广东省揭阳市高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（9）.doc

揭阳市2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（9）附参考范文 (201*石家庄质检)i am a very active girl in my class. i have many hobby，1._such as writing stories, playing piano and singing english2._songs. my most favorite subject is english. i became3._interested in it when i was very young. my dream is 4._to study abroad. but now i need to improve my english5._and learn more about west culture as well. i will be6._able to improving the friendship between china and7._the rest of the world. i hoped my dream will come true.8._and i believe in nobody can change my mind. i will work9._harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens！10._答案与解析：1hobbyhobbiesmany后接复数名词，下文such as后列举的内容也是提示。2piano前加theplay the piano表示“弹钢琴”，是固定搭配。西洋乐器类名词前常用定冠词the。3去掉mostfavorite本身就是“最喜爱的”，因此原句语义重复。45butso前后逻辑上是因果而不是转折关系。6westwestern依据语境这里表示“西方文化”，应用形容词western作定语。7improvingimprovebe able to do sth.表示“能够做某事”。8hopedhope这里表示说话人现在的愿望，故应用一般现在时。9去掉ini believe that.我相信。believe in表示“信任，信仰”，其后不能接从句。10howwhatno matter what happens无论发生什么，what充当从句的主语。*结束 作文（*） 今年5月31日是第21个世界无烟日，英文21世纪报计划举办一次征艾比赛，主题是青少年吸烟问题。请根据以下提示写一篇短文参赛： 1绝大部分青少年吸烟者认为暖姻蓝禧粳酷，氆禾套马上对身体产生危害，只要在危害到来之前戒掉就是了。 2请你驳斥这种观点，应包含以下信息：吸烟浪费金钱，浑身气味，牙齿肮脏，上瘾会致癌，患心、肺疾病；冒丧命之险追求时髦没有益处；戒烟要抓紧时间。 3提出一些帮助人们戒烟的建议(至少60词)。 注意：词数120150，文章标题已绘出，不计入总词数。smoking is not cool and quit now _one possible version：smoking is not cool and quit now most young smokers say smoking is cool and doesnt hurt us fight nowpeople can just stop before it gets dangerous but in my opinion，smoking is not cool at allin addition to the waste of money，smoking makes you smell bad and makes your teeth dirtybeing addicted to cigarettes will poison your bedy with cancer causing byproductsdying of lung and heart disease or cancer wont promote your popularitydont quit until its too late-smoking begins to damage your body the moment you start to quit you should first set a date and quit completely on that daythen find out the times you are most likely to smoke and make a plan about what youll do instead of smoking at those timesfor example，take a walk when feeling stressedtake exercise to resist the desire to smokelet your friends give you a help reminding you if necessary*结束作文（*） 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友peter想和家人来中国定居，请你帮他在city a和city b两座城市中做出选择。下面的图表是对这两座城市在就业、安全、娱乐和气候等方面的对比。图标左边的数字表明人们对这两座城市的喜爱程度。请根据图表提供的信息，给peter写一封信，提出你的建议并说明理由。 2可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯。3信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。dear peter， im so glad to learn that you and your family are coming to settle down in china_ nevertheless，this is only my suggestion and its up to you to decidehope to hear from you again yours， li huaone possible version： may l7,20* dear peter, im so glad to learn that you and your family are coming to settle down in chinaafter a careful study of the information about the two cities，i suggest you choose to live in city afirst of all，the climate in city a is more pleasant than that in city bas we all know，good climate will benefit our healthbesidesthere are many places for entertainment where you can enjoy yourselves in your spare timeafter all，both cities are almost equally favorable in safetyas for the employment，though the job opportunities are not so good as those in city b，yet i dont think its a problem for you as a teacher of englishif i should choose，i would live in city a nevertheless,this is only my suggestion and its up to you to decidehope to hear from you again yours,li hua *结束(201*成都检测)my father and i am taking a camping trip in july1._and august. we will travel for about two months but2._will tour the united states and parts of the canada. we3._have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4._as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. i5._think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6._we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7._and as few camping things as possibly. we will take some8._medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9._some food for picnics. im sure that we will have fun.10._答案与解析：1amare本句的主句是my father and i，所以谓语动词用复数形式。2butand此处表示的是顺承关系，而不是转折关系。3删去第二个the一般情况下，表示国家的单个词语前不加冠词。4spendcost本句的主语不是人，而是it，所以用cost。5hadhave短文全篇叙述的都是现在和将来的情况。6whatthat/which或删去what“that/which we are going to drive”是定语从句，修饰先行词the car，关系代词在从句中作宾语，可以省略。7themus根据文章的开头部分可知这里指的是作者本人和作者的父亲，因此应用us。8possiblypossibleas.as possible表示“尽可能”。9prevent前加to此处是不定式短语作目的状语。10*结束作文（*） 最近你校对中学生消费情况进行了调查；请根据调查表提供的信息写一篇英语短文，简要介绍调查结果并谈谈你对中学生消费的看法。字数：120-150左右。_参考答案： one possible version： as can be seen from the diagram above，nowadays middle school students spend most of their pocket money on snacks，clothes，things for entertainment and social communicationhowever，they seldom buy learning resourcesfurthermore,some of them are free to buy whatever they like without considering the income of their family and their needs in my opinion，its wrong of us students to consume blindlysuch as following the fashion，pursuing famous brands of clothes,as we know，once seeking material comforts，we will lose the motivation of learningtherefore，we should spend our pocket money on what we really needalso，we should acquire a scientific outlook of consumption and focus on studywhats more，its essential for us to develop a good habit of saving money*结束(201*河南五校联考)after i finished the school this year, i began to1._look for work. now several month later, i still hadnt 2._found the job that i was interested. last sunday morning，3._i received a phone call from a man calling him mr. smith.4._he said to me on the phone, “i hear you do very well in your5._studies. i may provide a job for you.” i entered 6._his office with a beaten