高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析（第二部分） 专题四 开放式专题练评1.doc

第二部分 2013届高考英语书面表达专题练评专题四 开放式作文练评练评一请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。in your spoken english class, your teacher shows you the following picture. you are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.讲 评该题借助一幅漫画，让学生表达自己对画面中内容的理解。在观察、理解试题的前提下，从不同角度，展开想象，表达自己的观点。一、描图仔细看图，搞清漫画所给我们的主要信息：两只乌鸦取水喝的不同方式：一只乌鸦直接通过管子喝水，而另一只则向瓶中投掷石块以抬高水面进而喝到水。在描述漫画内容时，考生要注意用自己比较熟悉的词汇、句型对画面内容进行简明、清楚地叙述。1. in the picture, there are two bottles with a little water in them. a bird is working hard to drop the stones into a bottle in order to raise the level of the water. she flies around for many times, sweating a lot, while the other bird just standing on the edge of the other bottle uses a straw to drink the water inside.2. as you can see in the picture, there are two bottles containing some water and two birds are finding ways to drink the water. one bird uses a pipe and drinks the water easily, while the other puts small stones into the water and cant have access to drinking water right now.3.as can be seen in the picture, one thirsty crow is busying himself throwing stones into a jar from its own jar with the help of a long straw.二、解(议)图解(议)图就是解读：漫画折射出什么生活现象， 给人以 什么启示。从不同角度去看，对漫画就有不同的解读。但是只要我们联系现实生活，找到与画面主旨相对应的现实素材展开联想来解读这幅漫画的意义及其寓意（即漫画折射出的生活现象以及给人们的启示）。从画面与现实的“链接”中，确定话题及立意的方向。确定好立意之后，先写出主题句，再展开议论。议论要联系实际，摆事实，讲道理。只要是逻辑合理，立意可以是多样的。比如：解读一：我们应该打破传统，创造性地去解决问题(完成任务)the message conveyed in the picture is clear. in pursuing a dream, we might focus on only the traditional way of making it come true, forgetting that there may be creative ways. as is shown in the picture, the crow using the straw gets water far earlier than the one following the traditional way of throwing stones. that is to say, some people tend to solve a problem with the same solution once it turns out to be effective, just like the crow on the right. accustomed to the conventional way, they fail to take other alternatives into consideration, let alone trying to be innovative.解读二：我们应该学会使用更高效的方法或工具去解决问题(完成任务)the picture conveys us a message that we should use more effective and easier way to achieve our goals, and we should not always use the old ways. although we can also achieve our goals by using difficult ways, like the bird puts stones into the bottle, it is a waste of time and energy. 解读三：我们应该学会使用恰当的方法去解决问题(完成任务)the picture conveys a message that we should choose the proper measure when finishing tasks. the bird dropping stones is hard-working indeed, and it is true that she can get the water in her way. however, why does she work so hard if there are straws? 解读四：我们应该学会使用不同的方法去解决问题(完成任务)when we do the same work, there are various ways. the bird using a straw gets a quick way to drink, while the other bird can also get its water when there are enough stones in the bottle. though the bird with stones may be slower in getting the drinking water, his way is still good.三、圆图所谓圆图就是结尾：要求考生结合描图、解（议）图的内容，再申主旨，力求使文章完整、有力。最终使结尾起到升华观点，画龙点睛的作用。1.to come to a conclusion, we should make full use of ways at hand with creative mind which means we are supposed to focus on approaches which are more efficient and let our brains take colors from new things. no matter how “thirsty” we are, we should always try to find a “straw” first. 2.why not make things easier just by changing an easy method? with the rapidly development of the society, we are requested to do things fast and effective, so we dont have time to waste. we should always remember to search for a more effective and easier way before we start to achieve our goals. 3.in my opinion, it is wise for us to choose the most suitable measure and make the full use of tools we can get when finishing tasks. only in this way can we do our work successfully and achieve perfection. 4.in real life, we are sometimes too stubborn and just refuse to try out other ways of doing things. we should know clearly that a lot of ways are there for us to discover. only when we accept various methods of doing things and living like the clever birds can we live an easier life. 参考答案1as can be seen in the picture, one thirsty crow is busying himself throwing stones into a jar in order to raise the water level for drinking. the other crow, however, has already started drinking from its own jar with the help of a long straw.the message conveyed in the picture is clear. in pursuing a dream, we might focus on only the traditional way of making it come true, forgetting that there may be creative ways. as indicated in the picture, the crow using the straw gets water far earlier than the one following the traditional way of throwing stones. the latter may not be able to even get any water at all before the former empties the whole jar. no matter how “thirsty” we are, we should always try to find a “straw” first.参考答案2 once it turns out to be effective, just like the crow on the right. accustomed to the conventional way, they fail to take other alternatives into consideration, let alone trying to be innovative. however, as time goes by, ideas that used to be creative may go out of date and should be replaced with fresh ones. therefore, by no means should we be confined by conventions or routines. instead, we should all learn from the crow on the left, which is more open-minded and makes the most of a “modern device”a straw. so stay creative. stay hungry for changes. only when we “think outside the box” and try out some new approaches can we keep up to date with the ever-changing world and will a new realm of possibilities open up to us. 附：学生考场作文点评as is shown in the picture, a crow has been flying back and forth, picking stones and throwing them into a half-filled jar. however, on the edge of the other jar stands another crow, drinking the water at ease with a straw, which proves to be more efficient and less time-consuming. the cartoon, directly and humorously, tries to convey that we should keep a creative and open mind at all times in our lives. as is often the case, people tend to tackle a problem with the same solution once it turns out to be effective, just like the crow on the right