山西省黎城县高考英语二轮复习 短文改错精选（6）.doc

山西黎城县2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）精选（6）短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。several days before，a few of my friend and i went on a picnic on the beach of the jialing river.it is about five miles far from the city.we arrived that place in the morning.most of us go swimming immediately.while in the water，we played an interesting game.those which were on the beach had some other activity.some of them even sang and danced happy.there were still others who were interested in nothing，except picked beautiful stones.in the evening，we returned home.how a happy day it was!答案：several days，a few of my and i went on a picnic on the beach of the jialing river. it is about five miles far from the city.we arrived that place in the morning.most of us swimming immediately.while in the water，we played an interesting game.those were on the beach had some other .some of them even sang and danced .there were still others who were interested in nothing，except beautiful stones.in the evening，we returned home. a happy day it was!短文改错。假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。obama said，“this time has to be differently.this time we cannot fail，so can we be happy simply because the price at the pump has gone down from.”obamas choices was welcomed by environmentalists whose said they showed he was serious about fighting global warming and about move toward more“green”jobs.obamas energy and environment team will also be charging with developing policies to reduce carbon emissions.he said his nomination (提名)of chu should send an signal his administration will“value science”“we will take decisions based on the facts，and we understand that facts demand brave action，”obama added.答案：obama said，“this time has to be .this time we cannot fail， can we be happy simply because the price at the pump has gone down from.”obamas choices welcomed by environmentalists said they showed he was serious about fighting global warming and about toward more“green”jobs.obamas energy and environment team will also be with developing policies to reduce carbon emissions.he said his nomination (提名)of chu should send signal his administration will“value science”“we will decisions based on the facts，and we understand that facts demand brave action，”obama added.【由陕西省西安市长安一中2014第二次模拟改编】短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。we were assigned a composition but i was in good mood for it until this morning. it is sunday today, so i had a good sleep. when i get up, i had a strong desire do something. so i set about doing the toughest thing - writing a composition. i had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind.before long i typed about 500 words. i skimmed through my work and was quitesatisfying. it should be another model composition. i stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failedsuddenly. and i forgot to save the file!【参考答案】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1. 5分，满分15分）we were assigned a composition but i was in good mood for it until this morning. no it is sunday today, so i had a good sleep. when i get up, i had a strong desire got todo something. so i set about doing the toughest thing - writing a composition. thei had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. extremely anotherbefore long i typed about 500 words. i skimmed through my work and was quitesatisfying. it should be another model composition. i stretched myself, intendsatisfied intendingto polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed butsuddenly. and i forgot to save the file!【由陕西省西北工业大学附属中学2014第六次模拟改编】短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线（_），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。dear lucy,i am very excited to learn that youre coming to xian for travel. both my parent miss you a lot. so is our friend, ruby. april is best time of the year to visit xian. there is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. there are so many places i wanted to take you to after i finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. when you come, you can stay with ourselves. my house is about three kilometers far away from xian moslem street where is full of local foods.best regards,janet【参考答案】短文改错dear lucy,i am very excited to learn that youre coming to xian for travel. both my parent miss you a lot. parentsso is our friend, ruby. april is best time of the year to visit xian. there is only a few rain and does the littlethe weather is neither too hot or too cold. there are so many places i wanted to take you to after i nor wantfinish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. when you come, you can stay with ourselves. as usmy house is about three kilometers far away from xian moslem street where is full of local whichfoods.best regards,janet【由陕西省西工大附中2014第七次适应性训练改编】短文改错。 i am angry about the behavior of dishonest in exams. im not saying that im a good student and that ive never cheated. i once write the answers on my hand for a history test but, unluckily, caught by my teacher. because she was one of my most favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry i felt at once. i thought cheat would help me keep my straight as. little i know that i was hurting not only herself but also my teacher. from this lesson i know our teachers want their students to succeed by learning with their own and do the best they can, not by cheating. 短文改错：1. dishonest-dishonesty/being dishonest 2. and that-or that 3. write-wrote 4. caught-was caught 5. drop most 6. cheat would-cheating would 7. little-little did 8. herself-myself 9. with their own-on their own 10. do the best-doing the best 【由四川省成都七中2014三诊考试改编】短文改错。下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改。每句最多有两处错误。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。dear d