2013届高考书面表达.ppt

通过高考作文分析指导写作 教学目的 aim 通过本节课的教学 使学生掌握英语书面表达的一般技巧及方法 教学重点 focus 书面表达五个步骤 书面表达注意事项 教学难点 points I 1990 2003高考书面表达题样回顾 1 从内容和体裁上分 Contentandstyle 体裁内容历年书面表达 应用文 书信 便条 对话 dialogue 通知 口头书面 请柬 invitation 记叙文 说明文 介绍 人物 事件 日记 diary 故事或经历场景 scenes 事物 objects 95 99 01 02 03 94 91 96 2000 92 98 97 2 从提示形式上分 Tips 提示形式 文字 ChineseEnglish 历年书面表达 charts 90 91 94 96 01 02 92 93 95 97 98 99 00 03 pictures 结论 从上面两表看出 高考书面表达最常见的是应用文和记叙文 所写内容都与日常生活密切相关 II 书面表达的五个步骤 Fivesteps 仔细审题 找出主题 Readthedirectionscarefully lookthroughallthewordsorpicturesgiventoyouinordertofindthemainidea 以2001年高考题为例 假设你是李华 你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担 来信询问有关情况 请根据下表提供的信息 写一封回信 谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化 change change 周末活动 减负前 周末活动 减负后 白天 上课 做作业白天 参观博物馆 学习电脑 绘画等 注意 1 词数100左右 2 开头已为你写好 生词 减轻学习负担 reducelearningload DearDick Hownicetohearfromyouagain Themainidea change 晚上 做作业晚上 看新闻 读书 看报 就寝时间 11 30就寝时间 10 30 再以2000年高考题为例 假设你是李华 在美国探亲 2000年2月8日清晨 你目击一起交通事故 警察局让你写一份材料 报告当时所见情况 请根据下列图画写出报告 注意 1 目击者应该准确报告事实 2 词数100左右 3 结尾已为你写好 Themainidea Atrafficaccident 2 认真阅读所给提示或图画 抓住所有细节 找出每幅图画或每个句子的中心词 以93年高考题为例 为了配合国际动物周活动 一家英文杂志邀请各国学生提供有关动物的故事 请根据下列六幅图画 用英语为该杂志写一篇故事 bark vi n 吠叫注意 1 故事必须包括所有图画的内容 可以适当增加细节 使故事连贯 2 词数100左右 Picture1 Picture2 Picture3 Picture4 Picture5 Picture6 gotowork takemysisterandAhFu Findoutthekeyswordsineachpicture beworking playbytheriver pickaflower fallintotheriver bark jumpintotheriver runtotheriver swim takemysister praise 3 把中心词或词组扩展成句子 Extendthewordsandphrasestosentences OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldstakingmylittlesisterandAhFualong Whiletheywereworking mysisterwalkedtoarivernearby Shewastryingtopickupaflowerwhenshefellintotheriver AhFubarkedandjumpedintotheriverimmediately WhenmyparentsheardAhFubarkingtheyrantotheriver TheysawAhFuswimmingtowardsthebankcarryingmylittlesister MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly 4 把以上句子编排成一个段落 在必要的地方加入一些连接词或句子 Arrangethesesentencesinorder gettinginsomelinkingwordswherenecessary Myparentsliveinthecountry TheykeepadogcalledAhFu OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldstakingmylittlesisterandAhFualong Whiletheywereworking mysisterwalkedtoarivernearby AhFufollowedthere Shewastryingtopickaflowerwhenshefellintotheriver AhFubarkedandjumpedintothewaterimmediately WhenmyparentsheardAhFubarking theyrantotheriver TheysawAhFuswimmingtowardsthebankcarryingmylittlesister MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly ItwasourbraveAhFuwhosavedmylittlesister 5 通读全文 仔细检查 Readthroughthewholepassagetomakesurethatnomistakesaremade III 书面表达注意事项 适当运用结构词 从句和关联词 and but so however therefore them thus afterawhile suddenly atlast asaresult infact等 使句子更为流畅 1 Youmaystayatschool Youmaycometospendtheholidaywithus Youmay stayatschool cometospendtheholidaywithus eitheror 2 Itisnottoocoldinspring Itisnottoohot either 3 