浙江省宁波市高考英语二轮复习 短文改错精炼（5）.doc

短文改错精炼（5）短文改错my brother tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.he did not want share things with other people. for 1._example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them 2._in a secret place where i couldn t find it. then he 3. _ate it all by himself. he never helped other. 4. _he said he is busy. that is, a game of 5. _tennis making him very busy. he did not care 6. _if something he did made people angry. for 7. _instance, on one night he played strong and 8. _loudly music till four oclock in the morning. but 9. _he is difference now. he often helps grandma 10._with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps hisclassmates with their lessons.答案及解析1. want 后加 to。want to do sth. 为固定搭配。2. them 改为 it。依据上下文， 前句 a chocolate cake 为可数名词单数， 后边的代词显然用 it， 而不是 them。3. where 改为 which/that 或删去 where。此为定语从句， 先行词 place在从句中作 find 的宾语， 只能用关系代词 which 或 that 或省略。4. other 改为 others 。不定代词 other 指另一个， 而 others 指另一些。5. 第一个 is 改为 was。此题考查动词的时态。6.making 改为 made。本句缺少谓语， 需要把making 改为 make 的一般过去时态。7. 此行无错。8. 删去 on。one night 前不需要任何介词。9. loudly 改为 loud。loudly 是副词， 此处修饰名词 music， 应用形容词。10. difference 改为 different。应用形容词与系动词一起构成系表结构。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。it was a foggy day. the fog was such thick that it was impossible to see far. people were trying to find their way but was lost in the fog. mr. smith had important meeting but no onecould take him there. he had to walk there but found himself lost. suddenly a stranger told to himthat he will take him there. mr. smith thanked him but they started to walk there. the fog wasgetting thick, but the stranger had no difficulty in find the way. mr. smith couldnt understand why,so he asked her, “how do you find the way in the fog?” “it is no troubles to me,” said the stranger, “i am blind.”【参考答案】6.it was a foggy day. the fog was such thick that it was impossible to see far. people were sotrying to find their way but was lost in the fog. mr. smith had important meeting but no one were an could take him there. he had to walk there but found himself lost. suddenly a stranger told to him that he will take him there. mr. smith thanked him but they started to walk there. the fog was would andgetting thick, but the stranger had no difficulty in find the way. mr. smith couldnt understand why, thicker findingso he asked her, “how do you find the way in the fog?” “it is no troubles to me,” said the stranger, “i him trouble am blind.”短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）good morning, ladies and gentlemen! id like tell you something about the holiday we have arranged it for you. for those who wants to ski, you can rent skis on the spot, and boots too. surely it is better if you have your own boots. dont forget it can get quite cold in the day, so warm clothes are must. the ski-poles are often very hot when it is sunny, so be care not to get burnet. the hotel booking for you is very comfortable, and the nights do get very cold sometimes, so be prepared. for those looking for another activities, there are lovely walks, good views and interesting birds up the hill. finally, id like to mention what we offer excellent opportunities to try delicious and unusually food.【参考答案】1.第二句：like和tell中间加to；it去掉第三句：wants改成want第五句: must 前加a第六句：care改成careful第七句：booking改成booked；and改成but第八句：another改成other第九句：what改成that; unusually 改为 unusual略短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。today i was having a pe lessons when i fell down and hurt my foot. i was in greatly pain atthat moment,but i tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. though i had difficulty walk back to my classroom, i still didnt tell anyone but even refusedthe offer of helpof my classmates. as result, the hurt in my foot became bad. now i know im wrong. we can tell others our need for help and accept his help. some day we can not help others in return. in this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.【参考答案】2.today i was having a pe lessons when i fell down and hurt my foot. i was in greatly pain at that lesson greatmoment,but i tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. though i had haddifficulty walk back to my classroom, i still didnt tell anyone but even refusedthe offer of help walking andof my classmates. as result, the hurtin my foot became bad. now i know im wrong. we a worsecan tell others our need for help and accept his help. some day we can not help others in theirreturn. in this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully. with短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。例如：it was very nice to get your invitation to spend / weekend with youluckily i was the amcompletely free then, so ill to say “yes”ill arrive in bristol at around 8 pm in friday oneveninga frenchman was once visiting londonhe wished to take a walk to see a citybut he was afraid he might get lost because he knew no words of englishso before he left his hotel, he stopped in the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street that he was stayingthen he walked onat last, h