浙江高考英语二轮全程练习 第四部分 写作专项演练 课时27 短文改错技法.doc

短文改错技法.短文改错技法演练【精要提示】一般来说，解答短文改错题的原则可用三个字来概括：正、加、删。在解答时，考生要更正错词，添加缺词，删除多词。短文改错都有相应的规范符号和格式，考生不可用错或混用。做短文改错时，要注意：(1)要浏览全文，把握大意。(2)要找出短文中的句号，把短文拆分成若干个句子。短文改错不应按行去分析，而应以句子为单位进行改错。(3)要认真分析句子结构，从“多、缺、错”三个方面入手，进行改错。(4)要重新通读自己改正过的文章，进行检查。【高考经典练】(2015浙江卷)下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。my old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.i enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.on the lefthand side of the class，i could easy see the football field.in the mornings，it was full of students exercising.the view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.farther in the distance，i could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.on the right side of the class was the road.i was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.the position of the classroom with its view made me felt like i was dreaming.if i was only a child when i studied in that classroom，i will never forget it.能力提升练下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。aas students，all of us will be faced a problem after passed the college entrance examination.should we choose a good major and a good university first? here are some different ideas.some more prefer to choose a major first so they can learn that they are interested in.in this way they can put their hearts into study and got their favorite jobs in the future.other believe that the environment is important to ones develop and that graduates from key universities are more likely to find good jobs.as long as im concerned，the best choice is a good university if we cant obtain all.bone day my father went to see the film after supper.but in our surprise，he came back just about half an hour later.i asked him what was the matter.he smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema.he was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers.surprising，they looked at their ticket carefully，only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different.so they looked at the tickets carefully.after a while，my father apologized to the woman，saying，“sorry，i make a mistake.take this seat，please.” the fact was that his ticket found out under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.cin autumn of 1935，when i was a young man，i was traveling in the north of indian.one evening，before hunting in the forest all day，i was returning to the place which i had put up my tent.it was getting dark，but i was walking along a road.suddenly i saw two eye glaring at me from among the trees.how could i do? should i jump into the river to save my life? then i look to the right.in the river there had a big crocodile waiting to welcome me with its mouth was wide open.dthe other day i happen to read an eightyword passage about details.i found it prettily good.one who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details.sometimes it is the details in that determine our success，for it has a great impact on what were doing.we should form the habit of being careful，so a careful person rarely overlooks details.whats more，we should learn to keep balance of quantity and quality.when facing with lots of work，the faster we do them，the more mistakes we usually make.in that case we are possible to neglect the details.so we should remember that quality comes first，without that quantity is of no importance.eat 9 oclock last night，i was doing my homework.suddenly i heard my neighbors shouting and laughing loudly.he was watching a football game in tv.i couldnt go on studying and become impatient.i covered my ears，try to keep the noises out，but failed.however，i had to go to my neighbors house.i knocked at his door and said，“good evening，mr.yang! could you please to turn down your tv a bit? i am doing my homework.”“oh，i really sorry to have disturbed you.ill do like you say.” my neighbor said polite.“ thank you very much.” i said and went back to continue our study.fi was in a long line waited outside the college bookstore along with a group of student to get my book.it started pouring down so hardly and the worse was that it was very cold，and that everyone was wet，except few like me with an umbrella.the girl behind me was trembling.i share my umbrella with her because we got inside the bookstore.i felt really well，even though i had done something such tiny as sharing my umbrella.that was two years before.this past week，it snowed，and as i came out of my job，my car had been cleaned of all snow.this is proof which all acts of kindness go around and around.gmy middle school life is coming to an end.during the few years，not only did i have a happy time，and also i had kinds of problems.my bigger problem was that i used to be shy.i try many ways to solve the problem.first，i learned why to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible.then when i was in the trouble，i asked my classmates or friends for help because they were of the same age and we could understand each other easily.however，i also told my teachers and parents about my trouble and asked their help.they were full of loving and had rich experience.now，i am more outgoing than before.i can get along well with peoples around me.hmr.li，im very sorry to have missed the first two class this morning.i got up early as usually in the morning，but while i was in the way to school i found my bicycles front tyre flat.i wanted to take bus or taxi to school，and i didnt have any