医药论文英文摘要中的常见错误与评改.doc

医药论文英文摘要中的常见错误与评改医药论文英文摘要中的常见错误与评改关键词医药论文英文摘要1、医药科技工作者撰写医药论文时一般要求附英文摘要，英文摘要写得准确与否，很大程度上体现了作者的学术水平，也与论文的影响力有很大关系。我们有幸从医药导报杂志社获取了相当数量论文的英文摘要原稿。该刊特邀英文校译同华中科技大学同济医学院冯新为教授，年逾九旬仍伏案笔耕，为这些稿件做了大量细致深入的校译工作，可谓句句汗水字字珠玑。给医药科技论文英文摘要的写作提供了一个范本，对广大医药科技工作者来说也是一次极其珍贵的学习机会。本刊特辑录刊载其原文及冯教授所作修正、点评，以飨读者。2、编制体例：本文按照原文、修正、点评次序编写；修改、插入处以黑体斜体，删节处附括号说明，如有点评附上标数字注明。1、原文：DeterminationofGallicAcidinZhixuetingLiquidsbyTLCScanningZHOUQun1,XULa-ying2(1.DepartmentofPharmacology,TongjiMedicalCollege,HuazhongUniversityofScienceandTechnology,Wuhan430030,China;2.TheFacultyofPharmacy,HubeiCollegeofTraditionalChineseMedicine,Wuhan430061,China)ABSTRACTObjective:TodeterminethecontentofgallicacidinZhixuetingliquids.Methods:Zhixuetingliquidsweredissolvedbydistilledwater,andthenextractedintothesamplewithbutanaletc.ThesamplesweredeterminatedbyTLCscanning(S=280nm,R=350nm).Result:Theaveragerecoveryratewas96.36%andRSD=2.39%.Thecontentsofgallicacidin3fivebatchesofsampleswere0.38,0.42and0.47mg/ml.Conclusion:Themethodissimple,convenientandavailable.KEYWORDSTLCScanning;Zhixuetingliquids;Determination;Gallicacid修正：DeterminationofGallicAcidinChuxueting1oralLiquidsbyTLCScanningZHOUQun1,XULa-ying2(1.SchoolofPharmacy2,TongjiMedicalCollege,HuazhongUniversityofScienceandTechnology,Wuhan430030,China;2.TheFacultyofPharmacy,HubeiCollegeofTraditionalChineseMedicine,Wuhan430061,China)AbstractObjective:TodeterminethecontentofgallicacidinChuxuetingoralLiquids.Methods:TheChuxuetingoralLiquidwasdissolvedindistilledwater,andthenextracted（intothesample删去）withwater-saturaledn-butanol3etc.forthepreparationofsamples.ThesamplesweresubjectedtogallicaciddeterminationbyTLCscanning(S=280nm,R=350nm).Results:Theaveragerateofrecoverywas96.36%,（and删去）RSD=2.39%.Thecontentsofgallicacidin3（five删去）batchesofsampleswere0.38,0.42and0.47mg/mlrespectively.Conclusion:Themethodissimple,convenientandfeasible.KEYWORDSTLCScanning;ChuxuetingoralLiquids;Determination;Gallicacid点评：1、zhixueting应为“止血停”而非“出血停”，自相矛盾。“出血停”也可译为hemorrhage-stopping，以方便国外读者理解。2、school可作“（大学里的）院”解，原意是“药学院”，而非“药理教研室”，故改之。3、斜体n表示“正”。 2、原文：ContentDeterminationofEmodininQingreMingmuCapsulesLUOMing-zhu1,ZHANGHong2(1.HubeiProviceInstituteofDrugControl,Wuhan430030,China;2.The75310MedicalTeamoftheArmy)ABSTRACTObjectives:TodeterminationcontentofEmodininQingreMingmuCapsules.Methods:Tlcswasused,silicagelTlcplate,developingsolventwasBenzene-Ethylfermate-formicacid-Methanol-water(3:1:0.05:0.1:0.5)ofwhichtheuppersolutionS=435nm,R=530nm.Result:Thelinearrelationshipofsampleapplicationwhichrangedbetween0.168-3.09gwasgood.Theregressionequationwasbelow:Y=105417.7X-1115.6,r=0.9995;areragerecoverywas100.53%,RSD=3.38%.Conclusion:Thismethodissimple,accurateandconvenient.KEYWORDSTLcs;QingremingmuCcapsules;Emodin修正：DeterminationofEmodinContentinQingremingmu1CapsulesLUOMing-zhu1,ZHANGHong2(1.HubeiProvicialInstituteofDrugControl,Wuhan430030,China;2.The75310MedicalTeamoftheArmy)ABSTRACTObjective:Tosetupamethodforthedetermination（content删去）ofEmodincontentinQingreMingmuCapsules.Methods:IntheTLCassay,a0.5%canboxymethylcellulosesodium(wasused删去)silicagelGplateandadevelopingsolventwithamixtureofbenzeneethylformateformicacidmethanolwater(3:1:0.05:0.1:0.5)astheuppersolutionwereused.S=435nm,R=530nm.Results:Agoodlinearrelationshipwasfoundwhenthesampleamount(which删去)rangedbetween0.168-3.09g（wasgood删去）.Theregressionequationwasasfollows:Y=105417.7X-1115.6,r=0.9995.Theaveragerateofrecoverywas100.53%,RSD=3.38%.Conclusion:Themethodissimple,convenientandaccurate.KEYWORDSTLC;QingreMingmuCcapsules;Emodin点评：1、中成药名用斜体书写，也可译作removingpathogenicheattoimproveacuityofvision。3、原文：ResearchonTheAcuteToxicityofHuningCapsuleXINZhi-wei,ZANGZhi-he,MAIXiao-xia,FENGJun,YANGWan-qing,LIAOHong-li(TeachingandResearchSectionofPharmacy,TheThirdMedicalUniversity,ChengduCollegeofPLA610081,China)ABSTRACTObjective:ToobserveandtesttheacutetoxicityofHuningCapsuleonKunmingmiceafterani.g.Methods:Countthedeathcasesofmicein7daysafterthei.g.andworkouttheLD50ofHuningCapsule.Results:TheLD50ofHuningCapsuleonmiceis3981mg/kg.KEYWORDSHuningCapsule;AcuteToxicity;LD50修正：AnExperimentalStudyoftheAcuteToxicityofHuningCapsules1XINZhi-wei,ZANGZhi-he,MAIXiao-xia,FENGJun,YANGWan-qing,LIAOHong-li(TeachingandResearchSectionofPharmacy,ChengduMilitaryMedicalCollege,TheThirdMilitaryMedicalUniversity,Chengdu610081,China)ABSTRACTObjective:ToobserveanddeterminetheacutetoxicityofHuningcapsules(onKunmingmice删去)afterasingleintragastricadministrationinthemouse.Methods:50Kunmingmicewererandomlydividedinto5equalgroups,with10animalsineachgroup.Asingledoseof7500,5630,4200,3150and2360mg/kg-1ofthecontentofthecapsuleswereadministenedthroughagastrictubetoeachofthemiceofthe5groups,respectively.Thenumbersofthedeathsofthemicewithin7dayswerenoteddownandthemediarletherdose(LD50)ofHuningCapsuleswascalculated.(Countthedeathcasesofmicein7daysafterthei.g.andworkouttheLD50ofHuningCapsule.删去)Results:TheLD50ofHuningCapsuleinmicew