高三英语二轮精品卷写作与翻译（1）.doc

2014届高三英语二轮精品卷：写作与翻译（1）i. translation (22分）directions: translate the following sentences into english. you are required to use word given in the bracket for each respective sentence. 我想知道你是否能给我一些出国留学的建议。（advice） 教师应更专注地倾听学生，以便更好的满足他们的需求。（meet） 我们有充分的理由相信，自行车永远不会在我国被取代。（replace) 即使我无法衡量我多擅长某事，我也会养成一些好习惯，以充分发挥自己的潜能。 （realize） 只有现在采取有效的措施来解决这个问题，我们才能防止不久的未来真正的水资源短缺。（only）ii. guided writing （25分）direction: write an english composition in 120-150 words. the composition must be based on the information given below. 近来我国多地雾霭天气不断增多，极大地影响的人们的健康与生活。请你用英语写一遍文章，向某英语社投稿，发表自己的观点。你的文章必须满足一下要求：1. 实况描述2. 对生活造成的影响3.分析雾霭形成的原因4. 提出治理雾霭的建议参考词汇： 雾霭天气 the hazy weather; 空气质量指数 the air quality index参考答案 translation1、i would like to know whether you can give me some advice on studying abroad2、teachers should listen to their students more attentively so that they can meet their needs better3、we have good reason to believe that bicycles will never be replaced completely in our country4、even though i am unable to measure how good i am at something, i can develop habits to realize my potential fully/to the full5、only if we take effective steps/measures to deal with /solve this problem now can we prevent a real water shortage in the near future.中译英评分标准1、1-3题，每题4分。第4-5题每题5分2、在每题中，单词拼写、标点符号、大小写累计每两处扣1分；3、语法错误没出扣1分。每句同类语法错误不重复扣分4、译文没有用所给词扣一分writing作文评分标准1、本题总分为25分，其中内容10分，语言10分，组织结构5分；2、评分时应注意的主要方面：内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性3、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后对照响应的组织结构档次给予加分。其中，内容和语言两部分相加，的15分以上者，组织结构部分可考虑假4-5分，15分以下者，只能考虑加0,1,2,3,分4、各档次给分要求档次内容语言组织结构a9-109-104-5b7-87-83-4第二节书面表达(满分25分)假如你是李华，某天在网上看到英国高中生亚瑟登出启事。他希望结识一位中国朋友， 以便学习中国的语言和文化。请你用英语给亚瑟发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：1你了解了亚瑟的愿望；2你愿意与他交朋友；3你打算如何帮助他：4你盼望他的回复。注意：1.词数100左右。电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好， 但不计入总词数。2可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。dear arthur, ive learned from the internet _yours, li hua【答案解析】【参考范文】-书面表达dear_arthur,_ive_learned_from_the_internet that you want to make a chinese friend so that you can learn the chinese language and culture and get to know more about china.im also a student of senior three and i think i can help you.im glad that you are so interested in china and id like to be your good friend.ill do my best to tell you more about chinese culture by writing or chatting on the internet as often as possible.i hope you will come to china in the near future.if so, i am going to teach you how to study chinese and show you around some wellknown places of inter