河南省郑州市高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（11）.doc

郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（11）附参考范文 【西南师大附中】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：请在答题卡上作答。i have been planning to join in our college basketball team 76. _next year, so now i am spending as more time as i can 77. _with other people who likes to play. they are teaching 78. _me the most important rules and technique of the game, 79. _and i was getting better all the time. we have a 80. _neighborhood team where plays against other teams in the area. 81. _one of my neighbors is helping rest of us 82. _improved our skills. tonight we are playing against 83. _one of the best teams in the city, i think we can 84. _beat them if we wont make any mistakes. 85. _*结束书面表达的要求是切中题意,语言准确,条理清楚。写作既可以体现词汇、句型、语法等的掌握情况,又可以体现一个人的逻辑思维。因此,写好一篇短文是件不容易的事。高考命题逐渐向开放式的作文过渡,开放式的作文更有利于考生发挥自己的水平,其难度也相应提高了。因此,对于开放式的作文,只要短文写得流畅,表达得清楚,体裁正确,逻辑合理,就应视为是一篇好作文。请参考下面一篇书面表达:写作要求:出国留学已成为一种潮流,请你就此问题谈一谈自己的观点,简要论述留学的利与弊。词数为100左右。范文如下:nowadays going abroad to study is very popular. even some primary school students, whose families are well off, are studying abroad, let alone university students and postgraduates. studying abroad can widen ones view and help learn about the cultures of foreign countries. of course, its a good way to learn foreign languages. but studying abroad is not suitable for everyone because of the high cost and fees. if a students family cant support him and he has to struggle in a foreign country for a living not for his studies, i think he neednt go abroad. he can study well in china and he will be able to become successful.so going abroad to study is one way, but not the only way, to ones education and success.点评:本文从出国热入手,写出了作者对出国留学的看法,有利的一面是开阔视野,学习外国的文化和语言;不利的一面是费用太高,并非适合所有学生。作者巧妙地陈述了对留学的赞同和反对,并以结尾句点出了出国留学对于一个人的教育与成功并非是唯一的出路。在写本篇作文时,在表达上应当注意以下几点:1.由于高考作文一般要求写一篇100词左右的作文,篇幅不易太长,不能随意发挥。题材广泛,但不能失去控制。2.在写作中要尽力避免使用一些生词,如:潮流(trend)。遇到需要的词汇而不会表达时,换种说法表达即可。因此,上文的第一句nowadays going abroad for studies is very popular.就是一个很好的转换表达。3.对于这个题目,短文中应当有留学的利与弊两方面的内容,不要只论述单方面的内容。4.学会使用一些连接词以及一些过渡性的词汇,使行文自然、流畅。如范文中的nowadays, even, but, of course, if, so, i think等。5.注意文章的开头与结尾句。第一句的作用是引出下文,而结尾句是画龙点睛。*结束短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）。并在其下面写出修改后的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。修改：在错的词后划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。 im a middle school student name li ming. im writing to tell you something. recently inoticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school. i went there too in the other day. i was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat. some students were even talking about love affairs online. on my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful informations. the internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games. the internet is good if we make good use of it. otherwise, it will give us great harm. so the local government should take measure to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively.参考答案im a middle school student name li ming. im writing to tell you something. 1namedrecently i noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school. i went there too in the other day. i was surprising to see many students 2,去掉in 3.surprised playing computer games, watching films or chat. some students were even 4chattingtalking about love affairs online.5.in on my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful 5.in 6.whereinformations. the internet should be a window to the outside world rather than 7 informationplace for games. the internet is good if we make good use of it. otherwise, it 8 a placewill give us great harm. so the local government should take measure to make 9do 10 measuressure that students use cyber cafes positively.*结束(4)(25 min.)(2011沈阳市高三质量检测三改编)假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论大学生开网店的问题。以下是你所在班级的讨论情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。赞成反对1. 大学生时间充裕，具有丰富的网购经验；2. 大学生思想活跃，了解时尚需求。1. 大学生开网店浪费时间，会耽误学业；2. 大学生缺乏经商经验，容易失败。你的观点注意：1词数不少于120；2不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；3开头已给出，不计入总词数。dear editor， recently, our class have had a heated discussion on whether college students should run online shops._参考范文one possible version：recently, our class have had a heated discussion on whether college students should run online shops.some students think that college students have not only enough spare time but also rich experience in online shopping. besides, they know the trend of fashion very well, which is helpful for their jobs in the future. others, however, hold the opposite view that running online shops will waste a lot of time, which can definitely affect their studies. whats more, it is easier for them to fail in the business owing to the lack of experience. as a result, the failure will have a lasting influence on them. in my opinion, college students should focus on studies first. after all, running an online shop requires much time and energy. college students should devote most of their time to studying instead of making money. yours truly，li hua*结束高考英语书面表达讲义：教育校园话题作文例2：假设你叫李华，你将作为高三毕业生代表，根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用英文作一简短的告别演讲：1、对三年高中生活的怀念;2、对老师的感谢;3、对母校的祝福。