Theteacherpointedoutthemistakes Thestudentshadnotcorrectedthem Itis toocold toohotinspring Theteacherpointedoutthemistakes thestudentshadnotcorrected neithernor which that 4 YoumustspeakEnglishinclass YoumustspeakEnglishoutofclass 5 Shefinishedherlessons Thenshewenttobed YoumustspeakEnglishbothinclassandoutofclass Havingfinishedherlessons shewenttobed 避免使用对其拼法 意义和用法没有把握 不熟悉的词汇和句型 避免可以避免的错误 喜欢 like befondof carefor enjoy 1 两天后他就要过生日了 Hisbirthdayistwodaysaway Hisbirthdayisintwodays Hisbirthdayisintwodays time Itwillbetwodaysbeforehecelebrateshisbirthday 2 我碰巧遇见他的叔叔 Ihappenedtomeethisuncle Ichancedtoseehisuncle Imetwithhisuncle Icameacrosshisuncle Iranacrosshisuncle It so happenedthatIsawhisuncle ItchancedthatImethisuncle 再以93年高考书面表达为例 Myparentsliveinthecountry TheykeepadogcalledAhFu OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldstakingmylittlesisterandAhFualong Whiletheywereworking mysisterwalkedtoarivernearby AhFufollowedthere Shewastryingtopickaflowerwhenshefellintotheriver AhFubarkedandjumpedintothewaterimmediately WhenmyparentsheardAhFubarking theyrantotheriver TheysawAhFuswimmingtowardsthebankcarryingmylittlesister MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly ItwasourbraveAhFuwhosavedmylittlesister TheykeepadogcalledAhFu TheyhaveadogwiththenameAhFu Theyraiseadogthat whichiscalled namedAhFu c TheykeepadogwhosenameisAhFu d TheyhaveadogwhoisnamedAhFu OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldstakingmylittlesisterandAhFualong OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldswithmylittlesisterandAhFu b OnedaymyparentswenttoworkinthefieldsandAhFufollowedthem WhenmyparentsheardAhFubarking theyrantotheriver TheysawAhFuswimmingtowardsthebankcarryingmylittlesister HearingAhFubarking myparentswenttotheriverinahurry b HavingheardAhFubarking myparentsrushedtotheriver c HavingheardAhFubarking myparentswereworriedandhurriedtotheriver TheysawAhFucarryingmylittleintherivertowardsthebank b TheysawmylittlesistercarriedbyAhFutothebank MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly MyparentspattedAhFuontheheadandpraisedhimforhisbravery b MyparentsweresogladthattheypattedAhFuontheheadandpraisedhim 3 留心汉英表达差异 避免中式英语 AvoidingChinlish 1 父母对我们期望很高 Thehopeofourparentsisveryhigh Ourparentsexpecttoomuchfromus 2 高考 highexam collegeentranceexamination 3 他的右眼瞎了 a Herrighteyeisblind 4 他健壮如牛 a Heisstronglikeacow 5 汤姆的父亲打了他一个耳光 a Tom sfatherbeathiminhisface b Sheisblindintherighteye b Heisstronglikeahorse asstrongasahorse b Tom sfatherbeathimintheface 4 书写必须工整 确保不犯拼写错误 Avoidingmistakes parents peasant present sun son attack attract blood flood flood floor IV Homework 5月3日 你参观了一个农场 请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记 注意 1 日记必须包括所有图画的内容 可以适当增减细节 使日记连贯 2 词数100左右 Onepossibleversion May3SundayFineTodaywevisitedafarm Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether Thefarmworkersgaveusawarmwelcome Th