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山东郓城县2016高考英语(二轮)短文改错精练（8）短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。dear ms tailor,football is my favourite sport. when it is comes to football, i always have much to saying. last week, i quarreled with my mother about if i could play football with my classmates at weekends. my mother holds the view strong that i should devote all my spare time to study all the subjects well. in my opinion, only when i try my best to study i be able to be admitted to a university. but i really cant accept her view. as far as im concerned, playing football not only build up my strength and also makes me full of energy every day. could you give me some advices on how to persuade my mother to allow me to play football at weekends?yours jim 【参考答案】4.1. 去掉 is 2. saying-say 3. if-whether 4. strong-strongly 5. study-studying 6. my-her 7. i前加will 8. build-builds 9. and-but 10. advices-advice2015届河南省顶级名校高三入学定位考试once, a man got on a bus to new york. because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. but a passenger saw her. she tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “theres a bum in toilet. tell the bus driver.” the message was passing on from person to person. but somewhere along the way, it was changed. the bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. he immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. when the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. then they closed the highway. as a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. in the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. of course they found no tomb. 【答案】【知识点】短文改错记叙文【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。【答案解析】76.so去掉。 because为从属连词，不与并联连词so连用，故去掉so。77. herhim 前文讲述的a man，故此处用him。78. saysaid 并列的谓语动词应用同样的时态，此句前谓语动词用过去时，此处也应用过去时，故say改为said。79. toilet前加the 此处toilet是双方都明白的，故用定冠词the修饰。80.passingpassed 句中的主语message为pass的动作承受者，故passing改为passed。81. was told tell后跟双宾的及物动词，tell sb that-clause，tell后无间接宾语，故用被动语态。82.immediateimmediately。副词修饰动词stopped，故immediate改为immediately。83.orand。并列的不定式，表示肯定含义用and连接。84. milemiles 15修饰mile，故应用复数形式。85. inwith。 在某人的帮助之下with ones help或者with the help of sb。短文改错one day, i was cooking in the kitchen as76_the telephone rang. i went to answer immediately. 77_she was my close friend, lisa. when we were talking78_on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. i ran back to the79_kitchen. the room full of smoke and beef was badly80_burnt. i quickly turned off the gas, opening all the81_windows, and then went out of the house. with my82_surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. i83_was rather worried. i told about the firemen that it84_was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.85_【参考答案】76as when 77answer后加it 78she it 79a the 80 room后加was 81opening opened 82with to 83 84去掉about 85which that此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（j）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。 george,its been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._back home. thank you very much for showing them around 77._your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. after 78._we said goodbye to you, we went to washington d.c., 79._where we stayed for three days. my brother was so much fond 80._of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81_another couple of day. however, my father had to return to 82._work on monday so we fly back last saturday afternoon. it 83_was really a nice experience. if youd like to make trip to 84._our city some day, i will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._yours,mike【参考答案】76.after-since 77.them-us 78.for-with 79.正确 80.去掉much 81.staying-stay 82.day-days 83.fly-flew 84.trip前a 85.better-more(2013甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)im a senior student from china, aging seventeen. while surfing the internet, i have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in singapore. with greatly interest, id like to apply for them. im an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. i could speak english well. my written english is excellent, either. i wish to join in the activities. for one thing, im willing to introduce china to other students from all over world; for another, i expect to learn from more about other countries. in addition, id like to make friend. the chance is so precious as im really looking forward to your approval.【参考答案】：im a senior student from china, seventeen. while surfing the internet, i have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in singapore. with interest, id like to apply for . im an outgoing girl who communicating with others. i speak english well. my written english is excellent, . i wish to join in the activities. for one thing, im willing to introduce china to other students from all over world; for another, i expect to learn more about other countries. in addition, id like to make . the chance is so precious im really looking forward to your approval.短文改错i still remember my middle school life in tianjin yet . i was then 76. in a school for students from tibet . as we were all left home 77. at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . we 78. had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . however , 79. we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . we enjoyed our happy life . 80. at weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool81. or go for a picnic . we were living in a big family . we treat 82. each other as brothers and sisters . if any one of us had any83. difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out . 84. it has been five years when we graduated , but those memories85. are as sweet as ever before . 【参考答案】i still remember my middle school life in tianjin yet . i was then 76. yet in a school for students from tibet . as we were all left home 77. were at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . we 78. an had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . however , 79. ourselves we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . we enjoyed our happy life . 80. helpless at weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool81. swim or go for a picnic . we were living in a big family . we treat 82. treated each other as brothers and sisters . if any one of us had any83. difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out . 84. others it has been five years when we graduated , but those memories85. since are as sweet as ever before .短文改错此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上勾一个（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词；并也用斜线划摔。 此行缺一个词j在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的诃。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。mr hill was a chicken farmer where had hundreds of chickens76 he sold eggs and got quite a lot of money, so he lived in a very77 hot part of the country. he found his hen laid hardly any eggs78 in summer, and then he decided to put his air conditioner into79 his chicken house so that his hens would lay well all through year80 the boss of the air conditioning company came to see her one day81 he thought that he might be able to persuade him to buy for an air82 conditioner when he sawmr hills house, your wife would be more happier83 and more comfortable then ,” he said to mr-hill. but mr hill was not interesting.84 “my wife didnt lay eggs,” mr hill said 85. 【参考答案】5.76. where who 77.so but 78.hen hens 79. 80.在year前加the81.her him 82.去掉for 83.more much 或去掉more 84. interesting interested85. didnt doesnt文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。last weekend, i helped my grandparents their trip to dalian. on saturday morning, together with my grandparen