my teachers and fellow students,in a couple of weeks, well say goodbye to our mother school. how time flies! now its really hard for me to put my feelings into words. the past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys, full of laughter and tears.to make the journey safe and fruitful, our great teachers contributed their time, energy, love and the whole heart. here, we are extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers, have done for us.itll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly. but it is not the end. it just means that were going to begin a new journey.finally, on behalf of all the graduates present here, let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers. thank you!*结束5. 以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道基本信息：书名：battle hymn of the tiger mother作者：amy chua，美籍华人，耶鲁*大学教授出版时间：2010年内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论相关报道：中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛*和耶鲁录取*耶鲁：yale 哈佛：harvard写作内容根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：1.图书的基本信息2.图书的相关报道写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯【参考范文】5. a book battle hymn of the tiger mother, whose writer amy chua is a chinese american and professor in yale university, was published in 2010. in it, the writer described how she brought up her tow daughters in traditional chinese ways. the publication of the book caused heated discussion about which educational method is better-the chinese one or the american one. the chinese version of the book began to be sold in china at the beginning of 2011. although the majority of chinese mothers disapproved of what the writer did, the latest news revealed that the 17-year-old elder daughter was already admitted to harvard university and yale university respectively. *结束2.最近，经常有新闻报道发生在青少年身上的交通事故，其场面令人触目惊心。因此，你们班同学对于青少年交通事故的原因及后果进行了一次讨论。请你根据以下内容提示，给某英语报社写一封信，描述讨论结果并针对如何减少该类型交通事故的发生提出你的建议。原因司机精力不集中，超速行驶酒后驾车青少年不遵守交通规则边走边看书、听音乐后果青少年轻者耽误学业，重者丧失生命让父母十分担心建议（自由发挥，至少两点）注意：1.词数：130-170 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】2.dear editor, im writing to tell you about a discussion our classmates had about the causes and effects of traffic accidents involving teenagers. there is no doubt that both drivers and teenagers are to blame for such traffic accidents. on the one hand, drivers fail to concentrate on their driving or drive above the speed limit. some drivers even drive after consuming alcohol. on the other hand, teenagers often disobey traffic rules, such as ignoring traffic lights. also, many teenagers read books or listen to music while walking, which causes traffic accidents. some teenagers lose their lives and some are badly hurt and need treatment, which cost them plenty of study time due to traffic accidents. this causes parents to worry. therefore, in order to reduce traffic accidents, i think the government should force drivers to be more responsible when driving. furthermore, drivers who break traffic rules should be seriously published. at the same time, teenagers should learn more about road safety and always follow the traffic rules. *结束【重庆八中】 第一节 短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分) 以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：请在答题卡上作答。anita mei was very famous pop singer in hong kong. together76._with her mother, she began to perform in the age of four. in the 77._early 1980s, she took part in a local sing competition and won the78._first prize. the song “bad girl” made she famous. the following 79._years saw anita make many records. some of her song were very80._popular. she was always ready to help others, but she made a lot81._of good friends. when sars hits hong kong , she organized82._several concerts with others pop stars, calling on hong kong83._people to bravely face the disease. sad, anita died of cancer84._in 2003. the lady that whom was brave and beautiful will always be remembered by people.85._anita mei was very famous pop singer in hong kong. together 76. a_with her mother, she began to perform in the age of four. in the 77. at _early 1980s, she took part in a local sing competition and won the 78. singing _first prize. the song “bad girl” made she famous. the following 79. her _years saw anita make many records. some of her song were very 80. songs popular. she was always ready to help others, but she made a lot 81. and/so_of good friends. when sars hits hong kong , she organized 82. hit_several concerts with others pop stars, calling on hong kong 83.other _people to bravey face the disease. sad, anita died of cancer 84. sadly _in 2003. the lady that whom was brave and beautiful will always 85. whom be remembered by people.*结束高考英语书面表达讲义：议论文写作6. my opinion on cheating in examinations(我对考试作弊的看法) 整理目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“my opinion on cheating in examinations”。请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：主要原因考试偏多、偏难不用功、懒惰取悦父母、老师个人看法作弊不对，违反校