山东省郓城县高考英语二轮复习 短文改错精练（3）.doc

山东郓城县2016高考英语(二轮)短文改错精练（3）.短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 () ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( ) 划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。dear robert,thank for your letter of may 12th . how glad i was when i get it. id be very happy to be your pen friends. now allow me introduce myself to you. im a boy student aged seventeen, study in senior three of binhai high school. im a monitor of my class. i am about to take the national matriculation entrance examination after twenty days, that is, between june 7 and 8. you know. i want very much to be a doctor working for poor peasants that i try to make fully use of every hour and study far into the night every day. best wishes！ yours truly, bob【参考答案】2.dear robert,thank（改为thanks 或for 前加you） for your letter of may 12th . how glad i was when i get （改为got）it. id be very happy to be your pen friends (改为friend) .now allow (加to) me introduce myself to you. im a boy student aged seventeen, study （改为studying） in senior three of binhai high school. im a （去掉a） monitor of my class. i am about （去掉about）to take the national matriculation entrance examination after （改为in） twenty days, that is, between june 7 and 8. you know. i want very （改为so）much to be a doctor working for poor peasants that i try to make fully（改为full） use of every hour and study far into the night every day. best wishes！ yours truly, bob.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 sometimes in february, my teacher told us about the city speech contest, its topic was “people who have overcome difficulties in their lives”. i thought of my grandma would be my perfect topic. then i carefully prepared for contest. a couple of weekslater, after the first round i was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! the final washeld soon. i was the sixth to present the speech. how a relief when i finished it ! afterthe last person finished, the judge made their final decisions and announced that i have won first prize. the audience were going wildly clapping and cheering ! i was extremely happy. it was such exciting a moment that i will always remember.【参考答案】3、短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。as is known by all，the internet is playing a more and more important part on our daily lifeon the internet，we can not only read news at home or abroad but also get much information as possiblefor an example，we often send e-mails and make telephone call to our families and friendswhats more，they can go to school on the internet，read different kinds of books and even teaches ourselves englishwe can also listen to music，watching sports and play computer gameswe can even do shopping without left our houses【参考答案】4、1.短文改错文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在此处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出修改的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。ten years ago, i had worked as a night guard in a factory. on a rainy night, all the lights of factory went out all of a sudden. i rushed out and could see nothing. lucky for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. three or four minutes late, four police car arrived at the front gate. they searched for the factory carefully, tried to find something unusual. in the end, i am told that the rain had brought about the short circuit, that caused the accident.【参考答案】1.ten years ago, i had(去掉had) worked as a night guard in a factory. on a rainy night, all the lights of（the） factory went out all of a sudden. i rushed out and(but) could see nothing. lucky (luckily)for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. three or four minutes late(later), four police car(cars) arrived at the front gate. they searched for(去掉for) the factory carefully, tried(trying) to find something unusual. in the end, i am(was) told that the rain had brought aboutthe short circuit, that(which) caused the accident.短文改错文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。in modern society, competition is everywhere. no wonder a english philosopher considers competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. therefore, if we stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. in my opinion, all are important and necessary.lets take the competition at school for example. even a gifted student wont make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. thats because competition, and rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. on the other hand, if we dont cooperate with each other, its impossible for us learn from each other. and thats why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.to conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation.【参考答案】2.in modern society, competition is everywhere. no wonder a english philosopher considers ancompetition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. therefore, if weproblems howeverstress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. in my opinion, all are important and stressed bothnecessary.lets take the competition at school for example. even a gifted student wont make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. thats because competition, and orrather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. on the other hand, if we dont makingcooperate with each other, its impossible for us learn from each other. and thats why most of tothe great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.to conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the successfullyrelationship between competition and cooperation.短文改错该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。i like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. i used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctors advice, i gradually kicked the bad habit. just as an old saying going, “an apple a day keeps the doctor away”. however, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. on contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. in my