考研写作：图画题.doc

考研冲刺写作资料图画题考研大作文的字数要求160-220，220冲顶。我的推荐：12-15句话（P1：3-4；P2：5-6；P3：4-5）看了这么多学生的习作，发现问题最大的，也是最不知道如何控制字数的段落，是第二段：意义阐述段。问题不是写不到字数，是大大超出（当然这总比没话写好）但是语言一多就杂,一杂就让人看不清楚,最后影响分数. 与其杂乱,不如少写,就写那么几句,但是少而精!一、第一段1.总写或者描写点一2.详细挖掘或者描写点二3.自己从图画发出联想或者总结(如:Although the boy has finished his running, he does not stop.Instead, he continues to run with confidence and optimism)当然也可以用 caption当总结注意:只有图画的标题(图下面的中文字)才可以叫caption, 如果是教授站在书上，书上写着学术论文,要写为The professor is staning on a pile of books(which is ) entitledacademic paper如果是学生的话外音,要写, and we are informed by one of the students that professor, the blackboard is below!或者, one of the students shouts out that:. 如果实在只有两句, 可以把第二段由浅入深刻的句子放过来(正好第二段嫌多了),如: Simple as the picture is,its connotation should be taken into consideration with more insight. 二、第二段（一）、请务必记在心里三句话：1第二段冲顶6句话！2尽量简化你的思路，层次越少越好！能舍弃的尽量舍弃！ 想都写就是都写不了！写一句就是一句，莫名其妙的句子不要写。建议先用35分钟用中文规划好你的第二段的关键层次（见下面第三点：要有中文提纲），大胆舍弃那些不好写的和次要的，把最牛的和最好写的用最清晰的语言表达出来！ 3考研阅卷时间在一分钟内，所以看点在清晰的层次和准确的语言，精妙而深刻的构思是不可能也没有时间看到的！不需要你有过人的思路，只要把含义大概分析清楚就行。阅卷人看起来的思路就是：深意-具体现状1+为什么-具体现状2+总结，实在是很清楚。 （二）、天龙八部天龙八部综合了98-07年所有文章和无数模拟题提炼出来的8层基本含义，结构如下：1 论点 （12句）1）由浅入深：（1句）极其不推荐，凑字数明显，给某些阅卷人感觉可能不好，对方更愿意看到深层含义2）深刻含义（中心句）（1句）全段乃至全文核心，用了我的套路后肯定是长句，要求清楚点明含义，不用写难词2论据 （34句）1）象征点（13句）。但是根据KYW003的大量同学习作来看，并非一个非常好的点，写出来虽然简单，但是浪费了大量空间，后面有话写的话，可以不写2）现状描述（12句）深入点明当代社会中，这个深刻含义的体现，可以是泛泛谈“很多人。”也可以具体谈具体事例（这就变成举例了）3）原因/或者背景（1N句）为什么会有这个现象？始终是改卷者的喜欢看到的点。可以写一句，如果有两点原因，也可以写两点4）IN OTHER WORDS：FC体系中关键的一句。体现层次感，并且换个角度阐述深层含义或者你的理解。若没话说，则用xxx has/have brought about a xxxxx influence on XXX, 深刻点明这个事情的好或者坏5）举例。很多时候，如果有具体而到位的例子，这是一种重要的论证方式，尤其是抽象文章，必须具体化（如后文：有阳光的地方就有阴影）6） 层进：本来是得意之笔，但是根据KYW003来看，几乎成了字数的累赘。不过，别的不说吧。Accepted、 这四个词还是挺不错了，放哪里都很亮。3结论：必须要有（1句）。引导词：Generally speaking, 假设结尾预测结果是不错的方式好事：正反论证：如果我们没有这个好的方面，我们就会/我们就不能坏事：威胁式总结：如果我们熟视无睹，（例：这个disturbing trend 就会继续下去）综合以上对天龙八部的分析，中间冲顶6句里，除开志在必得的论点和结论外，还有4句可以写（也就是说，什么叫思路？就是写3-4句话！第一段不存在思路,第三段不存在不会写, 也就是说,整个考研写作就是写这3-4句话!）（三）、要有中文提纲推荐：动笔前花3-5分钟简单列出自己可以写的几句话, 不用象下面这么仔细, 不然10分钟都不够, 只用随便写个提示,让自己心中有数,然后取舍, 写自己最擅长的, 淘汰不好写的和没有意义的.当然并非一定要这么做.1、举例说明（坏事）:教授的职责(讲台上一堆论文,教授站在论文上,学生喊到:老师,黑板在下面)写作思路：先用中文大概列出提纲 (脑子里想,不用都写,写要点提醒自己就可以了,有个心理预期值)（1）. 深意:教授只顾自己研究，忽视学生教育（2）. 现状:在很多高校中,这样的事并不在少数,很多教授把大量时间放在论文的数量和质量上, 而把极少的时间放在了学生的身上(这其实是对1的深入挖掘和细致描述)（3）.原因: 两方面:一方面是高校评估教授时过多注意论文,另一方面是教师自己喜欢追求名誉（4）.IN OTHER WORDS: 此现象已经造成了极大危害（5）.层进:教授本职就是教书,应该被accepted.然而现在被人忽视了（6）.威胁性结尾:如果我们熟视无睹.（1）是论点, （6）是结论.（2,3,4,5）是论据.然而稍微分析下发现,字数可能偏多. 水平一般的同学可以写（2,4,5）, 水平高的人可以写（3）,分析两点或者一点原因,而放弃（4）或者（5）. 2、举例说明（好事）: 站得高，看得远1.深意:当代社会,要想成功,就必须有远大的眼光2.原因/背景现状:当代社会竞争激烈,压力很大,因此很多人选择出国留学,很多人考研,很多人努力提高自己,都是为了扩大自己的眼界3.In other words, 远大的眼光在一个人或者国家的成功过程里发挥着积极而深远的作用4.举例: 邓小平.5.层进:这样的精神要被accepted.6.结论:反面假设论证:要是一个人缺乏长远的计划和目标,只是沉迷于自己的眼前利益,就必然会失败(就很难在无情社会里取得成功)（1）是论点, （6）是结论,必写.（2,3,4,5）要懂得舍弃. 合理的组合是（1）+（2,3）+（6）, 或者（1）+（2,3,5）+（6）, 或者（1）+（2,4）+（6）, 或者（1）+（2）+自己写的话+（6）（四）、层次最清晰的写法,但是不如天龙八步Undoubtedly, the purpose of the drawing is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the issue that_. And I believe that the connotation contains two/three layers of meanings. 1.2.3.