雅思政府类作文高分范文解密-智课教育出国考试.pdf

智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 雅思政府类作文高分范文解密 智课教育出国考试 备考雅思写作考试 考生怎能不利用优秀范文呢 优秀范文里面可 是有很多宝贝的信息呢 考生只有充分学习才会掌握其中之精华并为之 有用 一定会大有帮助 话不多说 考生们赶紧和小编一起来探索雅思 政府类作文高分范文解密吧 本文中的所要分析的题目来源于剑桥雅思官方指南Test 3中的大作文 具体题目为Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars 通过对题目的分析 我们可以得知题目的核心内容是近三十年来有 车一族迅速增加 导致很多城市交通拥挤 该题对考生的要求是要讨论 此观点是否正确 并在政府方面给予建议 我们也能知道看出该题属于 政府类 题目类型为问题解决类 在简单分析之后 考生对此题有何看法呢 写作思路又是什么样的 呢 下面 我们就一起来探讨探讨 针对题目中的How true do you think this statement is 以及What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars 两个问题 考生不能直接给予作答 说 它不正确 否则要想继续往下进行论述就有些难度了 因此 考生在论述的时候可以分段进行 主体段中给政府提出建议 考生可以把每一个建议划分为一段 这样写的时候较为简单一些 另 外强调一点的是考生所提出的建议要合理 并且能够运用论证方法加以 论证才会让文章更加有说服力 才能给考官留下好的印象 从而增加分 数 也是有可能的 写作思路清晰了 再往下写作就很容易了 我们就来分析分析每个 段落是如何进行阐述的以及各个段落中有哪些好的素材可供使用 首先 第一段改写题目 交代背景 我们先来看原文 Most people would argue that car ownership has increased in recent years and is causing a range of problems particularly in built up areas I think there are a number of ways that governments can aim to deal with this 通过分析 我们知道本段首句对于题目中的观点给予肯定 然后指 出政府有多种方法可以解决该问题 也很好地引出下文的论述 其中built up areas是 建筑区 的意思 因此 考生们在写此类题材作文的时候 在第一段中不要直接给予 题目中的问题肯定或否定 要委婉的表达 引出下文 这样才会是好的 写作手段 下面是第二段 让步段 其作用是不至于让自己的观点过于偏激 本段首句为交通问题在很多大城市是不一样的 然后用举例论证来 阐述交通问题的具体情形 Many big cities in the world have traffic problems but these problems vary 然后通过举例论证来进行支撑 For example it is reasonably easy to drive around my city after 10 am and before 5 pm 指出高峰期交通很拥挤 不得不用平时的双倍时间达到目的地 H owever outside these hours you have to allow double the usual time to reach your destination 有些城市一直都存在交通拥挤状况 In some other cities traffic is congested at all times and there is the continue sound of car horns as people try to get wherever they want to go 素材积累 congested 拥挤的 堵塞的 at all times 一直 始终 car horns 汽车鸣笛 接下来是第三段的内容 第三段提出相应的解决办法 第一个方法是政府可以鼓励人们使用公共交通工具 One of the best approaches governments can take in busy cities is to encourage the use of public transport One of the best approaches 最好的办法之一是 意味着公共交通设施要运行良好 人们也可以接受其价格 This means the transport facilities have to be well run and people must be able to afford them 同样 此处也通过举例论证的方式加以论述 如果公车 有轨电车 火车价格适中 方便快捷 都是很好的出行方式 Buses trams and trains are good ways of getting around and if they are cheap and reliable people will use them 再来就是第四段 本段指出另外一种解决方法 即建议政府把停车 场和购物中心建在郊区 Another approach is to discourage people from actually entering the city by building car parks and shopping centres on the outskirts 举例论证 许多大城市已经这么做了 效果显著 而且如果乘客需 要 也会提供通往市区的公共交通工具 Many cities around the world do this quite successfully and offer passengers bus transport into the centre if they need it 下面是第五段 本段给出最后一个方法 即政府可以做宣传来鼓励 大家在旅游高峰期最好不要驾车出行 At peak travel periods governments can also run campaigns to encourage people to be less dependent on their cars 另外 指出一些短途出行开车是没有必要的 但是人们还是会习惯 性的这样做 Apparently a lot of car trips involve very short journeys to say the supermarket or local school These are often unnecessary but we automatically get in our cars without thinking 最后是结尾段 结尾段指出除了政府可以解决之外 个人也可以做 出努力去改善这种情况 Clearly we all have a responsibility to look after our cities Governments can do a lot to improve the situation and part of what they do should involve encouraging individuals to consider alternatives to driving alternatives 替代品 总之 本篇文章结构清晰 并运用了让步论证以及多次运用举例论 证等方式来进行阐述 使得文章更加有条理性 有充分 考生在自己写 作时也可以多多学习这样的写作方法 最后 小编把完整范文带给大家 考生们可以多多参考 Most people would agree that car ownership has increased in recent years and is causing a range of problems particularly in built up areas I think there are a number of ways that governments can aim to deal with this Many big cities in the world have traffic problems but these problems vary For example it is reasonably easy to drive around my city after 10 am and before 5 pm However outside these hours you have to allow double the usual time to reach your destination In some other cities traffic is congested at all times and there is the continue sound of car horns as people try to get wherever they want to go One of the best approaches governments can take in busy cities is to encourage the use of public transport This means the transport facilities have to be well run and people must be able to afford them Buses trams and trains are good ways of getting around and if they are cheap and reliable people will use them Another approach is to discourage people from actually entering the city by building car parks and shopping centres on the outskirts Many cities around the world do this quite successfully and offer passengers bus transport into the centre if they need it At peak travel periods governments can also run campaigns to encourage people to be less dependent on their cars Apparently a lot of car trips involve very short journeys to say the supermarket or local school These are often unnecessary but we