河南省信阳市第四高级中学高考英语 专题训练 短文改错、书面表达（2）.doc

河南省信阳市第四高级中学2014届高考英语专题训练： 短文改错、书面表达（2）短文改错专项训练此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。a foreign university exhibition fair held at zhijiang 1._ hotel on march 18.over 50 universities from 10 countries2._ open their doors to students who eager to go abroad to 3._ continuing their further study. more and more middle school 4._ students have joined in the tide of going abroad. the 5._ lower-aged group have become the new highlight of this tide. 6._ and whether early entry into international education means 7._ better education nor it pushes the young to leave their family 8._ too early to discipline himself is discussed a lot by both 9._ parents and educators. how do you think of this tide of 10._ going abroad?参考答案1. exhibition是held的承受者,应该用被动语态,因此须在之前加was。2. 本题是正确的。3. be eager to do sth.为固定搭配,意为“渴望做某事”故在eager之前加are。4. to continue their further study是动词不定式做目的状语，之后应用动词原型，故将continuing改成continue。5. join in 通常用来表示加入正在进行的某一项活动， 而join意指加入到某一行列中来，故去掉in。6. group为单数名词，故把have改成has。7. 根据上下文的逻辑意义判断，此处是转折关系而非并列关系，故把and改成but。8. whetheror为固定搭配，故把nor改成or。9. 前文the young是指“年轻人们”，是复数，故把himself改成themselves。10. 问你觉得什么怎么样应用what do you think of，而不用 how故把how改成what。*结束注意：1对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译；2词数120左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数；3参考词汇：和谐的harmoniousrecently we students had a heated discussion on how to make friends._3. 参考范文：recently_we_students_had_a_heated_discussion_on_how_to_make_friends.as well all know，good relationship plays an important role in building a harmonious society.many of us think we should make friends with those who can help us with our studies so that we can learn from each other and make greater progress.others believe they should have friends who can help them deal with some problems in life.still others hold that they should have friends who are willing to listen to them and share their joys and sorrows.in my opinion，to make friends，we should be friendly and helpful to others.besides，we should learn to care about others and listen to them patiently.in brief，true friends are like sunshine that brightens our life.*结束.（四川卷）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个沟（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词。并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改tom was having much troubles getting up in the 66. morning and was always late with work. his boss wanted to 67. fire him if he didnt start coming on time,but he went to 68. the doctor for a help. the doctor gave him some 69. medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. 70. the man did is told and slept.leally will,wake up before 71. the alam had even gone off.he had time for a properly 72. breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.”boss,”he 73. said ,”that medicine really works!”im pleasing to hear 74. it ,”said his boss,”but where were you yesterday?” 【答案】66、改troubles为trouble 67、改with 为for 68、改but 为so 69、去a 70、改them 为it 71、改wake为waking 72、改properly为proper 73、reach前加to 74、改pleasing为pleased 75、*结束高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作5诚实有益(it pays to be honest)1当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象。2诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。这是一篇论说文，从题目看，应从正面论证诚实的益处。第一段，举例说明在社会上存在的诸多不诚实现象，给社会和个人都造成了极大的伤害。第二段，从正面说明诚实既利人又利己，通过举例说明做人应该诚实。参考范文：*结束作文（*）下图是你在从部队回家探亲路上发生的一个故事，时间为3月20日，星期三，天气阴。请用英语以日记的形式叙述一下此故事。字数：100120之间。 _ _ _ _ _ _ 参考范文march 20, wednesday cloudy i joined the army two years ago. this was the first time l went home to see my parents. i was very glad. when i walked by the side of a river, i heard someone shouting help. help! i saw three children struggling in the river. i jumped into the ice water without hesitation. i tried my best to pull two of them onto the bank. but the third was washed away. so i had to swim hack to save him. in the end i pulled the last one onto the hank. they were thankful to me and called me hero.but i think i just did what i should do.*结束 根据下面的图用英语写一个题为such a help的小故事。故事须包含所有图画内容。可以适当增加细节，使故事连贯。 词数：100120个。提示：图中的小孩名叫tom，老人叫mrsmith 参考范文such a helpone day tom was kicking a ball under some trees. he once kicked it so hard that it got stuck between two branches of a tree. he was too short to reach the ball. just as he was won- dering how he could get it down, a man was passing by with an umbrella in his hand. tom went up and asked for help. theman threw his umbrella at the ball and it was knocked down. but unfortunately, the umbrella was caught on the tree. tom was happy to have his ball back and went away with it. he did not even say a word to the man. how could the poor man get his umbrella back? no one knows.*.(典型题)*结束高考英语书面表达讲义：教育校园话题作文例3：假如你是李华，是华文中学的学生会主席，为了丰富同学们的业余生活，提高同学们的英语水平，学生会组织了一个english club，请你写封邀请信，邀请同学们参加，内容应包括：1. english club设立的目的2. english club 要开展的活动3. 邀请大家参加 english club注意：开头、结尾已给出;字数80-120; auditorium 礼堂*结束 (201*河北部分重点联考)dear anish，here are the information about manchester university.1._it is about 200 miles far away from london, and it 2._has a very big schoolyard. you can live in the school3._or near the school. they have all sorts of course.4._im sure you will find one you like it. i know you5._are particular interested in human rights. so i will 6._see that there is anything on their website(网址).7._ill send my friend charlie meet you at the airport8._when you arriv