东方精英考研英语写作冲刺详细笔记.doc

专注完美 近乎苛刻 东方精英考研写作冲刺讲义详细笔记 考研作文中“谋句”n 图画类作文描述段的写法描述图画和诠释图画的区别：1、 描述是客观的；诠释是主观的2、 描述讲究的是主次分明，条理清楚；诠释注重的解读准确，思路清晰。描写部分： As is conspicuously unveiled in the sketch, on the focus of the drawing stands an individual/senior lady who is carrying a grown-up son. In the old lady hand exists a bottle of milk which is related with pension. Apparently, the elder is exhausted and all of a sweat. The caption reminds us that when we can finish this situation.与时俱进的万能开头句：Before the 18th National Congress of the Communist Party of China，there has been a heated discussion about a picture (a set of pictures) in the newspaper. During the past two years in terms of preparation of graduate entrance examination, this issue has touched the soul of mine. In the center of drawing appears an senior individual who is holding her grown-up son. Amusing as the drawing is, the intended meaning is worthwhile for us to give reflection on it.描写示范： On the surface of lake exists a desperate hand. Although on the bank stand numerous bypassers, they are indifferent to this victim. The caption reminds us that the life of victim is pity. Undisputable, it is the social indifference that kills his precious life.描述三步走：1、 Identify the key words2、 Arrange the keywords according to the Principle3、 Polishn 图画类作文释意段的写法Practice: 如果图画中有对话：The left individual (customer) holds: “ ” conversely, another ordinary person contends “ ”象征物：1. 小标题2. 题干中3. 图画中（用一个名词性短语来概括）象征意义：1. 深刻性 07 08 122. 社会性 05 06 09 10 11象征含义段落示范：Theres no denying that the picture, with the popular color of the green food/the elements in it/them as a symbolization of the prevalence社会性/significance of the 深刻性 of the fake products, implies that the phenomenon illustrated in the picture should be curbed effectively and efficiently反面/ advocated among the public/ that exerts a double edged sword effects on our society. . It is common that we buys this kind of commodities in the market in our daily life when we deal with the dealers. Not only does the writer present the facts to us, but also set us thinking what is under the iceberg.Sample Answer1. Universities and other vocational schools, generally considered as “a small society”, can enrich the students social experience, as many of the students have taken the opportunities of having a part-time job or some social practices or internship in their spare time, which will undoubtedly broaden their insight and develop their capabilities of social interactions.2. As shown in the picture, there is an American girl who puts on the traditional dress and ornaments of one of Chinese minority nationalities. She wears a strand of pearl necklace, a pair of pierced earrings, and a band of ribbon on her head. She is smiling and quite gratified with her donning.3. Develop: Apparently, theres no denying that the picture, with the American girl in traditional Chinese costume as a symbolization of multinational communication of cultures and customs, implies that the world-wide exchange of cultural identities have come into the spotlight of the public, which one way or another indicates the inevitable international trend of the globalization of national cultures.正面话题：1. 三个好处2. 两个好处+举例子、列数字、名人名言、谚语典故、3. 分析原因4. 建议措施1、诚信为例三个好处写法1. The way I see it, there exist three major merits made for honesty. First and foremost, honesty, a key element to success, can promote our moral standard which is regarded as the criterion of judging anybody. Whats more, credit can, to some degree, enlarge our social circles in terms of making friends. Last but not the least, well-established economic order can be constructed through the honesty. Were there no it, we could not witness an ideal scene in which people can enjoy themselves to the uttermost.2、诚信为例两个好处写法The way I see it, there exist two major merits made for honesty. For one thing, honesty, a key element to success, can promote our moral standard which is regarded as the criterion of judging anybody. For another one, credit can, to some degree, enlarge our social circles in terms of making friends. Among all the touching facts relating to honesty that I have heard, noticed and experienced, the most impressive one is a taxi driver who picked RMB 3 million and returned them to the loser.列数字According to the latest survey conducted by economist, the rate of the person lack of honesty reaches 38.27%.名人名言Moyan, one of the most illustrious writers and a noble prize winner, was quoted in his works as saying (I paraphrase): “honesty is the cornerstone of the society”.Just as an old Arab proverb says:“”3、分析原因写法The way I see it, there exist both of major arguments that can be made for the phenomenon. For one thing, maximizing the profits of the businessmen can, one way or another, give rise to the shortage of honesty. For another one, lack of credit is for the sake of the effective and efficient measures in governments at all levels. Were this trend to continue, we would pay a higher price.