Writing in CET-4.ppt

WritinginCET 4 What sagoodessayinCET 4 Howtogenerateideas Howtowritealogicalessay Howtowritecorrectly 四级作文评分标准 2分 条理不清 思路紊乱 语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误 且多数为严重错误 5分 基本切题 表达思想不清楚 连贯性差 有较多的严重语言错误 8分 基本切题 有些地方表达思想不够清楚 文字勉强连贯 语言错误相当多 其中有一些是严重错误 11分 切题 表达思想清楚 文字连贯 但有少量语言错误 14分 切题 表达思想清楚 文字通顺 连贯性好 基本上无语言错误 仅有个别小错 注 白卷 作文与题目毫不相关 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想 则给0分 Canyougradetheseessays Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledLimitingtheUseofPlasticBags Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow 一次性塑料袋曾广为使用由此带来的问题限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义 1 2分2 14分3 8分4 11分5 5分 HereishowtheyaregradedinCET 4 Isyourassessmentcorrect 主语缺失 1 Inourcountryfeelsveryfree 2 Inmyhometownaren tverybusy 词性混淆 非名词主语 1 Richdoesn tensureahappylife 2 Keeptwofull timejobsissimplyimpossible 多重谓语 1 Inourmodernsociety therearemanyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated 2 Povertymakesmanypeoplecan tstudyabroad 非动词谓语 1 Somepeoplefirmlyagree butothersagainstit2 Itissaidthattheplaceworthstouring 时态 性数不配合 1 IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachmeCollegeEnglish 2 Iuseadiskbecauseitholdplentyofdata 代词偷梁换柱 1 Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper youshouldnotplagiarize 2 Ifwecheatothers friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone 形容词 副词混淆 1 Whatismore thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferently 2 Surprisingenough hefacesthefailureverybravely 搭配不当 1 Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassoexpensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit 2 Crowdedtrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers 8pointsWeallhavesuchexperience afterwewenttothesupermarket wealwaysgetsomeplasticbags Eventhedisposableplasticbagspolluteourenvironment fewofuscanrefusetogetplasticbags becauseweareuseduseit Withtheflyingdevelopingofeconomic thedisposableplasticbagsaremorewideused Butourenvironmentcan tstandbytheheavypollution Thedisposableplasticbagswillexistmanyyears maybetheplasticbagswhichyoueverusedwouldstillbetherewhenyouhaveagrandson Soitnotonlyeffectourlifebutalsohurtourafterspring Sothegovernmentstartedtolimittheuseofplasticbags Thisactioniseffectivethatmanypeopleusepaperorclothingbagsinsteadofplasticbags Althoughtherearemanyplasticbagsareused Ithinkaftersomeyears wewillfeeltheadvantagethatlimitingtheuseofplasticbagsbringtous 历年四级作文题 作文常见提纲要求 2011 12Nothingsucceedswithoutastrongwill1 坚强的意志是成功的重要保证 2 意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命 3 学生也是这样 不刻苦学习 终究不会成为有用之才2011 6onlineshopping1 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2 网上购物有很多好处 但也有不少问题3 我的建议2010 12Howshouldparentshelpchildrentobeindependent 1 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2 为了让孩子独立 父母应该 2010 6DueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling1 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2 出现这种情况的原因3 为了改变这种状况 我认为 作文常见提纲要求 问题 现象原因解决办法问题 现象好处 坏处我的观点 观点举例对自身的借鉴意义 第一类 问题 现象原因解决办法 2010 6DueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling1 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2 出现这种情况的原因3 为了改变这种状况 我认为 问题 现象 Inrecentyears XXhascausedaheateddebate Nowadays thereexistsanincreasinglyserioussocial economic environmentalproblem XXhasbecomeaincreasingconcernofthepublic 注意事项 万能公式的使用简洁明了适当拓展 如举例 原因 Thereareacoupleofreasonsaccountingforthisproblem phenomenon First FirstlySecond SecondlyThird ThirdlyLastbutnotleast 解决办法 Tosolvethisproblem weneedto Besides Moreover 例文writing 四级作文样卷 2010 06四级作文 2010 06四级作文 14 JPG 第二类 问题 现象好处 坏处我的观点 2011 6onlineshopping1 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2 网上购物有很多好处 但也有不少问题3 我的建议 问题 现象 Inrecentyears XXhascausedaheateddebate Nowadays thereexistsanincreasinglyserioussocial economic environmentalproblem XXhasbecomeaincreasingconcernofthepublic 好处 坏处 Somepeopleareinfavorof Theypointoutthefactthat However otherpeoplestandonadifferentground example Onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeopleduetovariousreasons Fromtheperspectiveofconsumers itcansavetime Justwithaclickofthemouse theycangetwhatevertheywantwhilestayingathome Fortheretailers itcancutdownonthecostsofrentingahouseorpayingthestaffHowever therearestillsomedefectsaboutonlineshopping First comparedwithface to facetransaction onlineshoppingislessreliable consumersmayfindtheproductsnotasdesirableastheyhadexpected Second somepeoplemaylosethefunofbargain 我的观点 InmyopinionFrommyperspectiveAsfarasIamconcernedIagreethefirstopinion secondopinion 第三类 观点举例对自身的借鉴意义 2011 12Nothingsucceedswithoutastrongwill1 坚强的意志是成功的重要保证 2 意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命 3 学生也是这样 不刻苦学习 终究不会成为有用之才 Example NothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWill Wherethereisawill thereisway isanoldproverbwhichalmosteveryoneknows butnotallunderstanditsowell Actually itmeansthatifyouarereallyresolvedtodosomething nomatterhowdifficultitmightbe nevergiveup Infact strongwillisakindofgoodqualitywhichsuccessfulpeopleshouldown Onewillneversucceedwithoutafirmwilltogetthefinalvictory Asarule greattasksareaccomplishedbymenofstrongwill Forexample Dr SunYatsen thefounderoftheRepublicofChina settheChinesepeoplefreefromtheManchurianrulethroughalongperiodofhardstruggle Manyofhisattemptsfailedandmanyofhisfollowerswerekilled buthehadaninflexiblespiritandstucktohiscause Finally hemadetherevolutionof1911asuccess Thesameistrueofmeninallwalksoflife Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove wecanse