你采取弥补 的措施 我想引起你们对这种情况的关注 因为 4 主体 按照题目的要求具体说明情况以及问题的严重程度和给你带来的不便 结尾 提出公平可行的解决方案 并希望得到满意答复 同时感谢对方所做的努力 我期待着尽快收到调换品 我肯定您会理解这个问题正在给我造成的极大不便和损失 我急切地想要尽快解决这个问题 我相信 300 美金是比较合理的赔偿额度 我期待着收到您的支票 如果此类事情再次发生的话 我会采取法律行动而不另行通知 我非常感激您对我所投诉事项的关注 举例 1 You have bought a camera in a Duty Free store of an airport On reaching home you discovered some problems with it Write a letter to the airport authority to Explain the situation Talk about your feeling Express what you want to do Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to complain about the camera that I bought last week in your airport Duty Free store As I reaching home I tried to take some photos with the new machine and it worked very well However after a few second it powered off I thought it might be automatic switching off but I cannot start it up again I tried many many times but it did not work The sign in that store says that goods with any problems can be replaced within 14days Unfortunately I cannot go back to your country in such short time I feel very unhappy with the quality of the camera and I have to say that my right has been aggressed Personally I want to return this camera and request the store to replace it with a good one for me and pay for all posting fees If I cannot get a satisfactory response soon I have to claim a refund that I paid for the camera Yours sincerely Mary 举例 2 You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket and you wish to complain to the supermarket Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket In your letter Say who you are Give details about the accident Suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to inform you of the accident I had at 3 45 pm yesterday I was pushing my shopping cart down the aisle by the frozen meats when I slipped on the wet floor and broke the 5 scaphoid bone in my right wrist as I tried to stop my fall Your staff were very helpful and your assistant manager drove me to St Martin s Hospital where my arm was put in a cast that will stay on for about six weeks I am a self employed canteen owner and will not be able to work for at least two months My insurance will only cover my medical costs not my lost earnings which as you can see from the attached photocopies average 450 pounds a week Given that the accident was due to the dangerous condition of the floor I trust you will arrange for me to be compensated with an amount equal to my average weekly earnings for the time that I am unable to work May I suggest that you instruct your staff to pay better attention to safety and have a sign that clearly warns customers of such dangers as a slippery floor Yours sincerely John Smith 2 咨询信 Inquiry Letter 与求助信 Request Letter 开篇 简单自我介绍 表明信息来源并说明写信目的 我写信咨询是否可以加入你们的俱乐部 我对 十分感兴趣 我需要一些关于 方面的重要资料 我写信是否可以得到你的帮助 主体 按照不同的信件要求展开写作 咨询信 指名所需信息 并表明为什么需要这些信息 同时要指名什么时候需要信息 如要求对方迅速回复的时候 要礼貌 求助信 阐述你所需要的帮助或提出你自己的要求 同时要说服读信人的答复或同意你的要求 要提出对帮助的答 谢并说明时间期限 结尾 希望能得到对方帮助并早日收到回复 举例 1 Your school has no sports facilities Write to a nearby club to apply for a membership In your letter you Provide personal information Describe service or facilities you want Inquire about the fees To whom in may concern I am a student currently studying in St Luck s Grammar School and I am interested in the membership of your club in late May The school I am studying in has limited facilities and I have heard that your club is an excellent 6 training service provider Location is another reason why I perceive your club as the best option It only takes fifteen minutes to get to your club on foot I appreciate receiving any pamphlets with information about facilities such as weightlifting equipment swimming pool sauna shower rooms and lockers I was told that all these facilities are provided but I am writing for confirmation By the way I would love to be informed about membership fees and any discount I am entitled for I am 16 years old male and holding an international student visa Should you have any questions or need to speak to me about my request you can reach me at NancyXia maclean co edu or at 09 365 4562 I am looking forward to your earliest reply Thank you for your attention Yours sincerely Nancy Xia 举例 2 You are going to London to take a training course for two months Write a let