建议措施写法The way i see it, some effective measures should be adopted to promote the value of honesty. For one thing, media, especially CCTV, should programme more shows about the honesty. For another one, we should become the volunteers of popularizing the value of credit. Only in this way can we witness an ideal scene in which people can enjoy themselves to the uttermost.反面话题的写法 1. 三个坏处2. 两个好处+举例子、列数字，名人名言，谚语典故3. 分析原因4. 建议措施1、三个坏处1. personally, there exist three demerits/disadvantages/drawbacks as following. First and foremost, fake products including poisonous milk and copycat Iphone can exert negative effects on our physical and mental health. Whats more, poisonous milk can, for one cause or another, harm the interest of customers. More importantly, a healthy market mechanism will be threatened by fake commodities. Were this trend to continue, we would not witness an ideal scene in which people can enjoy themselves to the uttermost.2、两个好处+举例子、列数字，名人名言，谚语典故2. personally, there exist both of demerits/disadvantages/drawbacks as following. For one thing, fake products including poisonous milk and copycat Iphone can exert negative effects on our physical and mental health. For another one, poisonous milk can, for one cause or another, harm the interest of customers. I can think no better illustration that Jiugui Liquor has plasticizers revealed in the recent survey by microblog. Were this trend to continue, we would not witness an ideal scene in which people can enjoy themselves to the uttermost.3. According to the latest survey conducted by Ministry of Health, the loss of the fake products is as much as RMB 10 billion, which enables numerous students to come back to schools in the remote mountainous villages.分析原因4. The way I see it, both of major reasons can account for the prevalence of the fake products. For one thing, profit-seeking / profit-pursuing of businessmen can bring forth manufacture of fake commodities. For another one, the popularity of the fake products, one way or another, is due to the lack of ability/capability of distinguishing good products from bad ones. Therefore, we should pay more attention to the problems illustrated in the drawing. 高铁：The fast pace of lifeThe development of science and technology流行节目： Over package of the showsThe value orientation手机控Phone-addictionSmart phoneLack of self-discipline 私家车High standard of living Conveniences of the automobile 核能Clean energyLow cost The development of science and technology心里健康Over pressure from the societyFalse value system建议措施As far as i am concerned, it is high time that we should adopt measures to resolve the fake commodities illustrated in the sketch. For one thing, the view of socialist honor and disgrace should be established in common people especially businessmen. For another one, people from all walks of life should make a concerted efforts to resist the fake products. Only in this way can we witness an ideal scene in which people can enjoy themselves to the uttermost.中性话题一边倒（参考上面）折中With regard to the issue in the drawing, we should analyze it in various perspectives. On the one hand, smart phone not only provides us with numerous conveniences in terms of communicating with others including friends and family members. On the other hand, precious time will deplete by manipulating the mobile phone in our daily life. As for me, the merits of phone outweigh the demerits of the phone. Mobile phone, widespread in the whole world, can update the latest news simultaneously in anywhere. 应用文写作一 小作文分类1. 书信2. 备忘录3. 告示4. 摘要二 小作文分类模板一书信格式：（一）称呼1、题目无人名：Dear Sir or Madam, 2、题目有人名：Dear人名, Mr. WangMiss Wang,（二）正文：3段、7句、100120词、35关联词、35从句 1、第一段：12句1）自我介绍（1）I am a staff member from your company/corporation. I am a staff member from Motorola (China) Electronics Ltd.（2）I am a freshman/sophomore/junior/senior/undergraduate/graduate from the Department of Chinese Language and Literature of Beijing University. 2）写作目的：（1） I am writing the letter in purpose of resigning from my current post/position. 求职信(申请信）原因applying for the position of 建议信 原因Suggesting /giving you some suggestions about/on 道歉信 没有发散的原因apologizing /giving my apologies about./ on邀请信 原因Inviting sb to do sth 投诉信 原因Complaining sth 祝贺信 有条件的原因Congratulating 感谢信 原因Giving my thanks to your generous help（2）I am writing to inform you that I wish to request if you could help me find a potential beneficiary of the Project Hope. 2、第二段：3-6句 1）改写提纲一：1句 2）改写提纲二：1句 3）改写提纲三：1句3、第三段1）表示感谢（私人建议信除外）（1） My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words. （2） Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you. （3） I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for the kind assistance you rendered me.2）期待回信（1）I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. （2）I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. （3）Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.（三）落款1、结尾客套：Yours sincerely, 2、签名：Li Ming二、其他应用文： （一）告示： Directions:The Students Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following information:1) The purpose of the contest,2) Time and place of the contest,3) What is required of the candidates，4) Details of the judges and awards.You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.NoticeTo improve students ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese-speaking contest at the Students Auditorium on Saturday next week (26 January). Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.The Students Union（二）备忘录/报告：Directions: You are the president of a company. Write a memo to Percy Shelley, the vice-president on the employees training on computer, telling him the need to train the employees, detailed information, and ask him to write a plan.Date：January 5th, 2013 To：Percy Shelley, Vice PresidentFrom：Li Ming, PresidentSubject：Computer Training of the StaffAs we discussed earlier this week, I agree with you that our firm is faced up with problem of the high rate of computer illiteracy of the staff. We need to make up a plan for training our employees in the new field.I would like you to design our own in-house computer-training program. We had better classify the employees and put them through the program in turn.Write up a brief proposal, describing what you think the program should cover. Assume the class runs four hours a week for ten weeks. Also, assume people have no prior computer knowledge or any formal course work in computer science.应用文万能模板:1. 辞职信模板1：Dear , I am writing to inform you about the decision to resign from my current position. There are a few factors involved. First and foremost, . Secondly, . Last but not last, . I would like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude for the rewarding experience that I have enjoyed during my employment. I sincerely wish you could approve of my resignation, and I apologize in advance for any inconvenience thus caused. Sincerely yours, Li Ming模板2 Dear , I am sure it will come as no surprise that I wish to resign my position as . Though I have enjoyed working with you and other colleagues in the company / organization, there are a few reasons that force me to give up my current work. For one thing, . For another, . Moreover / Besides / In addition, . I appreciate the plenty of help and encouragement from you constantly, and I am very sorry for any inconvenience thus caused. I promise that I will stay through the next month to help you find a replacement for my position. Sincerely yours, Li Ming2. 请求信模板1：Dear ， I am . Id like to ask if you have / can provide me with the information of . The reasons for my urgent need of are as follows: 1) ; 2) ; 3) . Therefore, I will be much obliged if you can help me . Please feel free to call me at for further questions. Thank you for your time and patience, and I look forward to your prompt reply. Yours, Li Ming模板2：Dear ， My name is , and I am . I have made up my mind to write to you in the hope that you can furnish me with the information regarding . At the present I am preparing / doing , and am in lack of that is crucial for the work / project / program. Therefore, it would be of great help if I can have your help for . Please get back to me at your earliest convenience as I have to soon. I am praying for your reply with full appreciation. Yours sincerely, Li Ming3. 建议信模板1：Dear ， I am very glad to hear that you want to seek some suggestions about in order to . From my point of view, . Also, to you, I highly recommend that . On the one hand, . On the other hand, . Besides, it is unnecessary for you to . Consequently, I believe that . I hope that my opinions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions. Yours sincerely, Li Ming模板2：Dear ， I am writing to express my views concerning . In the first place, I would like to say thank you for the help and everything else you have been offering to us. Meanwhile, I also want to make some advice to better . Firstly, we have found that . Secondly, we want to . Finally, we hope that . I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals. Thanks in advance for that. Yours sincerely, Li Ming4. 求职信模板1：To Whom It May Concern, I have learnt from yesterdays newspaper that you are employing . I wish to be considered as an applicant for the position, and beg to state my qualifications as follows: I am years old, a major student of University / College. During my academic years, I have shown excellent performance and have been awarded first-class scholarship each year. In addition to my educational background, I have the rich work experience in the fields of . Therefore, I believe I can be of value to your company. Enclosed is my resume for your reference, and I shall be glad to call at your office if you desire an interview. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Li Ming模板2：Dear ， I learned from my university BBS that there is a vacancy for , a position which I am very interested in. I am a senior student from University, majoring in . Under the influence of the courses I have taken, I develop a special interest in . Moreover, I have attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field due to my internship at . It seems to me that all these have prepared me ideally for the role of in such a company as yours. For further information please refer to my attached resume. I should be please to attend for an interview at your convenience. Your