(if possible)例一:2005, 养老足球赛The purpose of the drawing is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the mistreatment of senior citizens. And I believe that the connotation contains three layers of meanings. First and foremost, some people shirk their duty of financially supporting their old and helpless parents due to their own interest. Furthermore, some elderly people are often ill-treated by their own children and can hardly lead a normal life. Last but not least, while some young people enjoy a comfortable life, their parents are neglected and reduced to utter poverty.例二:2006, 小贝头The photos clearly reveal a serious and pervasive social problem nowadays. And I believe that the connotation contains three layers of meanings. First of all, there is no denying that many youngsters want to be famous or rich overnight, therefore their focus is only on the success of the superstars, ignoring the fact that the famous people have to overcome many hardships and difficulties before they attain their success. A case in point is Beckham or Liu Xiang. Whats more, following the footsteps of superstars will waste the youngsters precious time. They are at a prime time to learn new knowledge and lay a solid foundation for their future career. Sheer adoration of stars will ruin their study and their future. Last but not least, some stars are not the ideal idols for young people, for example, the famous footballer Maradona used to abuse drugs. This, of course, has a negative effect on the development of the young people.优点自然不用说, 和六及作文差不多,十分清楚,一,二三.缺点是, 只是貌似逻辑清楚, 真正分析起来,不如天龙八部全面体现出:起承转合的精髓.在最后关头补充出来,随便看看就可以了)（五）、下面是对教育部满分或者其他范文的P2分析，看看除了论点和结论，他们写了几句范文一：2003（温室花朵）1由浅入深To begin with, the purpose of the drawings is to show us that the flower growing in the greenhouse can not withstand the test of the storm, yet the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more seriously. 2象征点展开阐述The delicate flower is naturally associated with young people, to be specific, the only children in our current society; the greenhouse epitomizes parents doting care and abundant material supplies that can shield the children from the storms, or the harsh reality.3结论：威胁式总结Once the young people begin to seek independence and accept the challenges from the real world, they are found too spoiled to be strong enough in the face of difficulties. 当然这句完全可以写为If we turn a blind eye to the disturbing trend, our young generation, the future of our society, would lose the strength to face any challenges and difficulties. 或Were the disturbing trend to continue, our young generation would pay a high price/hardly can our young generation achieve anything in the ruthless and relentless society. （虚拟+倒装）范文二：沙进我退，我进沙退（经典坏事）1.深刻含义The purpose of the pictures is to show us that due attention has to be . 2原因+现状描述Owing to rampant clear cutting, the desert is occupying our living space at an overwhelming speed.3. 继续深入描述现状（或举沙尘暴的例子）Especially，the increase of the sand storm is sounding an alarm to us humans 4In other words, this phenomenon has brought about an undeniably adverse consequence on our ecosystem.5. 结论（威胁性总结）If we do not fight against , they will drive us away from the land. if we let this situation go as it is, our environment will suffer a great destruction.范文三：2005（养老足球赛）1浅-深To begin with, the purpose of the drawing is to show us a special “football game”, yet the symbolic meanings subtly demonstrated should be taken into account more seriously. （可以省略，写别的）2深刻含义The purpose of this sketch is to show us that due attention has to be focused upon the issue of mistreating of the aged, which is an alarming and overwhelming negative social phenomenon in contemporary. 