money with me.i had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing.unluckily，there are not any bicycle repair shops was open in the early morning.so i had to walk to school，carrying my bicycle all the way.thats because i was late for school.please dont worry about my lessons.i will make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary.ithough great progress has been made in science these years，but there are still many people lived in poor conditions.they make their living by collecting and selling used thing.their children cannot go to school because they have not enough money to send their children to there.why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? the answer lies on the population explosion.a president of a developing country once say：“it is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to produce children without limit.” although this few words sound simple enough，they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.参考答案第四部分写作专项演练课时27短文改错技法高考经典练my old classroom was interesting because three of the classroom were made glass.i enjoyed close to the windows and looking at the view.on the lefthand side of the class，i could see the football field.in the mornings，it was full of students exercising.the view from the back of the classroom also splendid.close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around.farther in the distance，i could enjoy the view of snowy mountains.on the right side of the class was the road.i was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.the position of the classroom with its view made me like i was dreaming. i was only a child when i studied in that classroom，i will never forget it.能力提升练aas students，all of us will be faced problem after the college entrance examination.should we choose a good major a good university first? here are some different ideas.some prefer to choose a major first so they can learn they are interested in.in this way they can put their hearts into study and their favorite jobs in the future. believe that the environment is important to ones and that graduates from key universities are more likely to find good jobs.as as im concerned，the best choice is a good university if we cant obtain .b one day my father went to see film after supper.but our surprise，he came back just about half an hour later.i asked him what was the matter.he smiled and told us about the funny thing had happened in the cinema.he was sitting in his seat a woman came to and said the seat was hers.，they looked at their carefully，only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different.so they looked at the tickets carefully.after a while，my father apologized to the woman，saying，“sorry，i a mistake.take this seat，please.”the fact was that his ticket found under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.cin autumn of 1935，when i was a young man，i was traveling in the north of .one evening， hunting in the forest all day，i was returning to the place i had put up my tent.it was getting dark， i was walking along a road.suddenly i saw two glaring at me from among the trees. could i do? should i jump into the river to save my life? then i to the right.in the river there a big crocodile waiting to welcome me with its mouth wide open.dthe other day i to read an eightyword passage about details.i found it good.one who wants to achieve great success should pay to details.sometimes it is the details that determine our success，for it has a great impact on what were doing.we should form the habit of being careful， a careful person rarely overlooks details.whats more，we should learn to keep balance of quantity and quality.when 或 lots of work，the faster we do ，the more mistakes we usually make.in that case we are to neglect the details.so we should remember that quality comes first，without quantity is of no importance.eat 9 oclock last night，i was doing my homework.suddenly i heard my shouting and laughing loudly.he was watching a football game tv.i couldnt go on studying and impatient.i covered my ears， to keep the noises out，but failed.，i had to go to my neighbors house.i knocked at his door and said，“good evening，mr.yang! could you please turn down your tv a bit? i am doing my homework.”“oh，i really sorry to have disturbed you.ill do you say.” my neighbor said .“ thank you very much.” i said and went back to continue study.fi was in a long line outside the college bookstore along with a group of to get my book.it started pouring down so and the worse was that it was very cold，and that everyone was wet，except few like me with an umbrella.the girl behind me was trembling.i my umbrella with her we got inside the bookstore.i felt really ，even though i had done something tiny as sharing my umbrella.that was two years .this past week，it snowed，and as i came out of my job，my car had been cleaned of all snow.this is proof all acts of kindness go around and around.gmy middle school life is coming to an end.during the few years，not only did i have a happy time， also i had kinds of problems. my problem was that i used to be shy.i many ways to solve the problem.first，i learned to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible.then when i was in trouble，i asked my classmates or friends for help because were of the same age and we could understand each other easily.，i also told my teachers and parents about my trouble and asked their help.they were full of and h