3现状+原因The past several years have witnessed the phenomenon that people in increasing numbers are reluctant to raise their aging parents, for they only intend to pursue their own comfortable and convenient life, totally ignoring their parents.4层进（注意观察）In the past, respecting the old was accepted, respected, appreciated and shared, yet, it is, to some extent, ignored and neglected in current society.5威胁性总结If we let the situation go as it is, our moral system will suffer a great destruction.在3句后，可以加In other words, 这个现象带来很XXX的影响。范文四：2006（小贝头）1深刻含义Undoubtedly, the photos have subtly reflected the social phenomenon that idol worship is prevalent among the youth nowadays. 2象征点(其实也解释了人们为什么追星的原因：人帅，球技好)Beckham represents the image of sport hero whose handsome appearance and unparalleled football skills are passionately adored by all the sports fans. 3举例Likewise, several teenage girls won their fame overnight in The 2005 Super Girl Contest in China, which provoked nationwide noisy debates on the value and harm of admiring these idols. 4总结Generally speaking, young people are inclined to adore the people who excel in appearance, intelligence or talent.范文五：2007（自信）（经典好事）1深刻含义Apparently, the purpose of the picture is to emphasize the importance of self-confidence in our daily life. 2原因On account of the quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life, imposing tremendous pressure on all individuals. 3 现状+号召（点出自信的重要性）The past few years have witnessed dramatic increase in the difficulty of examinations and employment. We must maintain powerful self-confidence and optimism in the face of challenges so as to survive and succeed.4正反Suppose we are inclined to overestimate our rivals or problems and neglect our ability, we will become hesitating and doubtful of ourselves, unable to fulfill even a simple task.6。5总结（其实可以就拿正反作总结，已经够了）Therefore, it is necessary to embrace the strong faith that we are indomitable and invincible.范文六：合理的制度（经典好事）1有浅入深The connotation subtly revealed in the drawing goes far beyond a running man.（由浅入深很简短，不要写太长了）2深刻含义 Instead, a prevalent social issue is virtually demonstrated: a growing number of people are striding into wealthy lives under the support of the government, who exerts a positive impact on the national economics. 3反面论证On the contrary, a minority of people are still struggling to their feet in the poor circumstances, and are reluctant to adopt the governments policy, which results in even worse hardship that can hardly be shaken of temporarily. 4结论Consequently, the reasonable policies are extraordinarily vital to reverse the trend of poverty.其实本段还可以写现状，原因，举例（深圳，改革），但该考试全部舍弃，最终写出一篇思路极其清晰的文章范文七：有阳光的地方就有阴影（图画：阳光下，一颗树茂盛生长，长长的阴影清晰可见）注意：这个文章图画过于抽象，对于这样的题目的处理方式，我们必须使其具体化，也就是说，必须通过联系实际，举1-2个相关例子才可以把事情论述清楚。1浅深：Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convinces us that almost every issue is a double-edged sword. 或positive development will inevitably/constantly/invariably bring about negative consequences. 2现状+原因 The past several years have witnessed the phenomenon that our economic develop